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Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Mary向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下提示给她写一封回信,提出你的建议。短文须包括以下要点。词数不少于80,不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息。
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Mary向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下提示给她写一封回信,提出你的建议。短文须包括以下要点。词数不少于80,不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息。
答案
One possible version:
Dear Mary,
I'm glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First, before you try to memorize something, you'd better spend some time understanding it. It's important to understand new information before trying to memorize it.
Second, it's a good way to connect what you want to remember with what you have known. It can help you remember things for a long time. What's more, you can try making a picture of it in your mind. It is very helpful.
Finally, healthy food, enough sleep and exercise are also important for improving your memory.
I hope my advice will help you. And you can write back to me if you have any problems.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mary,
I'm glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First, before you try to memorize something, you'd better spend some time understanding it. It's important to understand new information before trying to memorize it.
Second, it's a good way to connect what you want to remember with what you have known. It can help you remember things for a long time. What's more, you can try making a picture of it in your mind. It is very helpful.
Finally, healthy food, enough sleep and exercise are also important for improving your memory.
I hope my advice will help you. And you can write back to me if you have any problems.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题是建议类英语书面表达，要求以李华的身份给笔友Mary写回信，主题为提高记忆力。需结合图示给出的四个方向（理解联系记忆、脑海形成画面、健康饮食、补充内容），遵循英语书信格式，分点阐述建议，确保内容紧扣主题、词数达标、语言通顺。
【解析】
1. 遵循书信格式：开头写称呼“Dear Mary”，结尾标注署名“Yours, Li Hua”；
2. 开篇点明写信目的：告知将给出提高记忆力的建议；
3. 分点提出符合图示的建议：
第一点：先理解要记忆的内容，再进行记忆，对应图示“理解，联系记忆”；
第二点：将新记忆内容与已知内容关联，在脑海中形成画面，对应图示“在脑海里形成画面”；
第三点：强调健康饮食、充足睡眠和锻炼对记忆力的重要性，对应图示“健康的饮食”；
4. 结尾表达希望建议有帮助，期待笔友回信。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mary,
I'm glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First, before you try to memorize something, you'd better spend some time understanding it. It's important to understand new information before trying to memorize it.
Second, it's a good way to connect what you want to remember with what you have known. It can help you remember things for a long time. What's more, you can try making a picture of it in your mind. It is very helpful.
Finally, healthy food, enough sleep and exercise are also important for improving your memory.
I hope my advice will help you. And you can write back to me if you have any problems.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议类书面表达
【点评】
该书信紧扣主题，结合图示要点展开，结构清晰，分点明确，符合英语书信格式，语言通顺流畅，有效回应了笔友的问题，符合题目要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是建议类英语书面表达，要求以李华的身份给笔友Mary写回信，主题为提高记忆力。需结合图示给出的四个方向（理解联系记忆、脑海形成画面、健康饮食、补充内容），遵循英语书信格式，分点阐述建议，确保内容紧扣主题、词数达标、语言通顺。
【解析】
1. 遵循书信格式：开头写称呼“Dear Mary”，结尾标注署名“Yours, Li Hua”；
2. 开篇点明写信目的：告知将给出提高记忆力的建议；
3. 分点提出符合图示的建议：
第一点：先理解要记忆的内容，再进行记忆，对应图示“理解，联系记忆”；
第二点：将新记忆内容与已知内容关联，在脑海中形成画面，对应图示“在脑海里形成画面”；
第三点：强调健康饮食、充足睡眠和锻炼对记忆力的重要性，对应图示“健康的饮食”；
4. 结尾表达希望建议有帮助，期待笔友回信。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mary,
I'm glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First, before you try to memorize something, you'd better spend some time understanding it. It's important to understand new information before trying to memorize it.
Second, it's a good way to connect what you want to remember with what you have known. It can help you remember things for a long time. What's more, you can try making a picture of it in your mind. It is very helpful.
Finally, healthy food, enough sleep and exercise are also important for improving your memory.
I hope my advice will help you. And you can write back to me if you have any problems.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议类书面表达
【点评】
该书信紧扣主题，结合图示要点展开，结构清晰，分点明确，符合英语书信格式，语言通顺流畅，有效回应了笔友的问题，符合题目要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
