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健康对每个人都很重要,我们应该学会如何保持健康。请以"How to Stay Healthy?"为题,写一篇英语短文,向学校英文报投稿。
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息;
2. 词数80左右,短文的标题已给出,不计入总词数。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称
2. 时态:一般现在时为主
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①喉咙痛
②流鼻涕
③发烧
④吃太多……
⑤肚子疼/头痛/牙痛
⑥受苦;受折磨
⑦给某人量体温
⑧做检查
⑨得流感
⑩戴口罩
⑪从……上掉下来
⑫更为重要的是
⑬对……有害
⑭从现在起
2. 句型仿写
① To protect your eyes, every 20 minutes, you should rest your eyes and look at something far away.
句型:动词不定式作目的状语
仿写:为了保持健康,有很多我们应该做的事情。
仿写:我们应该定期锻炼,以防止生病。
③ If you take good care of yourself, you'll get better soon.
句型:if引导的条件状语从句
仿写:如果我们患了流感,我们应该戴上口罩以保护他人。
连句成篇
How to Stay Healthy?
健康对每个人都很重要,我们应该学会如何保持健康。请以"How to Stay Healthy?"为题,写一篇英语短文,向学校英文报投稿。
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息;
2. 词数80左右,短文的标题已给出,不计入总词数。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称
2. 时态:一般现在时为主
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①喉咙痛
have a sore throat
②流鼻涕
have a runny nose
③发烧
have a fever
④吃太多……
eat too much/many
⑤肚子疼/头痛/牙痛
have a stomachache/headache/toothache
⑥受苦;受折磨
suffer from
⑦给某人量体温
take sb's temperature
⑧做检查
do a test
⑨得流感
have the flu
⑩戴口罩
wear a mask
⑪从……上掉下来
fall off
⑫更为重要的是
what's more
⑬对……有害
do harm to/be harmful to
⑭从现在起
from now on
2. 句型仿写
① To protect your eyes, every 20 minutes, you should rest your eyes and look at something far away.
句型:动词不定式作目的状语
仿写:为了保持健康,有很多我们应该做的事情。
To stay healthy, there are many things we should do.
仿写:我们应该定期锻炼,以防止生病。
We should exercise regularly to stop us from getting sick.
③ If you take good care of yourself, you'll get better soon.
句型:if引导的条件状语从句
仿写:如果我们患了流感,我们应该戴上口罩以保护他人。
If we have the flu, we should wear a mask to protect others.
连句成篇
How to Stay Healthy?
答案
【主题写作·迁移】
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①have a sore throat
②have a runny nose
③have a fever
④eat too much/many
⑤have a stomachache/headache/toothache
⑥suffer from ⑦take sb's temperature
⑧do a test ⑨have the flu
⑩wear a mask ⑪fall off
⑫what's more
⑬do harm to/be harmful to
⑭from now on
2. 句型仿写
①To stay healthy, there are many things
we should do.
②We should exercise regularly to stop us
from getting sick.
③If we have the flu, we should wear a
mask to protect others.
【连句成篇】
How to Stay Healthy?
Health is important to everyone. To stay
healthy, there are many things we should do.
First, we should eat more vegetables and
fruit instead of eating too much junk food,
which is harmful to our bodies. What's more,
we should exercise regularly to stop us from
getting sick. When we have a sore throat,
have a runny nose, or have a fever, we'd
better take our temperature and see a doctor.
If we have the flu, we should wear a mask to
protect others.
From now on, let's take good care of
ourselves!
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①have a sore throat
②have a runny nose
③have a fever
④eat too much/many
⑤have a stomachache/headache/toothache
⑥suffer from ⑦take sb's temperature
⑧do a test ⑨have the flu
⑩wear a mask ⑪fall off
⑫what's more
⑬do harm to/be harmful to
⑭from now on
2. 句型仿写
①To stay healthy, there are many things
we should do.
②We should exercise regularly to stop us
from getting sick.
③If we have the flu, we should wear a
mask to protect others.
【连句成篇】
How to Stay Healthy?
Health is important to everyone. To stay
healthy, there are many things we should do.
First, we should eat more vegetables and
fruit instead of eating too much junk food,
which is harmful to our bodies. What's more,
we should exercise regularly to stop us from
getting sick. When we have a sore throat,
have a runny nose, or have a fever, we'd
better take our temperature and see a doctor.
If we have the flu, we should wear a mask to
protect others.
From now on, let's take good care of
ourselves!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题应用文写作，要求以“How to Stay Healthy?”为题向学校英文报投稿。解题思路：①确定人称用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主；②结合给定的健康主题词块和句型仿写，围绕“如何保持健康”展开，涵盖饮食、锻炼、生病应对等核心要点；③遵循“点题-阐述方法-呼吁”的结构，注意词数80左右，不出现真实信息，符合投稿要求。
【解析】
写作时，首先用不定式作目的状语的句型点题，引出保持健康的相关做法；接着从饮食（多吃蔬果、少吃垃圾食品）、锻炼（定期锻炼）、生病处理（测体温、看医生、得流感戴口罩）等方面具体阐述，运用if引导的条件状语从句丰富内容；最后用“From now on”发出呼吁，确保内容紧扣主题，语言准确，词数符合要求。
【答案】
How to Stay Healthy?
Health is important to everyone. To stay healthy, there are many things we should do. First, we should eat more vegetables and fruit instead of eating too much junk food, which is harmful to our bodies. What's more, we should exercise regularly to stop us from getting sick. When we have a sore throat, have a runny nose, or have a fever, we'd better take our temperature and see a doctor. If we have the flu, we should wear a mask to protect others.
From now on, let's take good care of ourselves!
【知识点】
英语话题写作、英语句型运用
【点评】
作文紧扣主题，结构清晰，涵盖保持健康的核心要点，运用了指定句型，语言流畅准确，符合投稿要求。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语话题应用文写作，要求以“How to Stay Healthy?”为题向学校英文报投稿。解题思路：①确定人称用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主；②结合给定的健康主题词块和句型仿写，围绕“如何保持健康”展开，涵盖饮食、锻炼、生病应对等核心要点；③遵循“点题-阐述方法-呼吁”的结构，注意词数80左右，不出现真实信息，符合投稿要求。
【解析】
写作时，首先用不定式作目的状语的句型点题，引出保持健康的相关做法；接着从饮食（多吃蔬果、少吃垃圾食品）、锻炼（定期锻炼）、生病处理（测体温、看医生、得流感戴口罩）等方面具体阐述，运用if引导的条件状语从句丰富内容；最后用“From now on”发出呼吁，确保内容紧扣主题，语言准确，词数符合要求。
【答案】
How to Stay Healthy?
Health is important to everyone. To stay healthy, there are many things we should do. First, we should eat more vegetables and fruit instead of eating too much junk food, which is harmful to our bodies. What's more, we should exercise regularly to stop us from getting sick. When we have a sore throat, have a runny nose, or have a fever, we'd better take our temperature and see a doctor. If we have the flu, we should wear a mask to protect others.
From now on, let's take good care of ourselves!
【知识点】
英语话题写作、英语句型运用
【点评】
作文紧扣主题，结构清晰，涵盖保持健康的核心要点，运用了指定句型，语言流畅准确，符合投稿要求。
【难度系数】
0.3
