十二、书面表达。
暑假即将到来,你会如何度过呢?请根据下面的提示问题写一写你的假期计划。
提示问题:1. What will your summer vacation be like?
2. Where are you going?
3. Who are you going with?
4. How are you going there?
5. What are you going to do?
写作要求:1. 用“will / be going to”句型进行描述;2. 条理清晰,语句通顺、连贯;3. 书写规范,语法正确;4. 不少于 5 句话。
My plan for summer vacation
Hello, I’m
暑假即将到来,你会如何度过呢?请根据下面的提示问题写一写你的假期计划。
提示问题:1. What will your summer vacation be like?
2. Where are you going?
3. Who are you going with?
4. How are you going there?
5. What are you going to do?
写作要求:1. 用“will / be going to”句型进行描述;2. 条理清晰,语句通顺、连贯;3. 书写规范,语法正确;4. 不少于 5 句话。
My plan for summer vacation
Hello, I’m
Dongdong
. Summer vacation is coming. I’m going to have a wonderful
vacation.I'm going to Beijing with my parents. Beijing is far from Jiangxi. So we are going there by plane. It's fast. In Beijing, we are going to climb the Great Wall. We are going to visit Tian'anmen Square. We will also visit the Palace Museum. And we are going to eat Beijing roast duck. It's delicious.
答案
My plan for summer vacation
Hello, I'm Dongdong. Summer vacation is coming. I'm going to have a wonderful vacation.
I'm going to Beijing with my parents. Beijing is far from Jiangxi. So we are going there by plane. It's fast. In Beijing, we are going to climb the Great Wall. We are going to visit Tian'anmen Square. We will also visit the Palace Museum. And we are going to eat Beijing roast duck. It's delicious.
I think I will have much fun in Beijing. I can't wait.
Hello, I'm Dongdong. Summer vacation is coming. I'm going to have a wonderful vacation.
I'm going to Beijing with my parents. Beijing is far from Jiangxi. So we are going there by plane. It's fast. In Beijing, we are going to climb the Great Wall. We are going to visit Tian'anmen Square. We will also visit the Palace Museum. And we are going to eat Beijing roast duck. It's delicious.
I think I will have much fun in Beijing. I can't wait.
解析
【分析】
首先梳理写作思路:第一步先补全题干给出的开篇空缺,第一个空填写自己的姓名,第二个空填写形容假期的正向形容词;第二步逐一对应题干给出的5个提示问题,不要遗漏要点:先说明出行目的地、同行人员,再介绍前往的交通方式,之后列举假期里计划要做的各项活动,最后收尾表达对假期的期待,呼应“假期会是什么样”的核心描述;全程严格使用题目要求的will/be going to一般将来时句型,保证语句通顺,句数满足不少于5句的要求,逻辑连贯即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 补全开篇空缺:第一空填写合理的人名,比如Dongdong,第二空填写修饰假期的褒义形容词,比如wonderful,完成开篇引入。
2. 回应提示要点:首先点明要和父母一起去北京,对应问题2、3;接着说明北京距离江西较远,选择坐飞机出行,对应问题4;之后依次列举假期安排:爬长城、参观天安门广场、游览故宫博物院、品尝北京烤鸭,对应问题5;最后收尾表达自己会玩得很开心、十分期待假期,对应问题1的假期整体感受描述。
3. 全程所有计划类描述都使用will/be going to的一般将来时结构,语法正确,语句连贯,总句数远多于5句,符合所有写作要求。
【答案】
My plan for summer vacation
Hello, I'm Dongdong. Summer vacation is coming. I'm going to have a wonderful vacation.
I'm going to Beijing with my parents. Beijing is far from Jiangxi. So we are going there by plane. It's fast. In Beijing, we are going to climb the Great Wall. We are going to visit Tian'anmen Square. We will also visit the Palace Museum. And we are going to eat Beijing roast duck. It's delicious.
I think I will have much fun in Beijing. I can't wait.
【知识点】
一般将来时,英语书面表达,计划类话题写作
【点评】
本题是小学阶段典型的假期计划类写作题,题干给出了明确的提示问题和句型要求,写作门槛较低,学生只需要逐一覆盖所有提示要点,正确使用will和be going to的将来时结构,保证语句通顺无语法错误,达到规定句数即可拿到满分,写作时可以适当加入简单的修饰形容词,能让内容更生动自然。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先梳理写作思路:第一步先补全题干给出的开篇空缺,第一个空填写自己的姓名,第二个空填写形容假期的正向形容词;第二步逐一对应题干给出的5个提示问题,不要遗漏要点:先说明出行目的地、同行人员,再介绍前往的交通方式,之后列举假期里计划要做的各项活动,最后收尾表达对假期的期待,呼应“假期会是什么样”的核心描述;全程严格使用题目要求的will/be going to一般将来时句型,保证语句通顺,句数满足不少于5句的要求,逻辑连贯即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 补全开篇空缺:第一空填写合理的人名,比如Dongdong,第二空填写修饰假期的褒义形容词,比如wonderful,完成开篇引入。
2. 回应提示要点:首先点明要和父母一起去北京,对应问题2、3;接着说明北京距离江西较远,选择坐飞机出行,对应问题4;之后依次列举假期安排:爬长城、参观天安门广场、游览故宫博物院、品尝北京烤鸭,对应问题5;最后收尾表达自己会玩得很开心、十分期待假期,对应问题1的假期整体感受描述。
3. 全程所有计划类描述都使用will/be going to的一般将来时结构,语法正确,语句连贯,总句数远多于5句,符合所有写作要求。
【答案】
My plan for summer vacation
Hello, I'm Dongdong. Summer vacation is coming. I'm going to have a wonderful vacation.
I'm going to Beijing with my parents. Beijing is far from Jiangxi. So we are going there by plane. It's fast. In Beijing, we are going to climb the Great Wall. We are going to visit Tian'anmen Square. We will also visit the Palace Museum. And we are going to eat Beijing roast duck. It's delicious.
I think I will have much fun in Beijing. I can't wait.
【知识点】
一般将来时,英语书面表达,计划类话题写作
【点评】
本题是小学阶段典型的假期计划类写作题,题干给出了明确的提示问题和句型要求,写作门槛较低,学生只需要逐一覆盖所有提示要点,正确使用will和be going to的将来时结构,保证语句通顺无语法错误,达到规定句数即可拿到满分,写作时可以适当加入简单的修饰形容词,能让内容更生动自然。
【难度系数】
0.7
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