八、写作(20分)
假如你是 Maria,请根据表格提示内容,以“My Pen Pals”为题写一篇词数为60 左右的短文,介绍你的笔友 Jim 和 Mary。
NameWhere to liveWhat's he/ she doing?The weather
JimMoscow图1Reading a bookRainy
MaryLondonPlaying volleyballSunny
假如你是 Maria,请根据表格提示内容,以“My Pen Pals”为题写一篇词数为60 左右的短文,介绍你的笔友 Jim 和 Mary。
NameWhere to liveWhat's he/ she doing?The weather
JimMoscow图1Reading a bookRainy
MaryLondonPlaying volleyballSunny
答案
One possible version:
My Pen Pals
Hey! My name is Maria. I have two pen pals. Their names are Jim and Mary. Jim lives in Moscow. Today the weather is rainy in Moscow. He is reading a book at home. Mary lives in London. The weather is sunny there. She is playing volleyball with her friends.
My Pen Pals
Hey! My name is Maria. I have two pen pals. Their names are Jim and Mary. Jim lives in Moscow. Today the weather is rainy in Moscow. He is reading a book at home. Mary lives in London. The weather is sunny there. She is playing volleyball with her friends.
解析
【分析】
本题为提示性英语写作,要求以Maria的身份介绍两位笔友Jim和Mary。解题思路:1. 开头点明身份并引出自己的两位笔友;2. 分别对应表格信息,介绍Jim的居住城市、当地天气及正在做的事;3. 介绍Mary的居住城市、当地天气及正在做的事;4. 控制词数约60,语句通顺,正确运用现在进行时描述动作。
【解析】
结合表格提示信息,先自我介绍引出笔友,再分别描述两位笔友的相关情况,注意时态和语句连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Pen Pals
Hey! My name is Maria. I have two pen pals. Their names are Jim and Mary. Jim lives in Moscow. Today the weather is rainy in Moscow. He is reading a book at home. Mary lives in London. The weather is sunny there. She is playing volleyball with her friends.
【知识点】
英语写作、现在进行时
【点评】
本文紧扣表格提示信息,结构清晰,语言简洁,正确运用现在进行时描述人物正在进行的动作,符合题目要求,是一篇合格的提示性短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为提示性英语写作,要求以Maria的身份介绍两位笔友Jim和Mary。解题思路:1. 开头点明身份并引出自己的两位笔友;2. 分别对应表格信息,介绍Jim的居住城市、当地天气及正在做的事;3. 介绍Mary的居住城市、当地天气及正在做的事;4. 控制词数约60,语句通顺,正确运用现在进行时描述动作。
【解析】
结合表格提示信息,先自我介绍引出笔友,再分别描述两位笔友的相关情况,注意时态和语句连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Pen Pals
Hey! My name is Maria. I have two pen pals. Their names are Jim and Mary. Jim lives in Moscow. Today the weather is rainy in Moscow. He is reading a book at home. Mary lives in London. The weather is sunny there. She is playing volleyball with her friends.
【知识点】
英语写作、现在进行时
【点评】
本文紧扣表格提示信息,结构清晰,语言简洁,正确运用现在进行时描述人物正在进行的动作,符合题目要求,是一篇合格的提示性短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
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