六、书面表达。(满分20分)
假设你校英语报正在征集主题为"我的放松时刻"的短文,请你根据提示,写一篇英语短文介绍你喜欢的放松活动(如放风筝),并说明它能帮助放松的原因。
要求:
1. 内容包含活动名称、你的感受;
2. 说明该活动帮助你放松的理由;
3. 80词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Free-time activities are important for us to relax. My favourite way to relax is
假设你校英语报正在征集主题为"我的放松时刻"的短文,请你根据提示,写一篇英语短文介绍你喜欢的放松活动(如放风筝),并说明它能帮助放松的原因。
要求:
1. 内容包含活动名称、你的感受;
2. 说明该活动帮助你放松的理由;
3. 80词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Free-time activities are important for us to relax. My favourite way to relax is
答案
One possible version:
Free-time activities are important
for us to relax. My favourite way to relax
is flying a kite.
I often fly kites in the big city park
on sunny weekends—usually with a
colourful eagle-shaped kite. When I run a
little to let it go, watching it dance in the
blue sky with the wind, I feel very
happy.
This activity helps me relax deeply.
It lets me breathe fresh air instead of
staying in my room. What's more, it can
reduce my homework stress. Being
outdoors, even just for an hour, makes
me feel relaxed and ready for new
lessons.
Free-time activities are important
for us to relax. My favourite way to relax
is flying a kite.
I often fly kites in the big city park
on sunny weekends—usually with a
colourful eagle-shaped kite. When I run a
little to let it go, watching it dance in the
blue sky with the wind, I feel very
happy.
This activity helps me relax deeply.
It lets me breathe fresh air instead of
staying in my room. What's more, it can
reduce my homework stress. Being
outdoors, even just for an hour, makes
me feel relaxed and ready for new
lessons.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作主题为“我的放松时刻”,需围绕具体放松活动展开。第一步,承接已给开头,确定喜欢的放松活动(如放风筝);第二步,补充活动的时间、地点及个人感受;第三步,说明该活动帮助放松的具体理由,确保内容包含活动名称、感受、理由,且字数符合80词左右的要求,语言需通顺、符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,明确写出喜欢的放松活动为“flying a kite”;2. 补充活动细节:晴朗周末在城市大公园放风筝(常带彩色鹰形风筝),看着风筝在蓝天随风舞动时感到开心;3. 阐述放松理由:一是能呼吸新鲜空气,避免待在房间;二是可减少作业压力,户外一小时后能放松并准备新课,确保内容完整、结构清晰,符合题目要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Free-time activities are important for us to relax. My favourite way to relax is flying a kite.
I often fly kites in the big city park on sunny weekends—usually with a colourful eagle-shaped kite. When I run a little to let it go, watching it dance in the blue sky with the wind, I feel very happy.
This activity helps me relax deeply. It lets me breathe fresh air instead of staying in my room. What's more, it can reduce my homework stress. Being outdoors, even just for an hour, makes me feel relaxed and ready for new lessons.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、主题短文写作、理由阐述
【点评】
本文紧扣“我的放松时刻”主题,内容涵盖活动名称、个人感受及放松理由,结构清晰,语言流畅自然,符合80词左右的要求,是符合题目要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先明确写作主题为“我的放松时刻”,需围绕具体放松活动展开。第一步,承接已给开头,确定喜欢的放松活动(如放风筝);第二步,补充活动的时间、地点及个人感受;第三步,说明该活动帮助放松的具体理由,确保内容包含活动名称、感受、理由,且字数符合80词左右的要求,语言需通顺、符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,明确写出喜欢的放松活动为“flying a kite”;2. 补充活动细节:晴朗周末在城市大公园放风筝(常带彩色鹰形风筝),看着风筝在蓝天随风舞动时感到开心;3. 阐述放松理由:一是能呼吸新鲜空气,避免待在房间;二是可减少作业压力,户外一小时后能放松并准备新课,确保内容完整、结构清晰,符合题目要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Free-time activities are important for us to relax. My favourite way to relax is flying a kite.
I often fly kites in the big city park on sunny weekends—usually with a colourful eagle-shaped kite. When I run a little to let it go, watching it dance in the blue sky with the wind, I feel very happy.
This activity helps me relax deeply. It lets me breathe fresh air instead of staying in my room. What's more, it can reduce my homework stress. Being outdoors, even just for an hour, makes me feel relaxed and ready for new lessons.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、主题短文写作、理由阐述
【点评】
本文紧扣“我的放松时刻”主题,内容涵盖活动名称、个人感受及放松理由,结构清晰,语言流畅自然,符合80词左右的要求,是符合题目要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
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