五、书面表达。
假如你是李明,请根据表格信息,写一篇英语小短文介绍自己和家人的生日及生日当天的活动吧!

My name is Li Ming. There are four people in my family.
假如你是李明,请根据表格信息,写一篇英语小短文介绍自己和家人的生日及生日当天的活动吧!
My name is Li Ming. There are four people in my family.
My father's birthday is on
March 20th. It's in spring. We often fly a
kite. My mother's birthday is on April
10th. It's cool in April. We usually go on a
picnic in the park. My sister's birthday is on
October 1st. It's the China National Day,
too. We go to Beijing to visit the Great
Wall. My birthday is on December 22nd.
We have a party and all of us are happy.
March 20th. It's in spring. We often fly a
kite. My mother's birthday is on April
10th. It's cool in April. We usually go on a
picnic in the park. My sister's birthday is on
October 1st. It's the China National Day,
too. We go to Beijing to visit the Great
Wall. My birthday is on December 22nd.
We have a party and all of us are happy.
答案
My name is Li Ming. There are four people
in my family. My father's birthday is on
March 20th. It's in spring. We often fly a
kite. My mother's birthday is on April
10th. It's cool in April. We usually go on a
picnic in the park. My sister's birthday is on
October 1st. It's the China National Day,
too. We go to Beijing to visit the Great
Wall. My birthday is on December 22nd.
We have a party and all of us are happy.
in my family. My father's birthday is on
March 20th. It's in spring. We often fly a
kite. My mother's birthday is on April
10th. It's cool in April. We usually go on a
picnic in the park. My sister's birthday is on
October 1st. It's the China National Day,
too. We go to Beijing to visit the Great
Wall. My birthday is on December 22nd.
We have a party and all of us are happy.
解析
【分析】
首先,我们要明确写作任务:以李明的身份,根据表格信息介绍家人和自己的生日及生日活动。解题思路如下:
1. 承接开头给出的内容,按照表格里的家庭成员顺序(父亲、母亲、姐姐、自己)依次展开介绍;
2. 介绍每个家庭成员时,先说明生日日期,可适当补充和日期相关的小细节(比如季节、节日),让内容更丰富,再描述对应的生日活动;
3. 最后可以添加一句表达开心的感受,让短文更完整自然。
【解析】
1. 先介绍父亲:点明父亲生日是March 20th,补充“It's in spring.”,然后写活动“We often fly a kite.”;
2. 接着介绍母亲:说明母亲生日是April 10th,补充“It's cool in April.”,细化活动地点“We usually go on a picnic in the park.”;
3. 再介绍姐姐:指出姐姐生日是October 1st,补充“It's the China National Day,too.”,明确活动内容“We go to Beijing to visit the Great Wall.”;
4. 最后介绍自己:说明自己生日是December 22nd,写活动“We have a party and all of us are happy.”;
将这些内容连贯起来,形成一篇通顺的短文。
【答案】
My name is Li Ming. There are four people
in my family. My father's birthday is on
March 20th. It's in spring. We often fly a
kite. My mother's birthday is on April
10th. It's cool in April. We usually go on a
picnic in the park. My sister's birthday is on
October 1st. It's the China National Day,
too. We go to Beijing to visit the Great
Wall. My birthday is on December 22nd.
We have a party and all of us are happy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、日期表达、日常活动表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求和表格信息,内容完整有条理,还合理添加了季节、节日等细节,使短文内容更充实,语句通顺自然,符合英语书面表达的要求,能清晰传达家人的生日及活动信息。
【难度系数】
0.8
首先,我们要明确写作任务:以李明的身份,根据表格信息介绍家人和自己的生日及生日活动。解题思路如下:
1. 承接开头给出的内容,按照表格里的家庭成员顺序(父亲、母亲、姐姐、自己)依次展开介绍;
2. 介绍每个家庭成员时,先说明生日日期,可适当补充和日期相关的小细节(比如季节、节日),让内容更丰富,再描述对应的生日活动;
3. 最后可以添加一句表达开心的感受,让短文更完整自然。
【解析】
1. 先介绍父亲:点明父亲生日是March 20th,补充“It's in spring.”,然后写活动“We often fly a kite.”;
2. 接着介绍母亲:说明母亲生日是April 10th,补充“It's cool in April.”,细化活动地点“We usually go on a picnic in the park.”;
3. 再介绍姐姐:指出姐姐生日是October 1st,补充“It's the China National Day,too.”,明确活动内容“We go to Beijing to visit the Great Wall.”;
4. 最后介绍自己:说明自己生日是December 22nd,写活动“We have a party and all of us are happy.”;
将这些内容连贯起来,形成一篇通顺的短文。
【答案】
My name is Li Ming. There are four people
in my family. My father's birthday is on
March 20th. It's in spring. We often fly a
kite. My mother's birthday is on April
10th. It's cool in April. We usually go on a
picnic in the park. My sister's birthday is on
October 1st. It's the China National Day,
too. We go to Beijing to visit the Great
Wall. My birthday is on December 22nd.
We have a party and all of us are happy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、日期表达、日常活动表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求和表格信息,内容完整有条理,还合理添加了季节、节日等细节,使短文内容更充实,语句通顺自然,符合英语书面表达的要求,能清晰传达家人的生日及活动信息。
【难度系数】
0.8
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