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假设你是李华,你的美国笔友 Mary 了解到中国山川秀丽、风景迷人,因此计划暑假来中国旅游。请你针对她的问题给她回复邮件。
提示问题:
1. Which places of interest should I visit?
2. How can I get there?
3. What's it famous for?
提示词语:mountain,pay a visit,by plane,enjoy
注意:
1. 邮件须包含所有提示问题,可适当发挥;
2. 邮件中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数 80~100。(邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Dear Mary,
I'm happy to hear that you are coming to visit China.
I'm sure you will have a good time there.
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友 Mary 了解到中国山川秀丽、风景迷人,因此计划暑假来中国旅游。请你针对她的问题给她回复邮件。
提示问题:
1. Which places of interest should I visit?
2. How can I get there?
3. What's it famous for?
提示词语:mountain,pay a visit,by plane,enjoy
注意:
1. 邮件须包含所有提示问题,可适当发挥;
2. 邮件中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数 80~100。(邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Dear Mary,
I'm happy to hear that you are coming to visit China.
Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui. Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. It is convenient to get there. You can go there by train or by plane.
While climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, beautiful pines and unique rocks around you. What's more, in the early morning, when the sun rises, the sky looks beautiful. You will never forget the breathtaking scenery and fresh mountain air.
It's really a nice place to visit.
I'm sure you will have a good time there.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Mary,
I'm happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui. Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. It is convenient to get there. You can go there by train or by plane.
While climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, beautiful pines and unique rocks around you. What's more, in the early morning, when the sun rises, the sky looks beautiful. You will never forget the breathtaking scenery and fresh mountain air. It's really a nice place to visit.
I'm sure you will have a good time there.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mary,
I'm happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui. Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. It is convenient to get there. You can go there by train or by plane.
While climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, beautiful pines and unique rocks around you. What's more, in the early morning, when the sun rises, the sky looks beautiful. You will never forget the breathtaking scenery and fresh mountain air. It's really a nice place to visit.
I'm sure you will have a good time there.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达（邮件写作），解题思路：首先明确邮件格式，开头结尾已给出，只需补充中间内容；其次紧扣提示问题，依次回答推荐景点、交通方式、景点特色；同时必须用到提示词语mountain、pay a visit、by plane、enjoy；最后控制词数在80-100之间，不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 选取符合提示的景点：黄山（属于mountain）；2. 回答交通方式：说明可乘飞机或火车（用到by plane）；3. 介绍景点特色：云海、奇松、怪石、日出等（用到enjoy），并提及游客常去（用到pay a visit）；4. 组织语言，保持邮件友好语气，确保覆盖所有提示问题，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mary,
I'm happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui. Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. It is convenient to get there. You can go there by train or by plane.
While climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, beautiful pines and unique rocks around you. What's more, in the early morning, when the sun rises, the sky looks beautiful. You will never forget the breathtaking scenery and fresh mountain air. It's really a nice place to visit.
I'm sure you will have a good time there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、景点介绍表达、提示词语运用
【点评】
本题为初中英语常见书面表达题，考察邮件写作格式、信息整合能力及提示词运用能力，要求明确，难度适中，能有效检测学生英语写作基础。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达（邮件写作），解题思路：首先明确邮件格式，开头结尾已给出，只需补充中间内容；其次紧扣提示问题，依次回答推荐景点、交通方式、景点特色；同时必须用到提示词语mountain、pay a visit、by plane、enjoy；最后控制词数在80-100之间，不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 选取符合提示的景点：黄山（属于mountain）；2. 回答交通方式：说明可乘飞机或火车（用到by plane）；3. 介绍景点特色：云海、奇松、怪石、日出等（用到enjoy），并提及游客常去（用到pay a visit）；4. 组织语言，保持邮件友好语气，确保覆盖所有提示问题，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mary,
I'm happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui. Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. It is convenient to get there. You can go there by train or by plane.
While climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, beautiful pines and unique rocks around you. What's more, in the early morning, when the sun rises, the sky looks beautiful. You will never forget the breathtaking scenery and fresh mountain air. It's really a nice place to visit.
I'm sure you will have a good time there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、景点介绍表达、提示词语运用
【点评】
本题为初中英语常见书面表达题，考察邮件写作格式、信息整合能力及提示词运用能力，要求明确，难度适中，能有效检测学生英语写作基础。
【难度系数】
0.6
