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学校英文报正在举办以“My Dream Job”为题的征文比赛。受Mark立下新年决心的启发，你也想根据自己梦想的工作制订实现的方案。请根据以下提示，用英文写一篇短文，向学校英文报投稿。
内容提示：
(1)What is your dream job?
(2)Why do you like this job?
(3)How are you going to make it come true?
注意：
(1)可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
(2)语句连贯，词数80左右。
My Dream Job
学校英文报正在举办以“My Dream Job”为题的征文比赛。受Mark立下新年决心的启发，你也想根据自己梦想的工作制订实现的方案。请根据以下提示，用英文写一篇短文，向学校英文报投稿。
内容提示：
(1)What is your dream job?
(2)Why do you like this job?
(3)How are you going to make it come true?
注意：
(1)可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
(2)语句连贯，词数80左右。
My Dream Job
When I grow up, I am going to be a reporter. I think it's a great and interesting job. I am good at writing essays. I also like to meet and talk to different people.
To make my dream come true, I am going to set some mini-goals and try my best to finish them. First, I am going to work hard at Chinese and keep on writing and watching news on TV.
Then, I am going to write articles and send them to magazines and newspapers. After finishing senior high school, I am going to get into a university in Shanghai.
Maybe I am going to spare some time to do some volunteer work to experience other people's lives.
Finally, I am going to work for a TV station as a reporter and help people in trouble.
I am sure that if I stick to my dream and never give up, it will come true one day!
答案
参考范文：
My Dream Job
When I grow up, I am going to be a reporter. I think it's a great and interesting job. I am good at writing essays. I also like to meet and talk to different people.
To make my dream come true, I am going to set some mini-goals and try my best to finish them. First, I am going to work hard at Chinese and keep on writing and watching news on TV. Then, I am going to write articles and send them to magazines and newspapers. After finishing senior high school, I am going to get into a university in Shanghai. Maybe I am going to spare some time to do some volunteer work to experience other people's lives. Finally, I am going to work for a TV station as a reporter and help people in trouble.
I am sure that if I stick to my dream and never give up, it will come true one day!
My Dream Job
When I grow up, I am going to be a reporter. I think it's a great and interesting job. I am good at writing essays. I also like to meet and talk to different people.
To make my dream come true, I am going to set some mini-goals and try my best to finish them. First, I am going to work hard at Chinese and keep on writing and watching news on TV. Then, I am going to write articles and send them to magazines and newspapers. After finishing senior high school, I am going to get into a university in Shanghai. Maybe I am going to spare some time to do some volunteer work to experience other people's lives. Finally, I am going to work for a TV station as a reporter and help people in trouble.
I am sure that if I stick to my dream and never give up, it will come true one day!
解析
【分析】
本题是英语话题书面表达题，要求以“My Dream Job”为题，围绕三个核心要点写作：一是明确自己的梦想职业，二是说明喜欢该职业的原因，三是阐述实现梦想的具体计划。写作时需注意内容连贯，词数约80词，可适当拓展细节，符合学校英文报征文的要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明梦想职业为记者，说明喜欢的原因：擅长写作，且喜欢与不同的人交流；
2. 分步骤阐述实现计划：努力学习语文，坚持写作并关注电视新闻，向杂志和报纸投稿，高中毕业后考入上海的大学，利用空闲时间做志愿工作积累生活经验；
3. 结尾表达坚持梦想、永不放弃的决心，确保语句通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】
My Dream Job
When I grow up, I am going to be a reporter. I think it's a great and interesting job. I am good at writing essays. I also like to meet and talk to different people.
To make my dream come true, I am going to set some mini-goals and try my best to finish them. First, I am going to work hard at Chinese and keep on writing and watching news on TV. Then, I am going to write articles and send them to magazines and newspapers. After finishing senior high school, I am going to get into a university in Shanghai. Maybe I am going to spare some time to do some volunteer work to experience other people's lives. Finally, I am going to work for a TV station as a reporter and help people in trouble.
I am sure that if I stick to my dream and never give up, it will come true one day!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文写作
【点评】
本题贴近学生生活实际，考查学生的英语语言组织与运用能力，要求清晰阐述个人梦想、原因及实现路径，既注重基础语言知识的考查，又强调内容的逻辑性与连贯性，是初中英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题是英语话题书面表达题，要求以“My Dream Job”为题，围绕三个核心要点写作：一是明确自己的梦想职业，二是说明喜欢该职业的原因，三是阐述实现梦想的具体计划。写作时需注意内容连贯，词数约80词，可适当拓展细节，符合学校英文报征文的要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明梦想职业为记者，说明喜欢的原因：擅长写作，且喜欢与不同的人交流；
2. 分步骤阐述实现计划：努力学习语文，坚持写作并关注电视新闻，向杂志和报纸投稿，高中毕业后考入上海的大学，利用空闲时间做志愿工作积累生活经验；
3. 结尾表达坚持梦想、永不放弃的决心，确保语句通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】
My Dream Job
When I grow up, I am going to be a reporter. I think it's a great and interesting job. I am good at writing essays. I also like to meet and talk to different people.
To make my dream come true, I am going to set some mini-goals and try my best to finish them. First, I am going to work hard at Chinese and keep on writing and watching news on TV. Then, I am going to write articles and send them to magazines and newspapers. After finishing senior high school, I am going to get into a university in Shanghai. Maybe I am going to spare some time to do some volunteer work to experience other people's lives. Finally, I am going to work for a TV station as a reporter and help people in trouble.
I am sure that if I stick to my dream and never give up, it will come true one day!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文写作
【点评】
本题贴近学生生活实际，考查学生的英语语言组织与运用能力，要求清晰阐述个人梦想、原因及实现路径，既注重基础语言知识的考查，又强调内容的逻辑性与连贯性，是初中英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.7
