四、书面表达
假如你是Millie,你的英国朋友Alice想在暑假期间到你的家乡来游览。请根据所给的思维导图,给Alice写一封信介绍你的家乡并帮助Alice做好旅游攻略。

要求:
1. 短文应包含思维导图中的所有要点,可适当发挥。
2. 语句通顺,语意连贯,层次清楚,书写规范。
3. 词数90左右,信件首尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
Welcome to my hometown on the summer holiday.
I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Millie
英语
81
假如你是Millie,你的英国朋友Alice想在暑假期间到你的家乡来游览。请根据所给的思维导图,给Alice写一封信介绍你的家乡并帮助Alice做好旅游攻略。
要求:
1. 短文应包含思维导图中的所有要点,可适当发挥。
2. 语句通顺,语意连贯,层次清楚,书写规范。
3. 词数90左右,信件首尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
Welcome to my hometown on the summer holiday.
I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Millie
英语
81
答案
My hometown is a lovely city near the big lake in Jiangsu. It is cool in summer with little rain, and the people here are all warm-hearted.
Great changes have taken place here. The environment is much greener than before, and it's super easy for you to travel around by shared bike or high-speed train.
There are lots of fun things to do. You can visit the famous old town, and try our local tasty seafood. I will be your best guide when you arrive.
Great changes have taken place here. The environment is much greener than before, and it's super easy for you to travel around by shared bike or high-speed train.
There are lots of fun things to do. You can visit the famous old town, and try our local tasty seafood. I will be your best guide when you arrive.
解析
这是一篇书信类介绍家乡的英语书面表达,写作需要覆盖思维导图的全部要点:1. 基础信息:介绍家乡的地理位置、天气特征、当地居民的特点;2. 家乡的变化:描述环境改善、交通更便捷等发展情况;3. 游玩相关内容:介绍当地知名景点、特色美食等游玩项目。写作时要保持书信语气自然流畅,符合八年级词汇和语法要求,词数符合题目规定。
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