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四、书面表达
文明的图书馆，是知识的殿堂；得体的举止，是素养的体现。学校图书馆计划开展 "文明借阅" 宣传活动，请你用英语写一篇介绍图书馆礼仪的文章，发布在学校英语角的宣传板上，让同学们更好地遵守图书馆规则。
注意事项: 1. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数不少于90，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good Library Manners
Library manners are important for a good learning environment and I am going to share some helpful advice.
We should follow these rules to make sure that everyone can enjoy the library. I hope that you will find my advice useful.
文明的图书馆，是知识的殿堂；得体的举止，是素养的体现。学校图书馆计划开展 "文明借阅" 宣传活动，请你用英语写一篇介绍图书馆礼仪的文章，发布在学校英语角的宣传板上，让同学们更好地遵守图书馆规则。
注意事项: 1. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数不少于90，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good Library Manners
Library manners are important for a good learning environment and I am going to share some helpful advice.
Firstly, when you are in the library, you should keep quiet. Do not talk loudly or make any noise. It is polite to walk softly and avoid troubling others. Also, never eat or drink in the library as it may make the place dirty.
Moreover, remember to take good care of the books. It is impolite to write or draw on them. When you finish reading a book, put it back. When you are about to leave, don't forget to check if you have returned all the books you borrowed.
We should follow these rules to make sure that everyone can enjoy the library. I hope that you will find my advice useful.
答案
One possible version:
Good Library Manners
Library manners are important for a good learning environment and I am going to share some helpful advice.
Firstly, when you are in the library, you should keep quiet. Do not talk loudly or make any noise. It is polite to walk softly and avoid troubling others. Also, never eat or drink in the library as it may make the place dirty.
Moreover, remember to take good care of the books. It is impolite to write or draw on them. When you finish reading a book, put it back. When you are about to leave, don't forget to check if you have returned all the books you borrowed.
We should follow these rules to make sure that everyone can enjoy the library. I hope that you will find my advice useful.
(90 words)
Good Library Manners
Library manners are important for a good learning environment and I am going to share some helpful advice.
Firstly, when you are in the library, you should keep quiet. Do not talk loudly or make any noise. It is polite to walk softly and avoid troubling others. Also, never eat or drink in the library as it may make the place dirty.
Moreover, remember to take good care of the books. It is impolite to write or draw on them. When you finish reading a book, put it back. When you are about to leave, don't forget to check if you have returned all the books you borrowed.
We should follow these rules to make sure that everyone can enjoy the library. I hope that you will find my advice useful.
(90 words)
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先要明确核心写作目的是给本校同学做文明借阅的宣传，内容要贴合大家日常使用图书馆的真实场景，不需要用太复杂的词汇，清晰易懂即可。首先首尾句已经给出，我们只需要填充中间的主体建议部分：第一步先想图书馆最基础的礼仪要求，也就是保持安静，把不大声喧哗、轻步行走不打扰他人这类内容写出来；第二步延伸到公共卫生要求，说明不能在馆内吃喝，避免弄脏环境和书籍；第三步写和借阅相关的图书爱护规则，比如不能在书上乱涂乱画、看完把书放回原位、离馆确认归还所有借阅的书籍。最后用firstly、also、moreover这类逻辑连接词把几个要点串起来，很容易就能达到不少于90词的要求，衔接上给定的结尾就完成写作了。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：确定文体是校园宣传倡议类短文，受众是本校同学，核心主题是介绍图书馆文明借阅礼仪，要求词数≥90，首尾句已给出无需自行创作。
2. 要点梳理：筛选3个核心维度的礼仪要求：①言行举止维度：保持安静，不大声交谈制造噪音，轻步行走避免干扰其他学习的同学；②公共卫生维度：不在馆内吃喝，避免弄脏馆内环境和书籍；③图书爱护维度：不能在图书上乱涂乱画，读完书后放回原位，准备离馆时确认自己归还了所有借阅的书籍。
3. 语篇组织：使用递进类逻辑连接词串联不同要点，全程用一般现在时给出倡议，语气友好得体，符合校园宣传的定位，最后通读检查语法错误，确认总词数达标即可。
【答案】
Firstly, when you are in the library, you should keep quiet. Do not talk loudly or make any noise. It is polite to walk softly and avoid troubling others. Also, never eat or drink in the library as it may make the place dirty.
Moreover, remember to take good care of the books. It is impolite to write or draw on them. When you finish reading a book, put it back. When you are about to leave, don't forget to check if you have returned all the books you borrowed.
【知识点】
1. 英语倡议书写作
2. 情景作文表达
3. 逻辑连接词运用
【点评】
本题选取学生非常熟悉的校园图书馆场景作为写作主题，完全贴合日常学习生活，没有设置过多的写作要点限制，学生完全可以结合自身的图书馆使用经历补充相关细节，难度较低，只要清晰表述出核心的文明借阅规则，保证语句通顺、词数达标即可取得不错的得分，是非常典型的校园应用类写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先要明确核心写作目的是给本校同学做文明借阅的宣传，内容要贴合大家日常使用图书馆的真实场景，不需要用太复杂的词汇，清晰易懂即可。首先首尾句已经给出，我们只需要填充中间的主体建议部分：第一步先想图书馆最基础的礼仪要求，也就是保持安静，把不大声喧哗、轻步行走不打扰他人这类内容写出来；第二步延伸到公共卫生要求，说明不能在馆内吃喝，避免弄脏环境和书籍；第三步写和借阅相关的图书爱护规则，比如不能在书上乱涂乱画、看完把书放回原位、离馆确认归还所有借阅的书籍。最后用firstly、also、moreover这类逻辑连接词把几个要点串起来，很容易就能达到不少于90词的要求，衔接上给定的结尾就完成写作了。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：确定文体是校园宣传倡议类短文，受众是本校同学，核心主题是介绍图书馆文明借阅礼仪，要求词数≥90，首尾句已给出无需自行创作。
2. 要点梳理：筛选3个核心维度的礼仪要求：①言行举止维度：保持安静，不大声交谈制造噪音，轻步行走避免干扰其他学习的同学；②公共卫生维度：不在馆内吃喝，避免弄脏馆内环境和书籍；③图书爱护维度：不能在图书上乱涂乱画，读完书后放回原位，准备离馆时确认自己归还了所有借阅的书籍。
3. 语篇组织：使用递进类逻辑连接词串联不同要点，全程用一般现在时给出倡议，语气友好得体，符合校园宣传的定位，最后通读检查语法错误，确认总词数达标即可。
【答案】
Firstly, when you are in the library, you should keep quiet. Do not talk loudly or make any noise. It is polite to walk softly and avoid troubling others. Also, never eat or drink in the library as it may make the place dirty.
Moreover, remember to take good care of the books. It is impolite to write or draw on them. When you finish reading a book, put it back. When you are about to leave, don't forget to check if you have returned all the books you borrowed.
【知识点】
1. 英语倡议书写作
2. 情景作文表达
3. 逻辑连接词运用
【点评】
本题选取学生非常熟悉的校园图书馆场景作为写作主题，完全贴合日常学习生活，没有设置过多的写作要点限制，学生完全可以结合自身的图书馆使用经历补充相关细节，难度较低，只要清晰表述出核心的文明借阅规则，保证语句通顺、词数达标即可取得不错的得分，是非常典型的校园应用类写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.7
