主题解读
本单元话题以“和谐家庭”展开,情境属于2022新课标“人与自我”和“人与社会”主题范畴中的“做人与做事”和“社会服务与人际沟通”两个主题群,涉及子主题“劳动实践”和“和谐家庭与社区生活”。话题要求学生们礼貌地表达请求和许可,引导学生们探索“家”的意义。在写作中,应使用“Could you please...?”句型,围绕家庭的日常事务展开,让学生表达自己对于“家”的感受和看法。
任务情境
最近,班里开展了一次关于“青少年是否应该做家务”的讨论活动。老师希望同学们结合自己的生活经验,谈谈对这个问题的看法,并分享自己在家做家务的情况。请你写一篇短文,记录下你的观点和感受,准备在班级讨论会上分享。
注意:1. 条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确;
2. 词数不少于70。
思路点拨

逐步突破——三步训练法
(一)短语翻译——根据写作要点翻译短语
1. 向某人寻求帮助
2. 扫地
3. 倒垃圾
4. 照顾
(二)句子翻译——结合(一)中短语和括号内的提示完成句子
1. 因为这能帮助他们的父母,也能帮助他们学会自己做事。(because 引导原因状语从句)


2. 当我完成作业时,我通常扫地并打扫洗手间。(when 引导时间状语从句)


3. 我的父母非常高兴看到我做家务。(be glad to do sth)


4. 我们也可以通过做家务来向父母表达我们的爱。(by + v. -ing 作方式状语)


(三)篇章展示——运用(二)中句子组成语段

(一)短语翻译
1. ask sb for help
2. sweep the floor
3. take out the rubbish
4. take care of/look after
(二)句子翻译
1. Because this can help their parents and also help them learn to do things on their own.
2. When I finish my homework, I usually sweep the floor and clean the bathroom.
3. My parents are very glad to see me do chores.
4. We can also show our love to our parents by doing chores.
(三)篇章展示
Now many teenagers don't do chores at home. Some of them always ask their parents for help. I think teenagers should do chores at home, because this can help their parents and also help them learn to do things on their own.
At home, I often help my parents with the chores. When I finish my homework, I usually sweep the floor and clean the bathroom. Also, I often take out the rubbish and water the flowers. My parents are very glad to see me do chores.
Doing chores helps us learn how to take care of ourselves. We can also show our love to our parents by doing chores.

【分析】首先审题确定写作要求：体裁为议论文，人称用第一人称，时态为一般现在时；接着按写作框架分步完成：第一步完成短语翻译，为句子和篇章打基础；第二步结合提示用短语完成句子，确保语法正确；第三步将句子组合成逻辑清晰的短文，开头表明青少年应做家务的观点，中间介绍自己做家务的具体情况，结尾表达做家务的意义和感想，注意词数不少于70，语句通顺。
【解析】1. 短语翻译：根据常用英语表达完成对应短语的翻译；2. 句子翻译：结合括号内提示（如because引导原因状语从句、when引导时间状语从句等），运用已译短语完成句子，确保语法正确；3. 篇章展示：将翻译好的句子按写作框架组合，开头点明观点，中间叙述自身做家务的经历，结尾表达感想，形成完整短文。
【答案】(一)短语翻译
1. ask sb for help
2. sweep the floor
3. take out the rubbish
4. take care of/look after
(二)句子翻译
1. Because this can help their parents and also help them learn to do things on their own.
2. When I finish my homework, I usually sweep the floor and clean the bathroom.
3. My parents are very glad to see me do chores.
4. We can also show our love to our parents by doing chores.
(三)篇章展示
Now many teenagers don't do chores at home. Some of them always ask their parents for help. I think teenagers should do chores at home, because this can help their parents and also help them learn to do things on their own.
At home, I often help my parents with the chores. When I finish my homework, I usually sweep the floor and clean the bathroom. Also, I often take out the rubbish and water the flowers. My parents are very glad to see me do chores.
Doing chores helps us learn how to take care of ourselves. We can also show our love to our parents by doing chores.
【知识点】英语议论文写作、短语翻译、一般现在时运用
【点评】本题围绕“青少年做家务”话题，结合单元“和谐家庭”主题，通过三步训练法引导学生完成写作，既巩固了短语、句子的运用，又培养了学生表达观点的能力，符合新课标对英语写作的要求，结构清晰，步骤明确，便于学生掌握。
【难度系数】0.5