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Ⅳ. 书面表达。
假设你是李华,班级内正在进行英语小组长(group leader)的竞选,你打算参加。请你根据要点提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿。
内容要点:1. 你打算竞选(run for)的原因;
2. 你觉得成为小组长所应具备的品质;
3. 你身上的优势。
要求:1. 要点齐全,适当拓展;
2. 行文连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 90词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua. Thank you for giving me the chance to run for the group leader for the English class.
假设你是李华,班级内正在进行英语小组长(group leader)的竞选,你打算参加。请你根据要点提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿。
内容要点:1. 你打算竞选(run for)的原因;
2. 你觉得成为小组长所应具备的品质;
3. 你身上的优势。
要求:1. 要点齐全,适当拓展;
2. 行文连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 90词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua. Thank you for giving me the chance to run for the group leader for the English class.
I'm excited about this role because I believe we can make English learning more enjoyable and effective together. In my opinion, a good group leader should not only be good at English but also be patient, helpful and responsible.
I've always been active in English activities and done well in exams. What's more, I'm a good listener and ready to help anyone with difficulties.
If I'm chosen, I'll hold fun activities like English Corner to help everyone make progress.
Thank you for your attention and support.
答案
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua. Thank you for giving me the chance to run for the group leader for the English class.
I'm excited about this role because I believe we can make English learning more enjoyable and effective together. In my opinion, a good group leader should not only be good at English but also be patient, helpful and responsible.
I've always been active in English activities and done well in exams. What's more, I'm a good listener and ready to help anyone with difficulties. If I'm chosen, I'll hold fun activities like English Corner to help everyone make progress.
Thank you for your attention and support.
Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua. Thank you for giving me the chance to run for the group leader for the English class.
I'm excited about this role because I believe we can make English learning more enjoyable and effective together. In my opinion, a good group leader should not only be good at English but also be patient, helpful and responsible.
I've always been active in English activities and done well in exams. What's more, I'm a good listener and ready to help anyone with difficulties. If I'm chosen, I'll hold fun activities like English Corner to help everyone make progress.
Thank you for your attention and support.
解析
【分析】
首先，我们要明确这是一篇竞选英语小组长的演讲稿，需紧扣题目给出的三个核心要点展开。第一步，思考竞选原因，可从带动大家提升英语学习乐趣和效率的角度切入，贴合班级学习场景；第二步，分析小组长应具备的品质，除了扎实的英语能力，还要突出沟通、负责、乐于助人等软素质，符合班干部的角色要求；第三步，结合自身实际阐述优势，比如英语成绩、参与活动的经历，还要补充当选后的具体计划，让竞选更有说服力。最后注意控制词数，保持行文连贯，语气要真诚、自信，符合演讲稿的风格。
【解析】
1. 承接开头：在给定开头后，直接点明竞选的初衷，用“I'm excited about this role because I believe we can make English learning more enjoyable and effective together.”清晰表达想和大家共同提升英语学习体验的想法。
2. 阐述品质：用“In my opinion, a good group leader should not only be good at English but also be patient, helpful and responsible.”明确指出优秀小组长需具备的英语能力和个人素养，逻辑清晰。
3. 介绍优势与计划：先说明自身英语学习表现（“I've always been active in English activities and done well in exams.”），再补充性格优势（“I'm a good listener and ready to help anyone with difficulties.”），最后提出当选后的具体活动（“hold fun activities like English Corner to help everyone make progress.”），让内容更充实可信。
4. 结尾致谢：用“Thank you for your attention and support.”礼貌收尾，符合演讲稿的规范。
【答案】
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua. Thank you for giving me the chance to run for the group leader for the English class.
I'm excited about this role because I believe we can make English learning more enjoyable and effective together. In my opinion, a good group leader should not only be good at English but also be patient, helpful and responsible.
I've always been active in English activities and done well in exams. What's more, I'm a good listener and ready to help anyone with difficulties. If I'm chosen, I'll hold fun activities like English Corner to help everyone make progress.
Thank you for your attention and support.
【知识点】
1. 演讲稿写作
2. 竞选类话题表达
3. 英语句式拓展
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目要求，要点齐全且有合理拓展，逻辑清晰，行文连贯。语言表达地道自然，既展现了自身优势，又提出了切实可行的学习计划，语气真诚自信，符合竞选演讲稿的语境，能有效打动听众，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们要明确这是一篇竞选英语小组长的演讲稿，需紧扣题目给出的三个核心要点展开。第一步，思考竞选原因，可从带动大家提升英语学习乐趣和效率的角度切入，贴合班级学习场景；第二步，分析小组长应具备的品质，除了扎实的英语能力，还要突出沟通、负责、乐于助人等软素质，符合班干部的角色要求；第三步，结合自身实际阐述优势，比如英语成绩、参与活动的经历，还要补充当选后的具体计划，让竞选更有说服力。最后注意控制词数，保持行文连贯，语气要真诚、自信，符合演讲稿的风格。
【解析】
1. 承接开头：在给定开头后，直接点明竞选的初衷，用“I'm excited about this role because I believe we can make English learning more enjoyable and effective together.”清晰表达想和大家共同提升英语学习体验的想法。
2. 阐述品质：用“In my opinion, a good group leader should not only be good at English but also be patient, helpful and responsible.”明确指出优秀小组长需具备的英语能力和个人素养，逻辑清晰。
3. 介绍优势与计划：先说明自身英语学习表现（“I've always been active in English activities and done well in exams.”），再补充性格优势（“I'm a good listener and ready to help anyone with difficulties.”），最后提出当选后的具体活动（“hold fun activities like English Corner to help everyone make progress.”），让内容更充实可信。
4. 结尾致谢：用“Thank you for your attention and support.”礼貌收尾，符合演讲稿的规范。
【答案】
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua. Thank you for giving me the chance to run for the group leader for the English class.
I'm excited about this role because I believe we can make English learning more enjoyable and effective together. In my opinion, a good group leader should not only be good at English but also be patient, helpful and responsible.
I've always been active in English activities and done well in exams. What's more, I'm a good listener and ready to help anyone with difficulties. If I'm chosen, I'll hold fun activities like English Corner to help everyone make progress.
Thank you for your attention and support.
【知识点】
1. 演讲稿写作
2. 竞选类话题表达
3. 英语句式拓展
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目要求，要点齐全且有合理拓展，逻辑清晰，行文连贯。语言表达地道自然，既展现了自身优势，又提出了切实可行的学习计划，语气真诚自信，符合竞选演讲稿的语境，能有效打动听众，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
