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七、书面表达(满分35分)
A)句子翻译(每小题2分,满分10分)
71. 俗话说得好:"入乡随俗。"
72. 不要忘记在公共场合说话要压低声音。
73. 我的邻居们太体贴了,不会在晚上大声说话。
74. 如果你已经答应了和别人见面,让对方等太久是不礼貌的。
75. 如果你想在晚宴聚会上礼貌地表现,遵循餐桌礼仪准没错。
A)句子翻译(每小题2分,满分10分)
71. 俗话说得好:"入乡随俗。"
As the saying goes, “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.”
72. 不要忘记在公共场合说话要压低声音。
Don't forget to keep your voice down in public.
73. 我的邻居们太体贴了,不会在晚上大声说话。
My neighbours are too thoughtful to speak loudly at night.
74. 如果你已经答应了和别人见面,让对方等太久是不礼貌的。
It's impolite to keep others waiting for a long time if you have already agreed to meet them.
75. 如果你想在晚宴聚会上礼貌地表现,遵循餐桌礼仪准没错。
If you want to behave politely at a dinner party, you can't go wrong with following the table manners.
答案
七、书面表达
A)句子翻译
71. As the saying goes, “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.”
72. Don't forget to keep your voice down in public.
73. My neighbours are too thoughtful to speak loudly at night.
74. It's impolite to keep others waiting for a long time if you have already agreed to meet them.
75. If you want to behave politely at a dinner party, you can't go wrong with following the table manners.
A)句子翻译
71. As the saying goes, “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.”
72. Don't forget to keep your voice down in public.
73. My neighbours are too thoughtful to speak loudly at night.
74. It's impolite to keep others waiting for a long time if you have already agreed to meet them.
75. If you want to behave politely at a dinner party, you can't go wrong with following the table manners.
解析
【分析】
做这类汉译英句子翻译题，首先梳理中文句子的语义和句式特征：遇到约定俗成的谚语优先使用英语对应的标准固定译法，不要逐字硬译；之后判断句子的句型类型，匹配对应的英语常用句型；再调用平时积累的对应短语搭配把各部分组合起来，最后通读检查语法是否正确、表达是否地道，避免出现中式英语的问题。
【解析】
71. 固定表达“俗话说得好”译为As the saying goes，经典谚语“入乡随俗”的标准英语译法为"When in Rome, do as the Romans do."，组合后得到正确句子。
72. 本句为否定祈使句，用Don't开头，“忘记做某事”用固定搭配forget to do sth，“压低声音”是固定短语keep your voice down，“在公共场合”是短语in public，拼接后符合语义和祈使句规则。
73. 本句考察too...to...（太…而不能…）的经典句型，主语为My neighbours，“体贴的”译为thoughtful，“大声说话”译为speak loudly，“在晚上”译为at night，套入句型即可得到正确表达。
74. 本句使用it作形式主语的高频句型It's + 形容词 + to do sth，“不礼貌的”译为impolite，“让别人等很久”用keep others waiting for a long time，条件状语从句“你已经答应和别人见面”用现在完成时表达为if you have already agreed to meet them，组合后逻辑通顺语法正确。
75. 本句为if引导的条件状语从句，“想礼貌地表现”译为want to behave politely，“在晚宴聚会上”译为at a dinner party，“做某事准没错”的地道表达为can't go wrong with doing sth，“遵循餐桌礼仪”译为follow the table manners，拼接后得到符合英语表达习惯的句子。
【答案】
71. As the saying goes, “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.”
72. Don't forget to keep your voice down in public.
73. My neighbours are too thoughtful to speak loudly at night.
74. It's impolite to keep others waiting for a long time if you have already agreed to meet them.
75. If you want to behave politely at a dinner party, you can't go wrong with following the table manners.
【知识点】
英语谚语积累；常用固定句型；条件状语从句
【点评】
本题全部围绕日常礼仪相关的表达展开，属于初中英语核心考点，覆盖了祈使句、too...to结构、it形式主语等高频句型，也考察了学生对地道英语短语、经典谚语的积累程度，提醒学生翻译时要避免逐字翻译的中式英语问题，平时多积累单元核心短语和固定表达。
【难度系数】
0.7
做这类汉译英句子翻译题，首先梳理中文句子的语义和句式特征：遇到约定俗成的谚语优先使用英语对应的标准固定译法，不要逐字硬译；之后判断句子的句型类型，匹配对应的英语常用句型；再调用平时积累的对应短语搭配把各部分组合起来，最后通读检查语法是否正确、表达是否地道，避免出现中式英语的问题。
【解析】
71. 固定表达“俗话说得好”译为As the saying goes，经典谚语“入乡随俗”的标准英语译法为"When in Rome, do as the Romans do."，组合后得到正确句子。
72. 本句为否定祈使句，用Don't开头，“忘记做某事”用固定搭配forget to do sth，“压低声音”是固定短语keep your voice down，“在公共场合”是短语in public，拼接后符合语义和祈使句规则。
73. 本句考察too...to...（太…而不能…）的经典句型，主语为My neighbours，“体贴的”译为thoughtful，“大声说话”译为speak loudly，“在晚上”译为at night，套入句型即可得到正确表达。
74. 本句使用it作形式主语的高频句型It's + 形容词 + to do sth，“不礼貌的”译为impolite，“让别人等很久”用keep others waiting for a long time，条件状语从句“你已经答应和别人见面”用现在完成时表达为if you have already agreed to meet them，组合后逻辑通顺语法正确。
75. 本句为if引导的条件状语从句，“想礼貌地表现”译为want to behave politely，“在晚宴聚会上”译为at a dinner party，“做某事准没错”的地道表达为can't go wrong with doing sth，“遵循餐桌礼仪”译为follow the table manners，拼接后得到符合英语表达习惯的句子。
【答案】
71. As the saying goes, “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.”
72. Don't forget to keep your voice down in public.
73. My neighbours are too thoughtful to speak loudly at night.
74. It's impolite to keep others waiting for a long time if you have already agreed to meet them.
75. If you want to behave politely at a dinner party, you can't go wrong with following the table manners.
【知识点】
英语谚语积累；常用固定句型；条件状语从句
【点评】
本题全部围绕日常礼仪相关的表达展开，属于初中英语核心考点，覆盖了祈使句、too...to结构、it形式主语等高频句型，也考察了学生对地道英语短语、经典谚语的积累程度，提醒学生翻译时要避免逐字翻译的中式英语问题，平时多积累单元核心短语和固定表达。
【难度系数】
0.7
B)写作(满分25分)
(2025·常州中考)假如你校英文报发起了关于学生说脏话现象的讨论,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文投稿,谈谈你对他人说脏话的观点和建议。
提示:(1)Why shouldn't we say dirty words?
(2)How can we help others stop saying dirty words?
注意:(1)文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)词数100左右;文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
I really don't think it's right for students to say dirty words.
(2025·常州中考)假如你校英文报发起了关于学生说脏话现象的讨论,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文投稿,谈谈你对他人说脏话的观点和建议。
提示:(1)Why shouldn't we say dirty words?
(2)How can we help others stop saying dirty words?
注意:(1)文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)词数100左右;文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
I really don't think it's right for students to say dirty words.
Dirty words are harmful to both the speakers and listeners. Listeners will feel uncomfortable while speakers will surely leave a bad impression on others. Nobody is willing to make friends with those impolite students.
To help students who speak dirty words stop this bad habit, we have much to do. First of all, family members and teachers can have a talk with them, making them realize their problem and the harm. What's more, we can make rules to help them. When they say dirty words, we remind them. When they use clean words, we praise them.
By doing these, I am sure dirty words will be stopped!
To help students who speak dirty words stop this bad habit, we have much to do. First of all, family members and teachers can have a talk with them, making them realize their problem and the harm. What's more, we can make rules to help them. When they say dirty words, we remind them. When they use clean words, we praise them.
By doing these, I am sure dirty words will be stopped!
答案
B)写作
【审题指导】
本文是一篇材料作文,时态以“一般现在时”为主;写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。在介绍不能说脏话的原因时,可以谈论说脏话对于说话者和听话人的危害;在介绍怎样帮助他人不再说脏话时,至少需要列举2个方法;最后可以对于所提方法可能带来的改变进行展望。
【写作步骤】
步骤 内容
第一步 介绍为什么我们不能说脏话;
第二步 介绍怎样才能帮助他人不再说脏话;
第三步 表达对于“人们都不再说脏话”的展望。
One possible version:
I really don't think it's right for students to say dirty words.
Dirty words are harmful to both the speakers and listeners. Listeners will feel uncomfortable while speakers will surely leave a bad impression on others. Nobody is willing to make friends with those impolite students.
To help students who speak dirty words stop this bad habit, we have much to do. First of all, family members and teachers can have a talk with them, making them realize their problem and the harm. What's more, we can make rules to help them. When they say dirty words, we remind them. When they use clean words, we praise them.
By doing these, I am sure dirty words will be stopped!
【审题指导】
本文是一篇材料作文,时态以“一般现在时”为主;写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。在介绍不能说脏话的原因时,可以谈论说脏话对于说话者和听话人的危害;在介绍怎样帮助他人不再说脏话时,至少需要列举2个方法;最后可以对于所提方法可能带来的改变进行展望。
【写作步骤】
步骤 内容
第一步 介绍为什么我们不能说脏话;
第二步 介绍怎样才能帮助他人不再说脏话;
第三步 表达对于“人们都不再说脏话”的展望。
One possible version:
I really don't think it's right for students to say dirty words.
Dirty words are harmful to both the speakers and listeners. Listeners will feel uncomfortable while speakers will surely leave a bad impression on others. Nobody is willing to make friends with those impolite students.
To help students who speak dirty words stop this bad habit, we have much to do. First of all, family members and teachers can have a talk with them, making them realize their problem and the harm. What's more, we can make rules to help them. When they say dirty words, we remind them. When they use clean words, we praise them.
By doing these, I am sure dirty words will be stopped!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先先明确核心要求：这是一篇校园英文报投稿的议论文，时态以一般现在时为主，词数控制在100左右，给定开头不计入总词数，不能出现真实姓名和校名，必须覆盖两个指定要点。首先第一步先构思第一个要点“为什么不能说脏话”：可以从说脏话对听者、对说脏话的人双方的危害切入，比如听者会感到不适，说脏话的人会给他人留下没礼貌的坏印象，不利于日常交友，内容真实贴合校园场景。第二步构思第二个要点“如何帮助他人改掉说脏话的习惯”：至少设计2个可落地的方法，比如先让老师、家长和有说脏话习惯的学生沟通，让他们意识到行为的危害；再设计正向引导的小规则，大家互相提醒不文明的用语，对使用文明用语的行为给予表扬。最后补充简短的美好展望收尾，让文章结构完整，逻辑通顺。
【解析】
写作按照三步完成即可：
步骤1：承接给定开头，展开论述说脏话的危害，覆盖第一个核心要点：点明脏话对听者和说者都有害，听者会感到不舒服，说脏话的学生会给他人留下糟糕的印象，没人愿意和没礼貌的人交朋友，内容简洁表意清晰。
步骤2：用过渡句引出帮助他人改掉说脏话坏习惯的方法，用逻辑连接词First of all、What's more分别引出两个方案：首先家长和老师可以和这类学生谈心，让他们意识到自身的问题和行为的危害；其次大家可以共同制定小规则，有人说脏话时及时提醒，有人使用文明用语时给予表扬，正反双向引导改掉坏习惯。
步骤3：最后用简短的句子表达展望，说明坚持这些做法后，说脏话的现象会彻底消失，升华主题。
写作过程中注意控制总词数在要求范围内，不要出现个人真实信息，多用简单句搭配少量复合句，保证行文流畅没有语法错误。
【答案】
I really don't think it's right for students to say dirty words.
Dirty words are harmful to both the speakers and listeners. Listeners will feel uncomfortable while speakers will surely leave a bad impression on others. Nobody is willing to make friends with those impolite students.
To help students who speak dirty words stop this bad habit, we have much to do. First of all, family members and teachers can have a talk with them, making them realize their problem and the harm. What's more, we can make rules to help them. When they say dirty words, we remind them. When they use clean words, we praise them.
By doing these, I am sure dirty words will be stopped!
【知识点】
英语议论文写作
一般现在时运用
话题作文谋篇布局
【点评】
本题选取贴近学生校园日常的文明主题，要点指向明确，既考查学生的基础英语表达能力，也能引导学生树立文明用语的意识。写作时注意不要遗漏两个核心指定要点，适当补充贴合校园场景的细节让内容更充实，不需要刻意堆砌复杂词汇和长难句，保证表意清晰、行文连贯就可以拿到较高分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题首先先明确核心要求：这是一篇校园英文报投稿的议论文，时态以一般现在时为主，词数控制在100左右，给定开头不计入总词数，不能出现真实姓名和校名，必须覆盖两个指定要点。首先第一步先构思第一个要点“为什么不能说脏话”：可以从说脏话对听者、对说脏话的人双方的危害切入，比如听者会感到不适，说脏话的人会给他人留下没礼貌的坏印象，不利于日常交友，内容真实贴合校园场景。第二步构思第二个要点“如何帮助他人改掉说脏话的习惯”：至少设计2个可落地的方法，比如先让老师、家长和有说脏话习惯的学生沟通，让他们意识到行为的危害；再设计正向引导的小规则，大家互相提醒不文明的用语，对使用文明用语的行为给予表扬。最后补充简短的美好展望收尾，让文章结构完整，逻辑通顺。
【解析】
写作按照三步完成即可：
步骤1：承接给定开头，展开论述说脏话的危害，覆盖第一个核心要点：点明脏话对听者和说者都有害，听者会感到不舒服，说脏话的学生会给他人留下糟糕的印象，没人愿意和没礼貌的人交朋友，内容简洁表意清晰。
步骤2：用过渡句引出帮助他人改掉说脏话坏习惯的方法，用逻辑连接词First of all、What's more分别引出两个方案：首先家长和老师可以和这类学生谈心，让他们意识到自身的问题和行为的危害；其次大家可以共同制定小规则，有人说脏话时及时提醒，有人使用文明用语时给予表扬，正反双向引导改掉坏习惯。
步骤3：最后用简短的句子表达展望，说明坚持这些做法后，说脏话的现象会彻底消失，升华主题。
写作过程中注意控制总词数在要求范围内，不要出现个人真实信息，多用简单句搭配少量复合句，保证行文流畅没有语法错误。
【答案】
I really don't think it's right for students to say dirty words.
Dirty words are harmful to both the speakers and listeners. Listeners will feel uncomfortable while speakers will surely leave a bad impression on others. Nobody is willing to make friends with those impolite students.
To help students who speak dirty words stop this bad habit, we have much to do. First of all, family members and teachers can have a talk with them, making them realize their problem and the harm. What's more, we can make rules to help them. When they say dirty words, we remind them. When they use clean words, we praise them.
By doing these, I am sure dirty words will be stopped!
【知识点】
英语议论文写作
一般现在时运用
话题作文谋篇布局
【点评】
本题选取贴近学生校园日常的文明主题，要点指向明确，既考查学生的基础英语表达能力，也能引导学生树立文明用语的意识。写作时注意不要遗漏两个核心指定要点，适当补充贴合校园场景的细节让内容更充实，不需要刻意堆砌复杂词汇和长难句，保证表意清晰、行文连贯就可以拿到较高分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
