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你校的英语社团正在组织一次环保活动讨论会，本周的主题是 “Building a green campus (校园), starting from me” ，你打算以 “My green actions on our campus” 为题分享你的相关做法与想法。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1. 开展绿色校园活动的原因；
2. 你打算采取的具体行动；
3. 本次活动的积极影响。
注意：1. 词数 90 左右；
2. 发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My green actions on our campus
Hello everyone,
Building a green campus is important.
Let's work together for a green campus!
Thank you!
你校的英语社团正在组织一次环保活动讨论会，本周的主题是 “Building a green campus (校园), starting from me” ，你打算以 “My green actions on our campus” 为题分享你的相关做法与想法。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1. 开展绿色校园活动的原因；
2. 你打算采取的具体行动；
3. 本次活动的积极影响。
注意：1. 词数 90 左右；
2. 发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My green actions on our campus
Hello everyone,
Building a green campus is important.
Let's work together for a green campus!
Thank you!
答案
It helps us stay healthy and makes our school
a nicer place to study and live. Also, it teaches us to care about the environment.
To make it greener, I will take small but useful actions. First, I will save water and electricity
by turning off taps and lights when I leave the classroom. Second, I will use both sides of paper
and bring a reusable bottle instead of plastic ones. Third, I will join the school's tree-planting activity
and pick up litter on the playground.
These actions will have good influences. They can set a good example for my classmates.
More students will join us, and our campus will become cleaner and more beautiful.
a nicer place to study and live. Also, it teaches us to care about the environment.
To make it greener, I will take small but useful actions. First, I will save water and electricity
by turning off taps and lights when I leave the classroom. Second, I will use both sides of paper
and bring a reusable bottle instead of plastic ones. Third, I will join the school's tree-planting activity
and pick up litter on the playground.
These actions will have good influences. They can set a good example for my classmates.
More students will join us, and our campus will become cleaner and more beautiful.
解析
【解析】
本文需围绕主题完成发言稿写作，分三部分展开：1. 从健康、校园环境、环保意识培养三方面阐述建设绿色校园的原因；2. 结合校园实际，从节水节电、节约用纸、参与环保活动三个角度列举具体行动；3. 从榜样作用和校园环境变化两方面说明活动的积极影响。写作时注意用词简洁，语句衔接自然，符合词数要求。
【答案】
It helps us stay healthy and makes our school
a nicer place to study and live. Also, it teaches us to care about the environment.
To make it greener, I will take small but useful actions. First, I will save water and electricity
by turning off taps and lights when I leave the classroom. Second, I will use both sides of paper
and bring a reusable bottle instead of plastic ones. Third, I will join the school's tree-planting activity
and pick up litter on the playground.
These actions will have good influences. They can set a good example for my classmates.
More students will join us, and our campus will become cleaner and more beautiful.
【知识点】
英语发言稿写作、环保主题表达、语句逻辑衔接
【点评】
本文结构清晰，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，内容贴合校园实际场景，语言简洁地道，符合发言稿的语气要求，词数达标，能清晰传达个人的环保行动与理念。
【难度系数】
0.6
本文需围绕主题完成发言稿写作，分三部分展开：1. 从健康、校园环境、环保意识培养三方面阐述建设绿色校园的原因；2. 结合校园实际，从节水节电、节约用纸、参与环保活动三个角度列举具体行动；3. 从榜样作用和校园环境变化两方面说明活动的积极影响。写作时注意用词简洁，语句衔接自然，符合词数要求。
【答案】
It helps us stay healthy and makes our school
a nicer place to study and live. Also, it teaches us to care about the environment.
To make it greener, I will take small but useful actions. First, I will save water and electricity
by turning off taps and lights when I leave the classroom. Second, I will use both sides of paper
and bring a reusable bottle instead of plastic ones. Third, I will join the school's tree-planting activity
and pick up litter on the playground.
These actions will have good influences. They can set a good example for my classmates.
More students will join us, and our campus will become cleaner and more beautiful.
【知识点】
英语发言稿写作、环保主题表达、语句逻辑衔接
【点评】
本文结构清晰，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，内容贴合校园实际场景，语言简洁地道，符合发言稿的语气要求，词数达标，能清晰传达个人的环保行动与理念。
【难度系数】
0.6
