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第四部分 书面表达
76. 假设你是李平，以下是一封来自你的朋友 David 的邮件。请阅读邮件并回复。
To liping@.com
Subject Can you help me?
Dear Li Ping,
How are you doing? I have a problem and really need your advice. I joined the school basketball team last month, but it takes so much time. I practise every evening after class, so I can’t finish my homework on time. My parents are worried about my grades, and I feel stressed too. I love playing basketball, but I don’t want to fall behind in studies. What should I do?
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
David
要求：
(1) 80 词左右；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的地名与人名。
Dear David,
Yours,
Li Ping
76. 假设你是李平，以下是一封来自你的朋友 David 的邮件。请阅读邮件并回复。
To liping@.com
Subject Can you help me?
Dear Li Ping,
How are you doing? I have a problem and really need your advice. I joined the school basketball team last month, but it takes so much time. I practise every evening after class, so I can’t finish my homework on time. My parents are worried about my grades, and I feel stressed too. I love playing basketball, but I don’t want to fall behind in studies. What should I do?
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
David
要求：
(1) 80 词左右；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的地名与人名。
Dear David,
Yours,
Li Ping
答案
76. One possible version:
Dear David,
I'm sorry to hear that you're feeling stressed. I understand it's a tough situation, and I think the key is to find a balance.
First, you can try making a daily plan. Use the breaks between classes to finish simple homework. This way, you'll have less to do after practice. Also, talk openly with your coach—explain your worries, and ask if you can spend less time practising before important exams. Remember to communicate with your parents too. Tell them about your plans.
I'm sure you can manage both your studies and your hobby!
Yours,
Li Ping
Dear David,
I'm sorry to hear that you're feeling stressed. I understand it's a tough situation, and I think the key is to find a balance.
First, you can try making a daily plan. Use the breaks between classes to finish simple homework. This way, you'll have less to do after practice. Also, talk openly with your coach—explain your worries, and ask if you can spend less time practising before important exams. Remember to communicate with your parents too. Tell them about your plans.
I'm sure you can manage both your studies and your hobby!
Yours,
Li Ping
解析
【分析】
首先要明确David的核心困境：热爱篮球但训练占用大量时间，导致作业无法按时完成，父母担心成绩，自己压力大。解题思路为：1. 开头先共情，表达对他处境的理解；2. 给出具体可操作的平衡建议，要贴合他的实际情况，比如利用碎片化时间、和教练及父母沟通；3. 结尾给予鼓励，增强他的信心。要注意书信格式，控制字数在80词左右，语言要自然地道。
【解析】
1. 开头：用"I'm sorry to hear that you're feeling stressed. I understand it's a tough situation, and I think the key is to find a balance."表达共情，点明解决核心是平衡时间。
2. 主体建议：①制定每日计划，利用课间完成简单作业，减少课后任务量；②和教练沟通，说明担忧，请求考前适当减少训练时间；③和父母交流自己的计划，打消他们的顾虑。这些建议针对性强，能有效解决David的冲突。
3. 结尾：用"I'm sure you can manage both your studies and your hobby!"给予鼓励，符合书信的友好语气。整体结构清晰，符合字数要求，语言流畅自然。
【答案】
Dear David,
I'm sorry to hear that you're feeling stressed. I understand it's a tough situation, and I think the key is to find a balance.
First, you can try making a daily plan. Use the breaks between classes to finish simple homework. This way, you'll have less to do after practice. Also, talk openly with your coach—explain your worries, and ask if you can spend less time practising before important exams. Remember to communicate with your parents too. Tell them about your plans.
I'm sure you can manage both your studies and your hobby!
Yours,
Li Ping
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议类句型运用
【点评】
这篇回复结构清晰，开篇共情拉近距离，中间给出的建议具体可行，贴合David的实际困境，既兼顾了他对篮球的热爱，又解决了学习上的问题，结尾的鼓励温暖有力。语言地道自然，符合书信格式和字数要求，是一篇优秀的回复范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先要明确David的核心困境：热爱篮球但训练占用大量时间，导致作业无法按时完成，父母担心成绩，自己压力大。解题思路为：1. 开头先共情，表达对他处境的理解；2. 给出具体可操作的平衡建议，要贴合他的实际情况，比如利用碎片化时间、和教练及父母沟通；3. 结尾给予鼓励，增强他的信心。要注意书信格式，控制字数在80词左右，语言要自然地道。
【解析】
1. 开头：用"I'm sorry to hear that you're feeling stressed. I understand it's a tough situation, and I think the key is to find a balance."表达共情，点明解决核心是平衡时间。
2. 主体建议：①制定每日计划，利用课间完成简单作业，减少课后任务量；②和教练沟通，说明担忧，请求考前适当减少训练时间；③和父母交流自己的计划，打消他们的顾虑。这些建议针对性强，能有效解决David的冲突。
3. 结尾：用"I'm sure you can manage both your studies and your hobby!"给予鼓励，符合书信的友好语气。整体结构清晰，符合字数要求，语言流畅自然。
【答案】
Dear David,
I'm sorry to hear that you're feeling stressed. I understand it's a tough situation, and I think the key is to find a balance.
First, you can try making a daily plan. Use the breaks between classes to finish simple homework. This way, you'll have less to do after practice. Also, talk openly with your coach—explain your worries, and ask if you can spend less time practising before important exams. Remember to communicate with your parents too. Tell them about your plans.
I'm sure you can manage both your studies and your hobby!
Yours,
Li Ping
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议类句型运用
【点评】
这篇回复结构清晰，开篇共情拉近距离，中间给出的建议具体可行，贴合David的实际困境，既兼顾了他对篮球的热爱，又解决了学习上的问题，结尾的鼓励温暖有力。语言地道自然，符合书信格式和字数要求，是一篇优秀的回复范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
