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Ⅶ.书面表达(满分17分)
假设你所在学校的志愿者协会正在招募新成员,准备开展一项帮助社区老人的活动。请以协会会长李华的身份,写一封倡议信,号召同学们积极报名参加。倡议信要包括以下内容:
1.说明活动的目的和意义;
2.介绍具体活动内容(至少两项);
3.说明志愿者需要具备的品质;
4.告知报名方式和截止时间。
要求:1.语言通顺,逻辑清晰。
2.包含现在完成时和 for/since 的用法。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
4.词数80—120,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
Our school Volunteer Association is planning a meaningful activity to help the elderly in our community.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假设你所在学校的志愿者协会正在招募新成员,准备开展一项帮助社区老人的活动。请以协会会长李华的身份,写一封倡议信,号召同学们积极报名参加。倡议信要包括以下内容:
1.说明活动的目的和意义;
2.介绍具体活动内容(至少两项);
3.说明志愿者需要具备的品质;
4.告知报名方式和截止时间。
要求:1.语言通顺,逻辑清晰。
2.包含现在完成时和 for/since 的用法。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
4.词数80—120,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
Our school Volunteer Association is planning a meaningful activity to help the elderly in our community.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案
Dear fellow students,
Our school Volunteer Association is planning a meaningful activity to help the elderly in our community. We believe everyone should care for the elderly because we will all grow old one day.
We have been preparing for this activity since last month. The main tasks include visiting elderly people who live alone and helping them with housework. We will also teach them how to use smartphones to make video calls to their families.
We need volunteers who are patient and kind. If you have experience in helping others, that would be wonderful. The activity will last for two months, from March to April.
If you are interested, please come to the Student Centre to sign up before February 28th. Let's work together to make our community warmer!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Our school Volunteer Association is planning a meaningful activity to help the elderly in our community. We believe everyone should care for the elderly because we will all grow old one day.
We have been preparing for this activity since last month. The main tasks include visiting elderly people who live alone and helping them with housework. We will also teach them how to use smartphones to make video calls to their families.
We need volunteers who are patient and kind. If you have experience in helping others, that would be wonderful. The activity will last for two months, from March to April.
If you are interested, please come to the Student Centre to sign up before February 28th. Let's work together to make our community warmer!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题是英语书面表达中的倡议信写作题，解题需紧扣题干要求的四大核心内容：活动目的与意义、至少两项具体活动、志愿者需具备的品质、报名方式及截止时间，同时必须包含现在完成时和for/since的用法。具体思路：1. 承接给定开头，明确活动目的（关爱社区老人）与意义（人人都会变老，需传递关爱）；2. 运用现在完成时（如have been preparing）搭配since/for（如since last month、for two months）体现活动筹备情况；3. 列举至少两项具体活动（如探访独居老人、教授智能手机使用）；4. 说明志愿者需具备的耐心、善良等品质；5. 告知报名方式（学生中心）及截止时间（2月28日），确保语言通顺、逻辑清晰，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头点明活动目的与意义：We believe everyone should care for the elderly because we will all grow old one day.
2. 运用现在完成时与for/since说明筹备情况及时长：We have been preparing for this activity since last month. The activity will last for two months, from March to April.
3. 介绍具体活动内容：The main tasks include visiting elderly people who live alone and helping them with housework. We will also teach them how to use smartphones to make video calls to their families.
4. 说明志愿者需具备的品质：We need volunteers who are patient and kind. If you have experience in helping others, that would be wonderful.
5. 告知报名方式与截止时间：If you are interested, please come to the Student Centre to sign up before February 28th. 最后以倡议句收尾呼应主题。
【答案】
Dear fellow students,
Our school Volunteer Association is planning a meaningful activity to help the elderly in our community. We believe everyone should care for the elderly because we will all grow old one day.
We have been preparing for this activity since last month. The main tasks include visiting elderly people who live alone and helping them with housework. We will also teach them how to use smartphones to make video calls to their families.
We need volunteers who are patient and kind. If you have experience in helping others, that would be wonderful. The activity will last for two months, from March to April.
If you are interested, please come to the Student Centre to sign up before February 28th. Let's work together to make our community warmer!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、现在完成时用法、介词for/since用法
【点评】
本题为英语书面表达常规题型，明确要求涵盖四大写作要点，同时限定特定语法（现在完成时、for/since）的运用，既考查学生应用文结构把控能力，又考查语法运用能力，是中等难度的书面表达题。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题是英语书面表达中的倡议信写作题，解题需紧扣题干要求的四大核心内容：活动目的与意义、至少两项具体活动、志愿者需具备的品质、报名方式及截止时间，同时必须包含现在完成时和for/since的用法。具体思路：1. 承接给定开头，明确活动目的（关爱社区老人）与意义（人人都会变老，需传递关爱）；2. 运用现在完成时（如have been preparing）搭配since/for（如since last month、for two months）体现活动筹备情况；3. 列举至少两项具体活动（如探访独居老人、教授智能手机使用）；4. 说明志愿者需具备的耐心、善良等品质；5. 告知报名方式（学生中心）及截止时间（2月28日），确保语言通顺、逻辑清晰，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头点明活动目的与意义：We believe everyone should care for the elderly because we will all grow old one day.
2. 运用现在完成时与for/since说明筹备情况及时长：We have been preparing for this activity since last month. The activity will last for two months, from March to April.
3. 介绍具体活动内容：The main tasks include visiting elderly people who live alone and helping them with housework. We will also teach them how to use smartphones to make video calls to their families.
4. 说明志愿者需具备的品质：We need volunteers who are patient and kind. If you have experience in helping others, that would be wonderful.
5. 告知报名方式与截止时间：If you are interested, please come to the Student Centre to sign up before February 28th. 最后以倡议句收尾呼应主题。
【答案】
Dear fellow students,
Our school Volunteer Association is planning a meaningful activity to help the elderly in our community. We believe everyone should care for the elderly because we will all grow old one day.
We have been preparing for this activity since last month. The main tasks include visiting elderly people who live alone and helping them with housework. We will also teach them how to use smartphones to make video calls to their families.
We need volunteers who are patient and kind. If you have experience in helping others, that would be wonderful. The activity will last for two months, from March to April.
If you are interested, please come to the Student Centre to sign up before February 28th. Let's work together to make our community warmer!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、现在完成时用法、介词for/since用法
【点评】
本题为英语书面表达常规题型，明确要求涵盖四大写作要点，同时限定特定语法（现在完成时、for/since）的运用，既考查学生应用文结构把控能力，又考查语法运用能力，是中等难度的书面表达题。
【难度系数】
0.6
