Ⅵ. Think and write.(书面表达。)
以“My pocket money plan”为题,根据思维导图提示,写一篇小短文,说说你计划怎么使用零花钱。不少于6句话。

以“My pocket money plan”为题,根据思维导图提示,写一篇小短文,说说你计划怎么使用零花钱。不少于6句话。
答案
参考范文:
My pocket money plan
I have a good plan for my pocket money.
First, I will spend some money on school things like notebooks and pencils. Sometimes I will buy snacks, too. Second, I will save some for a gift for Mum and my winter holiday. Third, I will share some money to buy food for animals in need.
I think using money wisely makes me happy.
My pocket money plan
I have a good plan for my pocket money.
First, I will spend some money on school things like notebooks and pencils. Sometimes I will buy snacks, too. Second, I will save some for a gift for Mum and my winter holiday. Third, I will share some money to buy food for animals in need.
I think using money wisely makes me happy.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My pocket money plan”为题写短文,需结合思维导图的三个核心分支(spend花钱、save存钱、share分享)展开。首先明确各分支的含义:spend对应购买学习用品,可补充合理的日常开销;save对应给妈妈买礼物,可增加其他存钱用途;share对应为动物买食物,可明确分享的对象。写作时要围绕这三个方向组织内容,确保不少于6句话,最后加入对合理用钱的感悟,保证内容连贯、符合主题要求。
【解析】
参考范文:
My pocket money plan
I have a good plan for my pocket money.
First, I will spend some money on school things like notebooks and pencils. Sometimes I will buy snacks, too. Second, I will save some for a gift for Mum and my winter holiday. Third, I will share some money to buy food for animals in need.
I think using money wisely makes me happy.
【答案】
My pocket money plan
I have a good plan for my pocket money.
First, I will spend some money on school things like notebooks and pencils. Sometimes I will buy snacks, too. Second, I will save some for a gift for Mum and my winter holiday. Third, I will share some money to buy food for animals in need.
I think using money wisely makes me happy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、零花钱话题写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查书面表达能力,既要求学生围绕给定的零花钱使用方向组织内容,又渗透了合理规划金钱的意识,结构清晰,难度适中,适合基础阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以“My pocket money plan”为题写短文,需结合思维导图的三个核心分支(spend花钱、save存钱、share分享)展开。首先明确各分支的含义:spend对应购买学习用品,可补充合理的日常开销;save对应给妈妈买礼物,可增加其他存钱用途;share对应为动物买食物,可明确分享的对象。写作时要围绕这三个方向组织内容,确保不少于6句话,最后加入对合理用钱的感悟,保证内容连贯、符合主题要求。
【解析】
参考范文:
My pocket money plan
I have a good plan for my pocket money.
First, I will spend some money on school things like notebooks and pencils. Sometimes I will buy snacks, too. Second, I will save some for a gift for Mum and my winter holiday. Third, I will share some money to buy food for animals in need.
I think using money wisely makes me happy.
【答案】
My pocket money plan
I have a good plan for my pocket money.
First, I will spend some money on school things like notebooks and pencils. Sometimes I will buy snacks, too. Second, I will save some for a gift for Mum and my winter holiday. Third, I will share some money to buy food for animals in need.
I think using money wisely makes me happy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、零花钱话题写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查书面表达能力,既要求学生围绕给定的零花钱使用方向组织内容,又渗透了合理规划金钱的意识,结构清晰,难度适中,适合基础阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.5
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