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（二）书面表达
假设你是中学生李明，你们班将举行关于“My Life in 20 Years”的英文主题班会。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇发言稿，畅谈你20年后的生活。
作文要求：语句连贯，词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
写作指导
（1）审题定调
文体： 时态： 人称：
（2）思路构建
My Life in 20 Years
Hello, everyone! What will my life be like in 20 years?
Thank you for listening!
假设你是中学生李明，你们班将举行关于“My Life in 20 Years”的英文主题班会。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇发言稿，畅谈你20年后的生活。
作文要求：语句连贯，词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
写作指导
（1）审题定调
文体： 时态： 人称：
（2）思路构建
My Life in 20 Years
Hello, everyone! What will my life be like in 20 years?
Thank you for listening!
答案
（1）说明文；一般将来时；第一人称
One possible version:
My Life in 20 Years
Hello, everyone! What will my life be like in 20 years? Overall, I think my life in the future will be happy, healthy and meaningful.
I will work as a doctor because I want to help sick people. Health is very important, so I will work hard to make a difference to people's lives. Besides my career, I will have my own happy family. In my free time, I will go on trips with my family. I will also take up new hobbies such as painting and hiking to relax after a busy week.
I believe life will be more meaningful with a good plan. To make my dream come true, I will study hard from now on and never give up.
Thank you for listening!
One possible version:
My Life in 20 Years
Hello, everyone! What will my life be like in 20 years? Overall, I think my life in the future will be happy, healthy and meaningful.
I will work as a doctor because I want to help sick people. Health is very important, so I will work hard to make a difference to people's lives. Besides my career, I will have my own happy family. In my free time, I will go on trips with my family. I will also take up new hobbies such as painting and hiking to relax after a busy week.
I believe life will be more meaningful with a good plan. To make my dream come true, I will study hard from now on and never give up.
Thank you for listening!
解析
【分析】解题思路：1. 审题：明确文体为发言稿（属于说明类），时态需用一般将来时（描述20年后的生活），人称使用第一人称（李明的身份）；2. 构思：围绕“My Life in 20 Years”主题，从职业、家庭、爱好、努力追梦几个角度展开，确保内容贴合要求；3. 写作：结合已给的开头结尾，补充中间内容，注意语句连贯，词数控制在70左右，正确使用一般将来时。
【解析】1. 审题定调：根据题目要求，文体为发言稿（说明文），时态为一般将来时，人称第一人称；2. 内容构思：围绕主题，选取职业（如医生，帮助他人）、家庭（幸福家庭，与家人旅行）、爱好（绘画、徒步）、当下努力追梦四个方向组织内容；3. 写作实施：开头结尾已给出，中间补充内容时，使用一般将来时保证时态正确，语句连贯，符合词数要求，完成发言稿。
【答案】（1）说明文；一般将来时；第一人称
One possible version:
My Life in 20 Years
Hello, everyone! What will my life be like in 20 years? Overall, I think my life in the future will be happy, healthy and meaningful.
I will work as a doctor because I want to help sick people. Health is very important, so I will work hard to make a difference to people's lives. Besides my career, I will have my own happy family. In my free time, I will go on trips with my family. I will also take up new hobbies such as painting and hiking to relax after a busy week.
I believe life will be more meaningful with a good plan. To make my dream come true, I will study hard from now on and never give up.
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般将来时
【点评】本题考查中学生英语写作能力，要求围绕指定主题展开，运用正确时态，语句连贯，贴近学生生活，难度适中，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】1. 审题定调：根据题目要求，文体为发言稿（说明文），时态为一般将来时，人称第一人称；2. 内容构思：围绕主题，选取职业（如医生，帮助他人）、家庭（幸福家庭，与家人旅行）、爱好（绘画、徒步）、当下努力追梦四个方向组织内容；3. 写作实施：开头结尾已给出，中间补充内容时，使用一般将来时保证时态正确，语句连贯，符合词数要求，完成发言稿。
【答案】（1）说明文；一般将来时；第一人称
One possible version:
My Life in 20 Years
Hello, everyone! What will my life be like in 20 years? Overall, I think my life in the future will be happy, healthy and meaningful.
I will work as a doctor because I want to help sick people. Health is very important, so I will work hard to make a difference to people's lives. Besides my career, I will have my own happy family. In my free time, I will go on trips with my family. I will also take up new hobbies such as painting and hiking to relax after a busy week.
I believe life will be more meaningful with a good plan. To make my dream come true, I will study hard from now on and never give up.
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般将来时
【点评】本题考查中学生英语写作能力，要求围绕指定主题展开，运用正确时态，语句连贯，贴近学生生活，难度适中，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.7
