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为了丰富学生们的课外生活，学校开办了各种各样的俱乐部。假设你是李华，计划加入音乐俱乐部，请根据自己的特长写一封60词左右的自荐信。内容包括：
1. What club do you want to join?
2. Why do you want to join the club?
要求：1.须包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥；
2.不得出现真实姓名和校名。
审题指导：
1.体裁：应用文 2.时态：一般现在时 3.人称：以第一人称为主
写作框架：
76 英语 七年级 上册 人教版
优秀范文：
Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua. I'm interested in music ①, so I want to join the music club.
I'm good at singing and playing the guitar ②. When I am free, I practise singing and learn about music. ⑤ I can sing English and Chinese songs. I often sing songs after school. And I often play the guitar with my friends on weekends ③.
I want to learn more in the club. I want to have more chances to perform on stage. ⑥
I hope you can give me a chance ④.
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点词块
① be interested in music 对音乐感兴趣
② play the guitar 弹吉他
③ on weekends 在周末
④ give me a chance 给我一个机会
高分句子
⑤ When I am free, I practise singing and learn about music.（when引导时间状语从句）当我空闲时，我练习唱歌和了解音乐。
⑥ I want to have more chances to perform on stage.（不定式作后置定语）我想有更多在舞台上表演的机会。
为了丰富学生们的课外生活，学校开办了各种各样的俱乐部。假设你是李华，计划加入音乐俱乐部，请根据自己的特长写一封60词左右的自荐信。内容包括：
1. What club do you want to join?
2. Why do you want to join the club?
要求：1.须包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥；
2.不得出现真实姓名和校名。
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审题指导：
1.体裁：应用文 2.时态：一般现在时 3.人称：以第一人称为主
写作框架：
76 英语 七年级 上册 人教版
优秀范文：
Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua. I'm interested in music ①, so I want to join the music club.
I'm good at singing and playing the guitar ②. When I am free, I practise singing and learn about music. ⑤ I can sing English and Chinese songs. I often sing songs after school. And I often play the guitar with my friends on weekends ③.
I want to learn more in the club. I want to have more chances to perform on stage. ⑥
I hope you can give me a chance ④.
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点词块
① be interested in music 对音乐感兴趣
② play the guitar 弹吉他
③ on weekends 在周末
④ give me a chance 给我一个机会
高分句子
⑤ When I am free, I practise singing and learn about music.（when引导时间状语从句）当我空闲时，我练习唱歌和了解音乐。
⑥ I want to have more chances to perform on stage.（不定式作后置定语）我想有更多在舞台上表演的机会。
答案
Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua. I'm interested in music, so I want to join the music club.
I'm good at singing and playing the guitar. I can sing Chinese and English songs, and I often play the guitar with my friends on weekends. I hope to learn more about music and get more chances to perform on stage. I hope you can give me a chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
My name is Li Hua. I'm interested in music, so I want to join the music club.
I'm good at singing and playing the guitar. I can sing Chinese and English songs, and I often play the guitar with my friends on weekends. I hope to learn more about music and get more chances to perform on stage. I hope you can give me a chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】这是一道英语应用文写作题，要求写加入音乐俱乐部的自荐信。解题思路：1. 明确体裁为书信，时态用一般现在时，以第一人称为主；2. 紧扣题目要求的两个要点：说明想加入的俱乐部（音乐俱乐部），阐述加入原因（自身音乐特长、学习与表演需求）；3. 遵循书信格式：开头称呼、自我介绍、申请说明、特长/原因阐述、愿望表达、请求机会、结尾署名；4. 控制词数约60词，适当发挥且不出现真实姓名、校名。
【解析】按照书信规范格式，以李华的身份写作：开头称呼Dear Sir，自我介绍后说明因对音乐感兴趣想加入音乐俱乐部；接着说明自身特长（擅长唱歌、弹吉他，会中英文歌曲，周末常和朋友弹吉他）；然后表达加入后的愿望（学习更多音乐知识、获得更多舞台表演机会），最后请求给予机会，结尾署名Li Hua，整体符合一般现在时，内容紧扣要点，词数合适。
【答案】Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua. I'm interested in music, so I want to join the music club.
I'm good at singing and playing the guitar. I can sing Chinese and English songs, and I often play the guitar with my friends on weekends. I hope to learn more about music and get more chances to perform on stage. I hope you can give me a chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、一般现在时运用、英语自荐信表达
【点评】本题考查七年级学生英语应用文写作能力，要求紧扣要点、语言通顺、符合格式，是基础写作练习，能提升学生英语表达与应用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】按照书信规范格式，以李华的身份写作：开头称呼Dear Sir，自我介绍后说明因对音乐感兴趣想加入音乐俱乐部；接着说明自身特长（擅长唱歌、弹吉他，会中英文歌曲，周末常和朋友弹吉他）；然后表达加入后的愿望（学习更多音乐知识、获得更多舞台表演机会），最后请求给予机会，结尾署名Li Hua，整体符合一般现在时，内容紧扣要点，词数合适。
【答案】Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua. I'm interested in music, so I want to join the music club.
I'm good at singing and playing the guitar. I can sing Chinese and English songs, and I often play the guitar with my friends on weekends. I hope to learn more about music and get more chances to perform on stage. I hope you can give me a chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、一般现在时运用、英语自荐信表达
【点评】本题考查七年级学生英语应用文写作能力，要求紧扣要点、语言通顺、符合格式，是基础写作练习，能提升学生英语表达与应用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
