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Ⅷ. 书面表达
在经济持续增长的今天，孩子们的零用钱逐渐增多，这无疑是对他们理财能力(the ability to manage money)的考验。某英语学习平台正针对零用钱的管理和使用问题进行调查。假如你是李华，请根据以下写作要点写一篇英语短文投稿至英语学习平台，以便与更多同学交流学习。
写作要点:1. Do you use your pocket money properly and wisely? 2. How will you spend your pocket money in the future?
要求:1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥;2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;3. 词数80左右，短文开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
提示短语:on sale 特价销售 run out of 用完，耗尽 make better use of 更好地利用
Nowadays, parents give children more and more pocket money, and everyone has his or her own way of spending the money.
Anyway, it is not easy for our parents to earn money, so we students should improve our ability to manage money.
在经济持续增长的今天，孩子们的零用钱逐渐增多，这无疑是对他们理财能力(the ability to manage money)的考验。某英语学习平台正针对零用钱的管理和使用问题进行调查。假如你是李华，请根据以下写作要点写一篇英语短文投稿至英语学习平台，以便与更多同学交流学习。
写作要点:1. Do you use your pocket money properly and wisely? 2. How will you spend your pocket money in the future?
要求:1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥;2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;3. 词数80左右，短文开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
提示短语:on sale 特价销售 run out of 用完，耗尽 make better use of 更好地利用
Nowadays, parents give children more and more pocket money, and everyone has his or her own way of spending the money.
Anyway, it is not easy for our parents to earn money, so we students should improve our ability to manage money.
答案
One possible version:
Nowadays, parents give children more and more pocket money, and everyone has his or her own way of spending the money. For me, I usually spend most of my pocket money on snacks. School things also cost a part of my money. Besides, I sometimes buy unnecessary things when they are on sale. So I run out of my money quickly. I don't think I spend my money wisely and properly.
In the future, I plan to make better use of my money. First, I will spend less on snacks. Second, I will try not to buy things just because they look cool or are on sale. Third, I should save some money for future use.
Anyway, it is not easy for our parents to earn money, so we students should improve our ability to manage money.
Nowadays, parents give children more and more pocket money, and everyone has his or her own way of spending the money. For me, I usually spend most of my pocket money on snacks. School things also cost a part of my money. Besides, I sometimes buy unnecessary things when they are on sale. So I run out of my money quickly. I don't think I spend my money wisely and properly.
In the future, I plan to make better use of my money. First, I will spend less on snacks. Second, I will try not to buy things just because they look cool or are on sale. Third, I should save some money for future use.
Anyway, it is not easy for our parents to earn money, so we students should improve our ability to manage money.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，解题思路如下：1. 审题：明确需覆盖两个写作要点（是否合理明智使用零用钱、未来零用钱的使用计划），需运用提示短语，开头结尾已给出，词数80左右，不得出现真实人名地名；2. 回应第一个要点：结合自身实际说明当前零用钱的使用情况（如花在零食、学习用品，有时买特价非必要物品，很快用完，体现使用不够合理）；3. 回应第二个要点：围绕“更好利用零用钱”，说明未来计划（减少零食开支、不盲目购买特价或酷炫物品、预留备用金）；4. 组织语言，确保行文连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
首先承接给定开头，阐述当前零用钱的使用现状（对应第一个要点）：For me, I usually spend most of my pocket money on snacks. School things also cost a part of my money. Besides, I sometimes buy unnecessary things when they are on sale. So I run out of my money quickly. I don't think I spend my money wisely and properly. 接着说明未来的零用钱使用计划（对应第二个要点）：In the future, I plan to make better use of my money. First, I will spend less on snacks. Second, I will try not to buy things just because they look cool or are on sale. Third, I should save some money for future use. 全文覆盖所有要点，运用提示短语，行文连贯，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Nowadays, parents give children more and more pocket money, and everyone has his or her own way of spending the money. For me, I usually spend most of my pocket money on snacks. School things also cost a part of my money. Besides, I sometimes buy unnecessary things when they are on sale. So I run out of my money quickly. I don't think I spend my money wisely and properly.
In the future, I plan to make better use of my money. First, I will spend less on snacks. Second, I will try not to buy things just because they look cool or are on sale. Third, I should save some money for future use.
Anyway, it is not easy for our parents to earn money, so we students should improve our ability to manage money.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖两个写作要点，合理运用提示短语，内容连贯，主题明确，体现了对理财能力的思考，符合初中英语书面表达的规范要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，解题思路如下：1. 审题：明确需覆盖两个写作要点（是否合理明智使用零用钱、未来零用钱的使用计划），需运用提示短语，开头结尾已给出，词数80左右，不得出现真实人名地名；2. 回应第一个要点：结合自身实际说明当前零用钱的使用情况（如花在零食、学习用品，有时买特价非必要物品，很快用完，体现使用不够合理）；3. 回应第二个要点：围绕“更好利用零用钱”，说明未来计划（减少零食开支、不盲目购买特价或酷炫物品、预留备用金）；4. 组织语言，确保行文连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
首先承接给定开头，阐述当前零用钱的使用现状（对应第一个要点）：For me, I usually spend most of my pocket money on snacks. School things also cost a part of my money. Besides, I sometimes buy unnecessary things when they are on sale. So I run out of my money quickly. I don't think I spend my money wisely and properly. 接着说明未来的零用钱使用计划（对应第二个要点）：In the future, I plan to make better use of my money. First, I will spend less on snacks. Second, I will try not to buy things just because they look cool or are on sale. Third, I should save some money for future use. 全文覆盖所有要点，运用提示短语，行文连贯，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Nowadays, parents give children more and more pocket money, and everyone has his or her own way of spending the money. For me, I usually spend most of my pocket money on snacks. School things also cost a part of my money. Besides, I sometimes buy unnecessary things when they are on sale. So I run out of my money quickly. I don't think I spend my money wisely and properly.
In the future, I plan to make better use of my money. First, I will spend less on snacks. Second, I will try not to buy things just because they look cool or are on sale. Third, I should save some money for future use.
Anyway, it is not easy for our parents to earn money, so we students should improve our ability to manage money.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖两个写作要点，合理运用提示短语，内容连贯，主题明确，体现了对理财能力的思考，符合初中英语书面表达的规范要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
