四、书面表达
据报道,某小区花墙长势喜人,吸引众多游客前来打卡拍照。假如你是该小区的住户,请根据以下内容为小区写一篇英文宣传报道,向某英文杂志旅游专栏投稿。

要求:
1. 报道应包括图示所有要点;
2. 条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、地名、校名等信息;
4. 词数80左右,文章标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Beautiful Neighbourhood
It is reported that the lovely flowers of my neighbourhood have attracted lots of tourists.
据报道,某小区花墙长势喜人,吸引众多游客前来打卡拍照。假如你是该小区的住户,请根据以下内容为小区写一篇英文宣传报道,向某英文杂志旅游专栏投稿。
要求:
1. 报道应包括图示所有要点;
2. 条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、地名、校名等信息;
4. 词数80左右,文章标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Beautiful Neighbourhood
It is reported that the lovely flowers of my neighbourhood have attracted lots of tourists.
答案
One possible version:
Beautiful Neighbourhood
It is reported that the lovely flowers of my neighbourhood have attracted lots of tourists. Our neighbourhood, which is always clean and tidy, is full of polite and friendly people.
Residents here enjoy various activities. There are fun sports games and interesting art shows like drawing on stones. These activities make our life colourful.
In the coming days, we'll focus on recycling and reusing used things. We aim to turn waste into useful items, making our neighbourhood a more eco-friendly and charming place.
Beautiful Neighbourhood
It is reported that the lovely flowers of my neighbourhood have attracted lots of tourists. Our neighbourhood, which is always clean and tidy, is full of polite and friendly people.
Residents here enjoy various activities. There are fun sports games and interesting art shows like drawing on stones. These activities make our life colourful.
In the coming days, we'll focus on recycling and reusing used things. We aim to turn waste into useful items, making our neighbourhood a more eco-friendly and charming place.
解析
【分析】
本题要求根据图示要点完成英文宣传报道,需先明确图示的三个核心信息:小区环境与居民特点、日常活动、未来计划;再结合已给开头,按“介绍小区现状→日常活动→未来规划”的逻辑组织内容,确保覆盖所有要点,行文连贯,符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,先描述小区的环境(clean and tidy)和居民特点(polite and friendly),对应图示第一个要点;
2. 接着介绍居民的活动:fun sports games和art shows(如drawing on stones),对应图示第二个要点,补充说明这些活动让生活多彩;
3. 最后说明未来的计划:recycle or reuse used things,提升小区的环保性和魅力,对应图示第三个要点,适当发挥使内容连贯。
【答案】
Beautiful Neighbourhood
It is reported that the lovely flowers of my neighbourhood have attracted lots of tourists. Our neighbourhood, which is always clean and tidy, is full of polite and friendly people.
Residents here enjoy various activities. There are fun sports games and interesting art shows like drawing on stones. These activities make our life colourful.
In the coming days, we'll focus on recycling and reusing used things. We aim to turn waste into useful items, making our neighbourhood a more eco-friendly and charming place.
【知识点】
英文写作、书面表达
【点评】
该作文覆盖了图示所有要点,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语言简洁符合要求,适当补充内容使行文自然,符合投稿的宣传目的。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求根据图示要点完成英文宣传报道,需先明确图示的三个核心信息:小区环境与居民特点、日常活动、未来计划;再结合已给开头,按“介绍小区现状→日常活动→未来规划”的逻辑组织内容,确保覆盖所有要点,行文连贯,符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,先描述小区的环境(clean and tidy)和居民特点(polite and friendly),对应图示第一个要点;
2. 接着介绍居民的活动:fun sports games和art shows(如drawing on stones),对应图示第二个要点,补充说明这些活动让生活多彩;
3. 最后说明未来的计划:recycle or reuse used things,提升小区的环保性和魅力,对应图示第三个要点,适当发挥使内容连贯。
【答案】
Beautiful Neighbourhood
It is reported that the lovely flowers of my neighbourhood have attracted lots of tourists. Our neighbourhood, which is always clean and tidy, is full of polite and friendly people.
Residents here enjoy various activities. There are fun sports games and interesting art shows like drawing on stones. These activities make our life colourful.
In the coming days, we'll focus on recycling and reusing used things. We aim to turn waste into useful items, making our neighbourhood a more eco-friendly and charming place.
【知识点】
英文写作、书面表达
【点评】
该作文覆盖了图示所有要点,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语言简洁符合要求,适当补充内容使行文自然,符合投稿的宣传目的。
【难度系数】
0.5
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