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山东潍坊是世界风筝的发源地，被誉为“世界风筝之都”。请你根据所给信息和参考词汇，写一篇不少于80词的短文，介绍潍坊风筝以及潍坊国际风筝节(Weifang International Kite Festival)。
参考词汇：implement 器具；bamboo cane 竹条；mythological figures 神话人物
山东潍坊是世界风筝的发源地，被誉为“世界风筝之都”。请你根据所给信息和参考词汇，写一篇不少于80词的短文，介绍潍坊风筝以及潍坊国际风筝节(Weifang International Kite Festival)。
参考词汇：implement 器具；bamboo cane 竹条；mythological figures 神话人物
答案
One possible version:
Most people like flying kites in spring. Weifang kites are famous all over the world.
Weifang kites are made finely and beautifully by hand. There are many kinds of Weifang kites in different shapes, such as animals, implements, historical characters and mythological figures. The kites are usually made of bamboo canes, paper or silk. Every year, the Weifang International Kite Festival is held on the third Saturday of April. More than 30 countries and regions all over the world come to take part in the competition. The festival has been successful since it first started in 1984.
Do you like kites? If so, then Weifang must be a perfect place for you. Come and enjoy yourself!
Most people like flying kites in spring. Weifang kites are famous all over the world.
Weifang kites are made finely and beautifully by hand. There are many kinds of Weifang kites in different shapes, such as animals, implements, historical characters and mythological figures. The kites are usually made of bamboo canes, paper or silk. Every year, the Weifang International Kite Festival is held on the third Saturday of April. More than 30 countries and regions all over the world come to take part in the competition. The festival has been successful since it first started in 1984.
Do you like kites? If so, then Weifang must be a perfect place for you. Come and enjoy yourself!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步先审题，明确写作核心主题是介绍潍坊风筝和潍坊国际风筝节，要求覆盖所有给定的信息点，字数不少于80词，属于介绍类的说明短文。接下来梳理写作思路：首先开篇可以用大众熟悉的春季放风筝的场景自然引入，点出潍坊风筝的高知名度；然后主体部分先完整介绍潍坊风筝的特点，把制作工艺、造型分类、制作材料这些给定信息全部融入，再顺承介绍潍坊国际风筝节的举办时间、参与规模、举办历史；最后补充简短的收尾邀请，让文章结构更完整。写作过程中注意对应参考词汇的正确使用，选择合适的时态：介绍常规属性用一般现在时，描述1984年至今的持续状态用现在完成时，保证语句通顺没有语法错误。
【解析】
1. 开篇铺垫：用大家春季喜爱放风筝的常见场景引入，自然引出潍坊风筝享誉全球的特点，快速点明主题。
2. 介绍潍坊风筝：依次说明潍坊风筝手工制作精美、造型多样的特点，逐一列举动物、器具、历史人物、神话人物等造型类别，再说明风筝的制作原材料是竹条、纸张或者丝绸，把所有给定的风筝相关信息点全部覆盖。
3. 介绍潍坊国际风筝节：顺承风筝的主题，说明风筝节的固定举办时间是每年四月的第三个周六，点明有来自全球30多个国家和地区的参赛者参与，再补充1984年首次举办后一直十分成功的背景信息。
4. 收尾补充：用友好的邀请句收尾，让文章逻辑连贯完整，最后检查所有信息点无遗漏，字数达标，修正语法和表达问题，避免中式英语。
【答案】
One possible version:
Most people like flying kites in spring. Weifang kites are famous all over the world.
Weifang kites are made finely and beautifully by hand. There are many kinds of Weifang kites in different shapes, such as animals, implements, historical characters and mythological figures. The kites are usually made of bamboo canes, paper or silk. Every year, the Weifang International Kite Festival is held on the third Saturday of April. More than 30 countries and regions all over the world come to take part in the competition. The festival has been successful since it first started in 1984.
Do you like kites? If so, then Weifang must be a perfect place for you. Come and enjoy yourself!
【知识点】
介绍类书面表达，现在完成时应用，话题词汇运用
【点评】
本题属于提示信息完备的说明类写作，所有核心内容都已经在题干中给出，学生只需要将中文提示转化为通顺的英文表达，补充少量衔接句让行文流畅即可，难度较低。写作时需要注意被动语态（be made of、be held等）的正确使用，不要遗漏任意一个给定的信息点，保证字数达标即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步先审题，明确写作核心主题是介绍潍坊风筝和潍坊国际风筝节，要求覆盖所有给定的信息点，字数不少于80词，属于介绍类的说明短文。接下来梳理写作思路：首先开篇可以用大众熟悉的春季放风筝的场景自然引入，点出潍坊风筝的高知名度；然后主体部分先完整介绍潍坊风筝的特点，把制作工艺、造型分类、制作材料这些给定信息全部融入，再顺承介绍潍坊国际风筝节的举办时间、参与规模、举办历史；最后补充简短的收尾邀请，让文章结构更完整。写作过程中注意对应参考词汇的正确使用，选择合适的时态：介绍常规属性用一般现在时，描述1984年至今的持续状态用现在完成时，保证语句通顺没有语法错误。
【解析】
1. 开篇铺垫：用大家春季喜爱放风筝的常见场景引入，自然引出潍坊风筝享誉全球的特点，快速点明主题。
2. 介绍潍坊风筝：依次说明潍坊风筝手工制作精美、造型多样的特点，逐一列举动物、器具、历史人物、神话人物等造型类别，再说明风筝的制作原材料是竹条、纸张或者丝绸，把所有给定的风筝相关信息点全部覆盖。
3. 介绍潍坊国际风筝节：顺承风筝的主题，说明风筝节的固定举办时间是每年四月的第三个周六，点明有来自全球30多个国家和地区的参赛者参与，再补充1984年首次举办后一直十分成功的背景信息。
4. 收尾补充：用友好的邀请句收尾，让文章逻辑连贯完整，最后检查所有信息点无遗漏，字数达标，修正语法和表达问题，避免中式英语。
【答案】
One possible version:
Most people like flying kites in spring. Weifang kites are famous all over the world.
Weifang kites are made finely and beautifully by hand. There are many kinds of Weifang kites in different shapes, such as animals, implements, historical characters and mythological figures. The kites are usually made of bamboo canes, paper or silk. Every year, the Weifang International Kite Festival is held on the third Saturday of April. More than 30 countries and regions all over the world come to take part in the competition. The festival has been successful since it first started in 1984.
Do you like kites? If so, then Weifang must be a perfect place for you. Come and enjoy yourself!
【知识点】
介绍类书面表达，现在完成时应用，话题词汇运用
【点评】
本题属于提示信息完备的说明类写作，所有核心内容都已经在题干中给出，学生只需要将中文提示转化为通顺的英文表达，补充少量衔接句让行文流畅即可，难度较低。写作时需要注意被动语态（be made of、be held等）的正确使用，不要遗漏任意一个给定的信息点，保证字数达标即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
