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Test 14
假如你是李梅，Amy是一名来自澳大利
亚的中学生，下个月她要来你们学校进行为
期一个月的交流学习，她将在你家暂住一段时间。请你根据下面的思维导图和写作要求
给Amy写一封电子邮件，简要地介绍一下你
的家庭成员、家规和你的个人爱好等情况，以
增进了解。
![ img ]写作要求:
1.短文应包含以上所有提示信息，可适
当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名
等信息;
3.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出，不
计入总词数)。
Dear Amy,
I'm glad that you are coming to China.
Wellcome to my home ! I'm looking forward
to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Mei
假如你是李梅，Amy是一名来自澳大利
亚的中学生，下个月她要来你们学校进行为
期一个月的交流学习，她将在你家暂住一段时间。请你根据下面的思维导图和写作要求
给Amy写一封电子邮件，简要地介绍一下你
的家庭成员、家规和你的个人爱好等情况，以
增进了解。
![ img ]写作要求:
1.短文应包含以上所有提示信息，可适
当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名
等信息;
3.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出，不
计入总词数)。
Dear Amy,
I'm glad that you are coming to China.
Wellcome to my home ! I'm looking forward
to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Mei
答案
One possible version:
Dear Amy,
I'm glad that you are coming to China. Let me tell you something about my family.
There are four people in my family. My father and mother are both doctors. They are busy every day. I have a 9-year-old sister. She is very cute. At home, I have to follow some rules. For example, I have to read for half an hour every day. I have to go to bed before 10:00 p.m. because enough sleep can make me study well. At weekends, I have to share some housework with my parents together. In my free time, I like doing sport to keep fit, such as jogging and playing volleyball. My hobbies are dancing and swimming.
Welcome to my home! I'm looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Mei
Dear Amy,
I'm glad that you are coming to China. Let me tell you something about my family.
There are four people in my family. My father and mother are both doctors. They are busy every day. I have a 9-year-old sister. She is very cute. At home, I have to follow some rules. For example, I have to read for half an hour every day. I have to go to bed before 10:00 p.m. because enough sleep can make me study well. At weekends, I have to share some housework with my parents together. In my free time, I like doing sport to keep fit, such as jogging and playing volleyball. My hobbies are dancing and swimming.
Welcome to my home! I'm looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Mei
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先明确写作任务：给即将来家中暂住的外国交流生Amy写邮件介绍相关情况，先梳理思维导图给出的所有核心要点：一是家庭成员包含爸爸、妈妈、妹妹；二是家规要求晚上10点前睡觉、分担家务；三是个人爱好为跳舞、游泳。接下来顺着逻辑推进写作：首先承接题目给出的开头句，引出要介绍自身和家庭相关情况；接着按顺序先介绍家庭成员，适当补充少量合理细节比如父母的职业、妹妹的特点，让内容更自然；之后介绍家规，清晰表述给定的规则内容，补充简单原因让逻辑更通顺；最后介绍个人爱好，还可以适当延伸表达后续可以和Amy一起参与相关活动的期待，最后衔接题目给出的结尾即可，全程注意不要出现真实的校名地名等信息，控制总词数在70左右。
【解析】
1. 开篇衔接：在给定开头后引出主题，自然开启介绍，避免行文突兀。
2. 家庭成员部分：说明全家一共四口人，依次介绍父母、妹妹，补充符合生活逻辑的小细节，让人物形象更鲜活。
3. 家规部分：先总述家中有需要共同遵守的规则，再依次说明要在晚上10点前上床睡觉保障睡眠，平时要和家人一起分担家务，完整覆盖思维导图给出的两个核心家规。
4. 爱好部分：介绍自己空闲时间的爱好，点明自己喜欢跳舞和游泳，补充说明爱好可以帮助自己保持健康，丰富内容。
5. 最后通读全文，确认所有提示要点都已包含，没有出现违规的真实信息，词数符合要求，行文流畅语气友好，适配给新朋友写邮件的场景。
【答案】
Dear Amy,
I'm glad that you are coming to China. Let me tell you something about my family.
There are four people in my family. My father and mother are both doctors. They are busy every day. I have a 9-year-old sister. She is very cute. At home, I have to follow some rules. For example, I have to read for half an hour every day. I have to go to bed before 10:00 p.m. because enough sleep can make me study well. At weekends, I have to share some housework with my parents together. In my free time, I like doing sport to keep fit, such as jogging and playing volleyball. My hobbies are dancing and swimming.
Welcome to my home! I'm looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Mei
【知识点】
英语电子邮件写作，家庭话题表达，情景应用文写作
【点评】
本题属于提示类基础应用文写作，所有核心信息都已经在思维导图中给出，学生只需要按逻辑把要点串联起来，适当补充少量合理细节，控制好词数，注意语气友好符合交流场景，就可以顺利完成写作，需要注意不要遗漏给定的核心要点，也不能出现题目禁止的真实个人相关信息。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先明确写作任务：给即将来家中暂住的外国交流生Amy写邮件介绍相关情况，先梳理思维导图给出的所有核心要点：一是家庭成员包含爸爸、妈妈、妹妹；二是家规要求晚上10点前睡觉、分担家务；三是个人爱好为跳舞、游泳。接下来顺着逻辑推进写作：首先承接题目给出的开头句，引出要介绍自身和家庭相关情况；接着按顺序先介绍家庭成员，适当补充少量合理细节比如父母的职业、妹妹的特点，让内容更自然；之后介绍家规，清晰表述给定的规则内容，补充简单原因让逻辑更通顺；最后介绍个人爱好，还可以适当延伸表达后续可以和Amy一起参与相关活动的期待，最后衔接题目给出的结尾即可，全程注意不要出现真实的校名地名等信息，控制总词数在70左右。
【解析】
1. 开篇衔接：在给定开头后引出主题，自然开启介绍，避免行文突兀。
2. 家庭成员部分：说明全家一共四口人，依次介绍父母、妹妹，补充符合生活逻辑的小细节，让人物形象更鲜活。
3. 家规部分：先总述家中有需要共同遵守的规则，再依次说明要在晚上10点前上床睡觉保障睡眠，平时要和家人一起分担家务，完整覆盖思维导图给出的两个核心家规。
4. 爱好部分：介绍自己空闲时间的爱好，点明自己喜欢跳舞和游泳，补充说明爱好可以帮助自己保持健康，丰富内容。
5. 最后通读全文，确认所有提示要点都已包含，没有出现违规的真实信息，词数符合要求，行文流畅语气友好，适配给新朋友写邮件的场景。
【答案】
Dear Amy,
I'm glad that you are coming to China. Let me tell you something about my family.
There are four people in my family. My father and mother are both doctors. They are busy every day. I have a 9-year-old sister. She is very cute. At home, I have to follow some rules. For example, I have to read for half an hour every day. I have to go to bed before 10:00 p.m. because enough sleep can make me study well. At weekends, I have to share some housework with my parents together. In my free time, I like doing sport to keep fit, such as jogging and playing volleyball. My hobbies are dancing and swimming.
Welcome to my home! I'm looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Mei
【知识点】
英语电子邮件写作，家庭话题表达，情景应用文写作
【点评】
本题属于提示类基础应用文写作，所有核心信息都已经在思维导图中给出，学生只需要按逻辑把要点串联起来，适当补充少量合理细节，控制好词数，注意语气友好符合交流场景，就可以顺利完成写作，需要注意不要遗漏给定的核心要点，也不能出现题目禁止的真实个人相关信息。
【难度系数】
0.7
