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六、书面表达。
在丰富多彩的校园生活里，总有一些同学凭借自身闪光点脱颖而出。假设你是李明，学校要选举新的学生会主席，你觉得同班同学刘阳是最佳人选，打算向王老师写一封推荐信。请根据以下要点，用英语完成这封推荐信。
| 推荐对象 | 刘阳 |
| 特长 | 擅长演讲，在学校演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。 |
| 性格与品质 | 自信，在众人面前发言从不怯场；
有耐心，给同学讲解难题时，
无论重复多少遍都毫不生气；
勤奋，学习成绩一直名列前茅。 |
| 你的观点 | …… |
注意:1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Mr Wang,
I'm writing to recommend Liu Yang for the president of the Students' Union. He has many great qualities for this position.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
在丰富多彩的校园生活里，总有一些同学凭借自身闪光点脱颖而出。假设你是李明，学校要选举新的学生会主席，你觉得同班同学刘阳是最佳人选，打算向王老师写一封推荐信。请根据以下要点，用英语完成这封推荐信。
| 推荐对象 | 刘阳 |
| 特长 | 擅长演讲，在学校演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。 |
| 性格与品质 | 自信，在众人面前发言从不怯场；
有耐心，给同学讲解难题时，
无论重复多少遍都毫不生气；勤奋，学习成绩一直名列前茅。 |
| 你的观点 | …… |
注意:1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Mr Wang,
I'm writing to recommend Liu Yang for the president of the Students' Union. He has many great qualities for this position.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
答案
One possible version:
Dear Mr Wang,
I'm writing to recommend Liu Yang for the president of the Students' Union. He has many great qualities for this position.
Liu Yang is really good at speaking in public. He won first prize in the school speech competition. He is very confident. When speaking in front of others, he is never nervous. What's more, he believes he can take on any challenge in both studies and school activities.
He is patient. He explains difficult problems to the classmates again and again without getting angry. What impresses me most is his patience—he never gets tired of helping others.
Liu Yang is hard-working. He often reads extra books and broadens his knowledge. He is one of the top students in my class.
I hope that you will consider him for this position.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Dear Mr Wang,
I'm writing to recommend Liu Yang for the president of the Students' Union. He has many great qualities for this position.
Liu Yang is really good at speaking in public. He won first prize in the school speech competition. He is very confident. When speaking in front of others, he is never nervous. What's more, he believes he can take on any challenge in both studies and school activities.
He is patient. He explains difficult problems to the classmates again and again without getting angry. What impresses me most is his patience—he never gets tired of helping others.
Liu Yang is hard-working. He often reads extra books and broadens his knowledge. He is one of the top students in my class.
I hope that you will consider him for this position.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
解析
【分析】本题要求写一封推荐信推荐刘阳担任学生会主席，解题思路：1. 遵循英语书信格式，利用已给开头，补充主体内容与结尾；2. 围绕给定的特长、性格品质要点，适当添加细节使内容连贯；3. 最后表达推荐希望，确保词数达标、语言通顺。
【解析】1. 先介绍刘阳的特长：擅长演讲且获校演讲比赛一等奖，体现其适合学生会主席的相关能力；2. 再描述性格品质：自信（当众发言不紧张）、有耐心（帮同学讲题不生气）、勤奋（成绩优异），补充细节让内容更具体；3. 最后表达推荐的希望，符合英语书信表达习惯，完成写作任务。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mr Wang,
I'm writing to recommend Liu Yang for the president of the Students' Union. He has many great qualities for this position.
Liu Yang is really good at speaking in public. He won first prize in the school speech competition. He is very confident. When speaking in front of others, he is never nervous. What's more, he believes he can take on any challenge in both studies and school activities.
He is patient. He explains difficult problems to the classmates again and again without getting angry. What impresses me most is his patience—he never gets tired of helping others.
Liu Yang is hard-working. He often reads extra books and broadens his knowledge. He is one of the top students in my class.
I hope that you will consider him for this position.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【知识点】英语书信写作、英语书面表达
【点评】本文紧扣推荐信要求，覆盖所有要点，适当补充细节丰富内容，语言流畅自然，符合初中英语写作规范，很好地完成了推荐任务。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 先介绍刘阳的特长：擅长演讲且获校演讲比赛一等奖，体现其适合学生会主席的相关能力；2. 再描述性格品质：自信（当众发言不紧张）、有耐心（帮同学讲题不生气）、勤奋（成绩优异），补充细节让内容更具体；3. 最后表达推荐的希望，符合英语书信表达习惯，完成写作任务。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mr Wang,
I'm writing to recommend Liu Yang for the president of the Students' Union. He has many great qualities for this position.
Liu Yang is really good at speaking in public. He won first prize in the school speech competition. He is very confident. When speaking in front of others, he is never nervous. What's more, he believes he can take on any challenge in both studies and school activities.
He is patient. He explains difficult problems to the classmates again and again without getting angry. What impresses me most is his patience—he never gets tired of helping others.
Liu Yang is hard-working. He often reads extra books and broadens his knowledge. He is one of the top students in my class.
I hope that you will consider him for this position.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【知识点】英语书信写作、英语书面表达
【点评】本文紧扣推荐信要求，覆盖所有要点，适当补充细节丰富内容，语言流畅自然，符合初中英语写作规范，很好地完成了推荐任务。
【难度系数】0.6
