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(2026·江苏无锡一模)近年来,国家大力提倡美育,鼓励青少年走近艺术。为此,《21世纪英文报》的Workshop写作专栏正在进行以“The art form that walks with me”为题的征文活动。请你根据流程图提示的要点,写一篇英文短文投稿。
【注意事项】
1.短文要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意。
2.词数不少于90。
3.短文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
【注意事项】
1.短文要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意。
2.词数不少于90。
3.短文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
答案
One possible version
The art form that walks with me
Among all the art forms, painting is the one that has walked with me all these years. It opens my eyes to different cultures and ideas.
I like drawing flowers, animals and beautiful scenery. My favourite painter is Vincent van Gogh. His famous work Sunflowers is very bright and beautiful. It tells me to love life.
Painting has influenced me a lot. It makes me patient and careful. When I feel tired or sad, I draw pictures. It also makes me happy. Painting is not just a hobby, but a friend that makes me a better person.
The art form that walks with me
Among all the art forms, painting is the one that has walked with me all these years. It opens my eyes to different cultures and ideas.
I like drawing flowers, animals and beautiful scenery. My favourite painter is Vincent van Gogh. His famous work Sunflowers is very bright and beautiful. It tells me to love life.
Painting has influenced me a lot. It makes me patient and careful. When I feel tired or sad, I draw pictures. It also makes me happy. Painting is not just a hobby, but a friend that makes me a better person.
解析
【分析】本题为英语征文写作题，需依据流程图的三个核心要点构思并写作：首先明确自己最喜欢的艺术形式，说明喜爱的原因；其次介绍一位著名或特别的艺术家/其作品，阐述其出名或特别之处；最后说明该艺术形式对自己的影响。写作时需紧扣主题“The art form that walks with me”，做到语句通顺、意思连贯，词数不少于90，且不得使用真实个人或学校信息。
【解析】写作可按以下步骤进行：1. 开篇点明最喜欢的艺术形式（如绘画），说明其带来的益处（如开阔视野）；2. 选取喜爱的艺术家（如梵高）及其代表作（如《向日葵》），介绍作品特点及意义（如传递对生活的热爱）；3. 具体说明该艺术形式对自身的影响，如培养耐心、缓解负面情绪等；4. 结尾升华主题，表达该艺术形式不仅是爱好，更是成长的伙伴，使文章结构完整、内容连贯。
【答案】One possible version
The art form that walks with me
Among all the art forms, painting is the one that has walked with me all these years. It opens my eyes to different cultures and ideas.
I like drawing flowers, animals and beautiful scenery. My favourite painter is Vincent van Gogh. His famous work Sunflowers is very bright and beautiful. It tells me to love life.
Painting has influenced me a lot. It makes me patient and careful. When I feel tired or sad, I draw pictures. It also makes me happy. Painting is not just a hobby, but a friend that makes me a better person.
【知识点】英语短文写作 要点式写作
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，严格遵循流程图的三个要点展开，内容充实，语言通顺自然，情感真挚，清晰表达了个人对绘画的喜爱及绘画带来的积极影响，符合征文的各项要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作可按以下步骤进行：1. 开篇点明最喜欢的艺术形式（如绘画），说明其带来的益处（如开阔视野）；2. 选取喜爱的艺术家（如梵高）及其代表作（如《向日葵》），介绍作品特点及意义（如传递对生活的热爱）；3. 具体说明该艺术形式对自身的影响，如培养耐心、缓解负面情绪等；4. 结尾升华主题，表达该艺术形式不仅是爱好，更是成长的伙伴，使文章结构完整、内容连贯。
【答案】One possible version
The art form that walks with me
Among all the art forms, painting is the one that has walked with me all these years. It opens my eyes to different cultures and ideas.
I like drawing flowers, animals and beautiful scenery. My favourite painter is Vincent van Gogh. His famous work Sunflowers is very bright and beautiful. It tells me to love life.
Painting has influenced me a lot. It makes me patient and careful. When I feel tired or sad, I draw pictures. It also makes me happy. Painting is not just a hobby, but a friend that makes me a better person.
【知识点】英语短文写作 要点式写作
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，严格遵循流程图的三个要点展开，内容充实，语言通顺自然，情感真挚，清晰表达了个人对绘画的喜爱及绘画带来的积极影响，符合征文的各项要求。
【难度系数】0.5
