Ⅻ. 书面表达。
请你用一般过去时的句子写一写你上个暑假发生的事情,最少5句话。
参考词语:play football, read a book, go shopping, go fishing, see a film, take a trip。
请你用一般过去时的句子写一写你上个暑假发生的事情,最少5句话。
参考词语:play football, read a book, go shopping, go fishing, see a film, take a trip。
答案
I had a happy holiday over the summer
holiday. My parents and I went to Xinjiang.
Xinjiang is far from Yinchuan. We went there
by plane. We ate delicious food. We saw lots of
grapes there. They were very sweet. We rode
horses. We took lots of pictures and bought
some gifts. We were very happy. How about
your summer holiday?
holiday. My parents and I went to Xinjiang.
Xinjiang is far from Yinchuan. We went there
by plane. We ate delicious food. We saw lots of
grapes there. They were very sweet. We rode
horses. We took lots of pictures and bought
some gifts. We were very happy. How about
your summer holiday?
解析
【分析】
这道题要求使用一般过去时描述上个暑假的经历,至少写5句话,还可以选用给出的参考词汇丰富内容。解题时首先可以开篇总述自己暑假的整体感受,选定一个核心事件(比如参考词汇里的take a trip旅行)作为主线,接着交代事件的相关信息:同行的人、目的地、出行方式,再逐一列举假期里做的具体小事,最后收尾抒发自己的假期心情即可,全程要注意所有描述过去动作的动词都要变为对应的过去式,保证时态正确,同时保证句子数量满足不少于5句的要求,逻辑通顺连贯。
【解析】
写作时按照总-分-总的逻辑展开:
1. 开篇总起,点明暑假的整体状态,使用一般过去时:I had a happy holiday over the summer holiday.
2. 引出核心事件,交代出行的同伴和目的地:My parents and I went to Xinjiang.
3. 补充出行相关细节,说明两地距离和交通方式:Xinjiang is far from Yinchuan. We went there by plane.
4. 列举在当地的游玩经历,全部使用动词过去式匹配时态:We ate delicious food. We saw lots of grapes there. They were very sweet. We rode horses. We took lots of pictures and bought some gifts.
5. 收尾抒发感受,还可以自然向对方发出提问:We were very happy. How about your summer holiday?
整篇内容时态统一为一般过去时,句子数量远多于要求的5句,用到了参考词汇相关的旅行类表达,完全符合题目要求。
【答案】
I had a happy holiday over the summer holiday. My parents and I went to Xinjiang. Xinjiang is far from Yinchuan. We went there by plane. We ate delicious food. We saw lots of grapes there. They were very sweet. We rode horses. We took lots of pictures and bought some gifts. We were very happy. How about your summer holiday?
【知识点】
一般过去时,英语记叙文写作,动词过去式变形
【点评】
这篇短文完全符合题目的各项要求,时态使用准确,逻辑清晰连贯,从总述假期感受,到交代旅行相关信息、列举游玩细节,最后抒发心情并互动,内容充实自然,也合理用到了题干给出的参考词汇相关内容,学生完成这类写作时要重点注意规则和不规则动词的过去式变形,避免出现时态错误。
【难度系数】
0.7
这道题要求使用一般过去时描述上个暑假的经历,至少写5句话,还可以选用给出的参考词汇丰富内容。解题时首先可以开篇总述自己暑假的整体感受,选定一个核心事件(比如参考词汇里的take a trip旅行)作为主线,接着交代事件的相关信息:同行的人、目的地、出行方式,再逐一列举假期里做的具体小事,最后收尾抒发自己的假期心情即可,全程要注意所有描述过去动作的动词都要变为对应的过去式,保证时态正确,同时保证句子数量满足不少于5句的要求,逻辑通顺连贯。
【解析】
写作时按照总-分-总的逻辑展开:
1. 开篇总起,点明暑假的整体状态,使用一般过去时:I had a happy holiday over the summer holiday.
2. 引出核心事件,交代出行的同伴和目的地:My parents and I went to Xinjiang.
3. 补充出行相关细节,说明两地距离和交通方式:Xinjiang is far from Yinchuan. We went there by plane.
4. 列举在当地的游玩经历,全部使用动词过去式匹配时态:We ate delicious food. We saw lots of grapes there. They were very sweet. We rode horses. We took lots of pictures and bought some gifts.
5. 收尾抒发感受,还可以自然向对方发出提问:We were very happy. How about your summer holiday?
整篇内容时态统一为一般过去时,句子数量远多于要求的5句,用到了参考词汇相关的旅行类表达,完全符合题目要求。
【答案】
I had a happy holiday over the summer holiday. My parents and I went to Xinjiang. Xinjiang is far from Yinchuan. We went there by plane. We ate delicious food. We saw lots of grapes there. They were very sweet. We rode horses. We took lots of pictures and bought some gifts. We were very happy. How about your summer holiday?
【知识点】
一般过去时,英语记叙文写作,动词过去式变形
【点评】
这篇短文完全符合题目的各项要求,时态使用准确,逻辑清晰连贯,从总述假期感受,到交代旅行相关信息、列举游玩细节,最后抒发心情并互动,内容充实自然,也合理用到了题干给出的参考词汇相关内容,学生完成这类写作时要重点注意规则和不规则动词的过去式变形,避免出现时态错误。
【难度系数】
0.7
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