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随着社会发展，我们的生活发生了巨大变化。请以“Great Changes in Our Life”为题写一篇短文，介绍生活中的变化。内容包括：
1. 出行方式的改变；
2. 沟通方式的改变；
3. 你的感受。
要求：80词左右，语句通顺，语法正确。
★★★书面表达
随着社会发展，我们的生活发生了巨大变化。请以“Great Changes in Our Life”为题写一篇短文，介绍生活中的变化。内容包括：
1. 出行方式的改变；
2. 沟通方式的改变；
3. 你的感受。
要求：80词左右，语句通顺，语法正确。
答案
Great Changes in Our Life
With the development of society, great changes have taken place in our life. In the past, people mostly went out on foot or by bike. Now we can take the subway, drive private cars or use shared bikes to travel anywhere easily. Besides, people used to keep in touch by writing letters or using public telephones. Now we can talk to others on the mobile phone or have video calls anytime. I feel so lucky to live such a convenient life, and I believe our life will be better in the future.
With the development of society, great changes have taken place in our life. In the past, people mostly went out on foot or by bike. Now we can take the subway, drive private cars or use shared bikes to travel anywhere easily. Besides, people used to keep in touch by writing letters or using public telephones. Now we can talk to others on the mobile phone or have video calls anytime. I feel so lucky to live such a convenient life, and I believe our life will be better in the future.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题书面表达题，要求以“Great Changes in Our Life”为题，围绕生活变化展开写作，需涵盖出行方式改变、沟通方式改变及个人感受三个要点，词数约80词。解题思路：首先点明社会发展带来生活巨变的主题；接着通过过去与现在的对比，分别阐述出行、沟通方式的变化；最后表达个人对生活变化的感受，确保语句通顺、语法正确，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头点题：With the development of society, great changes have taken place in our life.
2. 阐述出行方式变化：In the past, people mostly went out on foot or by bike. Now we can take the subway, drive private cars or use shared bikes to travel anywhere easily.
3. 阐述沟通方式变化：Besides, people used to keep in touch by writing letters or using public telephones. Now we can talk to others on the mobile phone or have video calls anytime.
4. 表达个人感受：I feel so lucky to live such a convenient life, and I believe our life will be better in the future.
【答案】
Great Changes in Our Life
With the development of society, great changes have taken place in our life. In the past, people mostly went out on foot or by bike. Now we can take the subway, drive private cars or use shared bikes to travel anywhere easily. Besides, people used to keep in touch by writing letters or using public telephones. Now we can talk to others on the mobile phone or have video calls anytime. I feel so lucky to live such a convenient life, and I believe our life will be better in the future.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、生活变化类
【点评】
短文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，采用过去与现在对比的结构，逻辑清晰；语言简洁通顺，语法正确，符合80词左右的要求，是一篇符合标准的话题作文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语话题书面表达题，要求以“Great Changes in Our Life”为题，围绕生活变化展开写作，需涵盖出行方式改变、沟通方式改变及个人感受三个要点，词数约80词。解题思路：首先点明社会发展带来生活巨变的主题；接着通过过去与现在的对比，分别阐述出行、沟通方式的变化；最后表达个人对生活变化的感受，确保语句通顺、语法正确，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头点题：With the development of society, great changes have taken place in our life.
2. 阐述出行方式变化：In the past, people mostly went out on foot or by bike. Now we can take the subway, drive private cars or use shared bikes to travel anywhere easily.
3. 阐述沟通方式变化：Besides, people used to keep in touch by writing letters or using public telephones. Now we can talk to others on the mobile phone or have video calls anytime.
4. 表达个人感受：I feel so lucky to live such a convenient life, and I believe our life will be better in the future.
【答案】
Great Changes in Our Life
With the development of society, great changes have taken place in our life. In the past, people mostly went out on foot or by bike. Now we can take the subway, drive private cars or use shared bikes to travel anywhere easily. Besides, people used to keep in touch by writing letters or using public telephones. Now we can talk to others on the mobile phone or have video calls anytime. I feel so lucky to live such a convenient life, and I believe our life will be better in the future.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、生活变化类
【点评】
短文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，采用过去与现在对比的结构，逻辑清晰；语言简洁通顺，语法正确，符合80词左右的要求，是一篇符合标准的话题作文。
【难度系数】
0.5
