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为了丰富学生们的课余生活，你校英语社团面向全体学生调研最受欢迎的英语娱乐活动，调查结果如图所示。假如你是英语课代表李华，请结合你个人的实际情况，用英文给编辑写一篇邮件来协助社团完成调研。
内容:1.对调研活动的评价；
2.你本人最喜欢的社团活动(从调查结果中任选其一)，并陈述理由。
注意:1.文中不得出现真实人名、地名等；
2.80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
最受学生欢迎的英语社团活动
Dear editor,
Yesterday I took part in the survey about the most popular fun activities of the school English club.
为了丰富学生们的课余生活，你校英语社团面向全体学生调研最受欢迎的英语娱乐活动，调查结果如图所示。假如你是英语课代表李华，请结合你个人的实际情况，用英文给编辑写一篇邮件来协助社团完成调研。
内容:1.对调研活动的评价；
2.你本人最喜欢的社团活动(从调查结果中任选其一)，并陈述理由。
注意:1.文中不得出现真实人名、地名等；
2.80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
最受学生欢迎的英语社团活动
Dear editor,
Yesterday I took part in the survey about the most popular fun activities of the school English club.
The survey includes the interests among students and the importance of offering a range of activities. So it is meaningful to all students.
Among the fun activities, I found that English songs are my favourite. Not only do they raise my interest in learning vocabulary, but also they are helpful in understanding the different cultures.
In addition, listening to English songs always makes me relaxed, which brings me a calm feeling.
In conclusion, I think it is necessary to hold rich activities to make school life colourful.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear editor,
Yesterday I took part in the survey about the most popular fun activities of the school English club. The survey includes the interests among students and the importance of offering a range of activities. So it is meaningful to all students.
Among the fun activities, I found that English songs are my favourite. Not only do they raise my interest in learning vocabulary, but also they are helpful in understanding the different cultures. In addition, listening to English songs always makes me relaxed, which brings me a calm feeling.
In conclusion, I think it is necessary to hold rich activities to make school life colourful.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear editor,
Yesterday I took part in the survey about the most popular fun activities of the school English club. The survey includes the interests among students and the importance of offering a range of activities. So it is meaningful to all students.
Among the fun activities, I found that English songs are my favourite. Not only do they raise my interest in learning vocabulary, but also they are helpful in understanding the different cultures. In addition, listening to English songs always makes me relaxed, which brings me a calm feeling.
In conclusion, I think it is necessary to hold rich activities to make school life colourful.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以李华的身份给编辑写邮件，需结合饼图的英语社团活动调研结果完成内容。解题思路：首先明确写作要求，需包含对调研活动的评价、从调研结果中选一项活动并陈述理由；其次提取饼图中的活动信息（配音24%、讲故事31%、英语戏剧19%、英语歌曲26%）；最后按照邮件格式，先评价调研的意义，再选活动阐述理由，结尾总结，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，评价调研：说明调研能了解学生兴趣、丰富课余，对学生有意义；2. 选择英语歌曲作为最喜欢的活动，从三个角度阐述理由：帮助学习英语词汇、理解不同文化、让人放松；3. 结尾总结，呼应丰富校园生活的必要性，确保语言通顺、符合邮件格式，词数约80词。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear editor,
Yesterday I took part in the survey about the most popular fun activities of the school English club. The survey includes the interests among students and the importance of offering a range of activities. So it is meaningful to all students.
Among the fun activities, I found that English songs are my favourite. Not only do they raise my interest in learning vocabulary, but also they are helpful in understanding the different cultures. In addition, listening to English songs always makes me relaxed, which brings me a calm feeling.
In conclusion, I think it is necessary to hold rich activities to make school life colourful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书面表达、邮件写作、图表信息运用
【点评】本题结合图表信息考查英语邮件写作能力，要求学生准确提取图表内容并结合个人实际阐述理由，既考查语言运用的准确性，又注重逻辑表达的合理性，是初中英语常见的写作题型，贴近学生生活实际。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，评价调研：说明调研能了解学生兴趣、丰富课余，对学生有意义；2. 选择英语歌曲作为最喜欢的活动，从三个角度阐述理由：帮助学习英语词汇、理解不同文化、让人放松；3. 结尾总结，呼应丰富校园生活的必要性，确保语言通顺、符合邮件格式，词数约80词。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear editor,
Yesterday I took part in the survey about the most popular fun activities of the school English club. The survey includes the interests among students and the importance of offering a range of activities. So it is meaningful to all students.
Among the fun activities, I found that English songs are my favourite. Not only do they raise my interest in learning vocabulary, but also they are helpful in understanding the different cultures. In addition, listening to English songs always makes me relaxed, which brings me a calm feeling.
In conclusion, I think it is necessary to hold rich activities to make school life colourful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书面表达、邮件写作、图表信息运用
【点评】本题结合图表信息考查英语邮件写作能力，要求学生准确提取图表内容并结合个人实际阐述理由，既考查语言运用的准确性，又注重逻辑表达的合理性，是初中英语常见的写作题型，贴近学生生活实际。
【难度系数】0.5
