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五、书面表达。
假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“保护濒危动物”的宣传活动，号召大家准备关于保护濒危动物的演讲。你们班的交换生Tom给你发了一封邮件向你询问相关事宜，请用英语回复他的邮件，词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you some information about our speech on protecting animals in danger.
If there is anything else I can do, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“保护濒危动物”的宣传活动，号召大家准备关于保护濒危动物的演讲。你们班的交换生Tom给你发了一封邮件向你询问相关事宜，请用英语回复他的邮件，词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you some information about our speech on protecting animals in danger.
If there is anything else I can do, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you some information about our speech on protecting animals in danger.
Our speech will take place next Monday.
There are many endangered animals in the world, such as pandas, elephants and golden monkeys. They are in great danger because some people hunt them, and their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller. We should take action to protect them. For example, we can stop hunting and protect their living areas. Also, we can raise money to help them. I think you can find some pictures about these animals and show them during your speech to make it more interesting.
If there is anything else I can do, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you some information about our speech on protecting animals in danger.
Our speech will take place next Monday.
There are many endangered animals in the world, such as pandas, elephants and golden monkeys. They are in great danger because some people hunt them, and their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller. We should take action to protect them. For example, we can stop hunting and protect their living areas. Also, we can raise money to help them. I think you can find some pictures about these animals and show them during your speech to make it more interesting.
If there is anything else I can do, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题是英语书面表达中的邮件写作题，要求回复Tom关于“保护濒危动物”演讲的相关事宜。解题时需紧扣表格提示的核心信息：演讲时间为下周一，演讲内容包含濒危动物现状、保护行动及建议；需结合邮件的语气和格式，用准确的英语组织内容，补充开头结尾之间的部分，控制词数约90词。
【解析】1. 先明确演讲时间：Our speech will take place next Monday. 2. 介绍濒危动物现状：列举熊猫、大象等濒危动物，说明它们因捕猎、栖息地缩减而面临危险。3. 说明保护行动：阻止捕猎、筹集资金帮助它们。4. 给出建议：可在演讲中展示动物图片让内容更生动。全程使用endangered, hunt, raise money等核心词汇，语句通顺，符合邮件的亲切语气。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you some information about our speech on protecting animals in danger.
Our speech will take place next Monday.
There are many endangered animals in the world, such as pandas, elephants and golden monkeys. They are in great danger because some people hunt them, and their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller. We should take action to protect them. For example, we can stop hunting and protect their living areas. Also, we can raise money to help them. I think you can find some pictures about these animals and show them during your speech to make it more interesting.
If there is anything else I can do, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语邮件写作、濒危动物词汇运用、一般现在时
【点评】本题结合环保主题考查实用英语写作，既要求学生准确提取提示信息，又锻炼语言组织能力，同时渗透保护动物的意识，是初中英语常见的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 先明确演讲时间：Our speech will take place next Monday. 2. 介绍濒危动物现状：列举熊猫、大象等濒危动物，说明它们因捕猎、栖息地缩减而面临危险。3. 说明保护行动：阻止捕猎、筹集资金帮助它们。4. 给出建议：可在演讲中展示动物图片让内容更生动。全程使用endangered, hunt, raise money等核心词汇，语句通顺，符合邮件的亲切语气。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you some information about our speech on protecting animals in danger.
Our speech will take place next Monday.
There are many endangered animals in the world, such as pandas, elephants and golden monkeys. They are in great danger because some people hunt them, and their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller. We should take action to protect them. For example, we can stop hunting and protect their living areas. Also, we can raise money to help them. I think you can find some pictures about these animals and show them during your speech to make it more interesting.
If there is anything else I can do, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语邮件写作、濒危动物词汇运用、一般现在时
【点评】本题结合环保主题考查实用英语写作，既要求学生准确提取提示信息，又锻炼语言组织能力，同时渗透保护动物的意识，是初中英语常见的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】0.6
