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假如你是李华，请你根据下面的思维导图，给你的好朋友 Jake 写一封邮件，向他推荐你最喜欢的一本书并说说你从中学到的道理。
【要求】（1）须包含导图中所有内容，可适当发挥；（2）不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息；（3）不少于 80 词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
分数：
书写：☆☆☆☆☆
结构：☆☆☆☆☆
内容：☆☆☆☆☆
Advice from your teacher：
Dear Jake，
The summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books. Let me share my favourite book with you.
I will keep the book forever and read it from time to time. And I strongly recommend it to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
假如你是李华，请你根据下面的思维导图，给你的好朋友 Jake 写一封邮件，向他推荐你最喜欢的一本书并说说你从中学到的道理。
【要求】（1）须包含导图中所有内容，可适当发挥；（2）不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息；（3）不少于 80 词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
分数：
书写：☆☆☆☆☆
结构：☆☆☆☆☆
内容：☆☆☆☆☆
Advice from your teacher：
Dear Jake，
The summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books. Let me share my favourite book with you.
I have read and kept many books from childhood. Among them, my favourite one is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain. It tells a story about a smart boy, Tom Sawyer. He lives in a small town near the Mississippi River in America. He has some unbelievable adventures with his friends. However, he isn't afraid in the face of difficulties.
My father gave the book to me on my 11th birthday. I have had it for two years. I like it because I have learned a lot from Tom Sawyer. His story encourages me to try hard to achieve my dream and never give up. It also tells me that it's important to be honest in life.（共119词）
My father gave the book to me on my 11th birthday. I have had it for two years. I like it because I have learned a lot from Tom Sawyer. His story encourages me to try hard to achieve my dream and never give up. It also tells me that it's important to be honest in life.（共119词）
I will keep the book forever and read it from time to time. And I strongly recommend it to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
答案
Dear Jake,
The summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books. Let me share my favourite book with you.
I have read and kept many books from childhood. Among them, my favourite one is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain. It tells a story about a smart boy, Tom Sawyer. He lives in a small town near the Mississippi River in America. He has some unbelievable adventures with his friends. However, he isn't afraid in the face of difficulties.
My father gave the book to me on my 11th birthday. I have had it for two years. I like it because I have learned a lot from Tom Sawyer. His story encourages me to try hard to achieve my dream and never give up. It also tells me that it's important to be honest in life.（共119词）
I will keep the book forever and read it from time to time. And I strongly recommend it to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
The summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books. Let me share my favourite book with you.
I have read and kept many books from childhood. Among them, my favourite one is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain. It tells a story about a smart boy, Tom Sawyer. He lives in a small town near the Mississippi River in America. He has some unbelievable adventures with his friends. However, he isn't afraid in the face of difficulties.
My father gave the book to me on my 11th birthday. I have had it for two years. I like it because I have learned a lot from Tom Sawyer. His story encourages me to try hard to achieve my dream and never give up. It also tells me that it's important to be honest in life.（共119词）
I will keep the book forever and read it from time to time. And I strongly recommend it to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
首先，明确这是一篇邮件写作题，需完成书籍推荐的任务，必须覆盖思维导图的全部要点：最喜欢的书的名称、拥有时长、获得方式、书籍内容、喜欢的原因及从中收获的道理。
思考步骤：
1. 选定一本熟悉的经典书籍，比如《汤姆·索亚历险记》，便于展开内容；
2. 按照思维导图的逻辑顺序，依次回应每个问题：先点明书名，接着介绍书籍核心内容；再说明书籍的获得途径和拥有时长；最后阐述喜欢的原因，重点结合从书中得到的启示，如勇敢、坚持、诚实等；
3. 结合题目给出的开头和结尾，将内容连贯串联，保证语言通顺，字数达标，且不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 承接题目给出的开头，自然引出要推荐的书籍；
2. 点明最喜欢的书是《The Adventures of Tom Sawyer》，简要介绍书籍内容：讲述美国密西西比河畔小镇里聪明男孩汤姆和朋友的冒险故事，突出汤姆面对困难不退缩的特点；
3. 说明书籍来源：父亲在11岁生日时赠送，至今已拥有2年；
4. 阐述喜欢的原因：从汤姆身上学到要努力追梦、永不放弃，还懂得了诚实的重要性；
5. 呼应题目给出的结尾，完成邮件内容，确保所有要点覆盖，语言流畅，符合邮件格式。
【答案】
Dear Jake,
The summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books. Let me share my favourite book with you.
I have read and kept many books from childhood. Among them, my favourite one is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain. It tells a story about a smart boy, Tom Sawyer. He lives in a small town near the Mississippi River in America. He has some unbelievable adventures with his friends. However, he isn't afraid in the face of difficulties.
My father gave the book to me on my 11th birthday. I have had it for two years. I like it because I have learned a lot from Tom Sawyer. His story encourages me to try hard to achieve my dream and never give up. It also tells me that it's important to be honest in life.
I will keep the book forever and read it from time to time. And I strongly recommend it to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
邮件写作、书籍推荐表达、记叙文写作
【点评】
这篇作文严格贴合题目要求，覆盖了思维导图的所有要点，内容充实具体，既介绍了书籍的基本信息，又结合自身感悟阐述了从书中获得的道理，语言流畅自然，符合邮件写作格式，字数也满足要求，是一篇优秀的推荐类邮件范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，明确这是一篇邮件写作题，需完成书籍推荐的任务，必须覆盖思维导图的全部要点：最喜欢的书的名称、拥有时长、获得方式、书籍内容、喜欢的原因及从中收获的道理。
思考步骤：
1. 选定一本熟悉的经典书籍，比如《汤姆·索亚历险记》，便于展开内容；
2. 按照思维导图的逻辑顺序，依次回应每个问题：先点明书名，接着介绍书籍核心内容；再说明书籍的获得途径和拥有时长；最后阐述喜欢的原因，重点结合从书中得到的启示，如勇敢、坚持、诚实等；
3. 结合题目给出的开头和结尾，将内容连贯串联，保证语言通顺，字数达标，且不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 承接题目给出的开头，自然引出要推荐的书籍；
2. 点明最喜欢的书是《The Adventures of Tom Sawyer》，简要介绍书籍内容：讲述美国密西西比河畔小镇里聪明男孩汤姆和朋友的冒险故事，突出汤姆面对困难不退缩的特点；
3. 说明书籍来源：父亲在11岁生日时赠送，至今已拥有2年；
4. 阐述喜欢的原因：从汤姆身上学到要努力追梦、永不放弃，还懂得了诚实的重要性；
5. 呼应题目给出的结尾，完成邮件内容，确保所有要点覆盖，语言流畅，符合邮件格式。
【答案】
Dear Jake,
The summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books. Let me share my favourite book with you.
I have read and kept many books from childhood. Among them, my favourite one is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain. It tells a story about a smart boy, Tom Sawyer. He lives in a small town near the Mississippi River in America. He has some unbelievable adventures with his friends. However, he isn't afraid in the face of difficulties.
My father gave the book to me on my 11th birthday. I have had it for two years. I like it because I have learned a lot from Tom Sawyer. His story encourages me to try hard to achieve my dream and never give up. It also tells me that it's important to be honest in life.
I will keep the book forever and read it from time to time. And I strongly recommend it to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
邮件写作、书籍推荐表达、记叙文写作
【点评】
这篇作文严格贴合题目要求，覆盖了思维导图的所有要点，内容充实具体，既介绍了书籍的基本信息，又结合自身感悟阐述了从书中获得的道理，语言流畅自然，符合邮件写作格式，字数也满足要求，是一篇优秀的推荐类邮件范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
