八、书面表达
寒假即将来临,假如你是张伟,你的英国笔友Tom来信询问你今年的寒假计划,请你给他写一封回信,内容要点如下:

注意:
1. 短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
3. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going with you?
Now I'm writing to tell you something about my winter holiday resolutions.
All in all, I hope I'll have a meaningful and colourful winter holiday.
Yours,
Zhang Wei
寒假即将来临,假如你是张伟,你的英国笔友Tom来信询问你今年的寒假计划,请你给他写一封回信,内容要点如下:
注意:
1. 短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
3. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going with you?
Now I'm writing to tell you something about my winter holiday resolutions.
All in all, I hope I'll have a meaningful and colourful winter holiday.
Yours,
Zhang Wei
答案
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
How is everything going with you? Now I'm writing to tell you something about my summer holiday resolutions.
Firstly, I'm going to have a good rest. I am going to listen to music and meet my friends. I'm going to the movies with friends. Secondly, I am going to do some reading. I want to read some English stories. Thirdly, I want to work as a volunteer. I can help some old people to clean rooms and wash clothes. I think the work is very interesting. Finally, I want to learn how to cook. If I can cook, I will help my mother.
All in all, I hope I'll have a meaningful and colourful summer holiday.
Yours,
Zhang Wei
Dear Tom,
How is everything going with you? Now I'm writing to tell you something about my summer holiday resolutions.
Firstly, I'm going to have a good rest. I am going to listen to music and meet my friends. I'm going to the movies with friends. Secondly, I am going to do some reading. I want to read some English stories. Thirdly, I want to work as a volunteer. I can help some old people to clean rooms and wash clothes. I think the work is very interesting. Finally, I want to learn how to cook. If I can cook, I will help my mother.
All in all, I hope I'll have a meaningful and colourful summer holiday.
Yours,
Zhang Wei
解析
【分析】本题要求以张伟的身份给英国笔友Tom写回信介绍寒假计划,需包含图中四个核心要点(好好休息、阅读、做志愿者、旅行),同时要符合书信格式、词数要求,适当补充细节使行文连贯。解题时需先对应四个要点,用连接词串联,补充合理细节,修正参考答案中出现的“summer”错误,紧扣“寒假”主题。
【解析】首先用连接词依次展开计划:1. 好好休息:我打算好好休息,和朋友看电影、聚会放松;2. 阅读:我会读一些英语故事提升英语;3. 做志愿者:我要去社区做志愿者,帮老人打扫房间;4. 旅行:我还计划去附近的古镇旅行。最后衔接结尾,确保内容连贯,符合词数要求。
【答案】Dear Tom,
How is everything going with you?
Now I'm writing to tell you something about my winter holiday resolutions.
Firstly, I'm going to have a good rest. I will watch movies and meet my friends to relax. Secondly, I am going to do some reading. I want to read some English stories to improve my English. Thirdly, I want to work as a volunteer. I can help the old people in the community clean their rooms. Finally, I will take a trip to the nearby ancient town.
All in all, I hope I'll have a meaningful and colourful winter holiday.
Yours,
Zhang Wei
【知识点】英语书信写作、话题要点整合、寒假计划表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力,要求紧扣给定要点,合理补充细节,符合书信格式,难度适中,适合学生练习。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先用连接词依次展开计划:1. 好好休息:我打算好好休息,和朋友看电影、聚会放松;2. 阅读:我会读一些英语故事提升英语;3. 做志愿者:我要去社区做志愿者,帮老人打扫房间;4. 旅行:我还计划去附近的古镇旅行。最后衔接结尾,确保内容连贯,符合词数要求。
【答案】Dear Tom,
How is everything going with you?
Now I'm writing to tell you something about my winter holiday resolutions.
Firstly, I'm going to have a good rest. I will watch movies and meet my friends to relax. Secondly, I am going to do some reading. I want to read some English stories to improve my English. Thirdly, I want to work as a volunteer. I can help the old people in the community clean their rooms. Finally, I will take a trip to the nearby ancient town.
All in all, I hope I'll have a meaningful and colourful winter holiday.
Yours,
Zhang Wei
【知识点】英语书信写作、话题要点整合、寒假计划表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力,要求紧扣给定要点,合理补充细节,符合书信格式,难度适中,适合学生练习。
【难度系数】0.5
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