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六、书面表达。(9分)
小学生活即将结束，六年级(3)班的同学打算在毕业前进行一次班级聚会。假如你是班级的一员，请根据所给表格中提供的信息，写一篇60词左右的英语小短文，介绍一下此次聚会的事宜。注意：表达流畅，语法正确，可适当发挥想象。
小学生活即将结束，六年级(3)班的同学打算在毕业前进行一次班级聚会。假如你是班级的一员，请根据所给表格中提供的信息，写一篇60词左右的英语小短文，介绍一下此次聚会的事宜。注意：表达流畅，语法正确，可适当发挥想象。
答案
示例:
Our class will have a great party in Hongmei
Park next Sunday. We'll do lots of fun things like
having a picnic, flying kites and singing songs
together. We may also play some group games.
Please remember to bring some food and
drinks to share. Don't forget to take a little pocket
money with you, just in case. Also, it's important
to look after your own things and follow the traffic
rules on the way.
Let's make this day special before we say
goodbye to our primary school life. I can't wait to
see everyone there!
Our class will have a great party in Hongmei
Park next Sunday. We'll do lots of fun things like
having a picnic, flying kites and singing songs
together. We may also play some group games.
Please remember to bring some food and
drinks to share. Don't forget to take a little pocket
money with you, just in case. Also, it's important
to look after your own things and follow the traffic
rules on the way.
Let's make this day special before we say
goodbye to our primary school life. I can't wait to
see everyone there!
解析
【分析】
首先，我们需要明确题目要求：介绍毕业前班级聚会的事宜，需涵盖关键信息且语言流畅。解题思路如下：
1. 开篇点明聚会的核心信息：时间、地点，让读者快速了解聚会基本安排；
2. 中间部分列举具体活动，结合小学生的日常活动场景，比如野餐、放风筝等，使内容真实可感；
3. 接着补充注意事项，比如带食物饮料、保管物品、遵守交通规则等，体现考虑周全；
4. 结尾表达对聚会的期待和对小学生活的不舍，升华情感，符合毕业聚会的氛围。全程使用一般将来时，契合“计划中”的聚会语境。
【解析】
步骤1：搭建文章框架，采用“引入核心信息-详述活动与注意事项-表达期待”的结构；
步骤2：运用一般将来时（will+动词原形、may+动词原形）组织句子，比如“We'll do lots of fun things...”“We may also play some group games...”，准确表达计划中的活动；
步骤3：填充细节，结合小学生的生活实际，列举贴合场景的活动和实用的注意事项，同时适当发挥，加入情感表达，如“Let's make this day special before we say goodbye...”；
步骤4：检查语法和语句流畅度，确保符合题目要求的表达规范。
【答案】
Our class will have a great party in Hongmei
Park next Sunday. We'll do lots of fun things like
having a picnic, flying kites and singing songs
together. We may also play some group games.
Please remember to bring some food and
drinks to share. Don't forget to take a little pocket
money with you, just in case. Also, it's important
to look after your own things and follow the traffic
rules on the way.
Let's make this day special before we say
goodbye to our primary school life. I can't wait to
see everyone there!
【知识点】
1. 一般将来时用法
2. 活动类英语表达
3. 应用文写作（活动介绍）
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，涵盖了聚会的时间、地点、活动安排及注意事项，语言简洁流畅，符合小学生的表达水平。同时加入了对毕业的不舍与聚会的期待，情感真挚，很好地完成了题目要求，可为同类写作提供参考。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，我们需要明确题目要求：介绍毕业前班级聚会的事宜，需涵盖关键信息且语言流畅。解题思路如下：
1. 开篇点明聚会的核心信息：时间、地点，让读者快速了解聚会基本安排；
2. 中间部分列举具体活动，结合小学生的日常活动场景，比如野餐、放风筝等，使内容真实可感；
3. 接着补充注意事项，比如带食物饮料、保管物品、遵守交通规则等，体现考虑周全；
4. 结尾表达对聚会的期待和对小学生活的不舍，升华情感，符合毕业聚会的氛围。全程使用一般将来时，契合“计划中”的聚会语境。
【解析】
步骤1：搭建文章框架，采用“引入核心信息-详述活动与注意事项-表达期待”的结构；
步骤2：运用一般将来时（will+动词原形、may+动词原形）组织句子，比如“We'll do lots of fun things...”“We may also play some group games...”，准确表达计划中的活动；
步骤3：填充细节，结合小学生的生活实际，列举贴合场景的活动和实用的注意事项，同时适当发挥，加入情感表达，如“Let's make this day special before we say goodbye...”；
步骤4：检查语法和语句流畅度，确保符合题目要求的表达规范。
【答案】
Our class will have a great party in Hongmei
Park next Sunday. We'll do lots of fun things like
having a picnic, flying kites and singing songs
together. We may also play some group games.
Please remember to bring some food and
drinks to share. Don't forget to take a little pocket
money with you, just in case. Also, it's important
to look after your own things and follow the traffic
rules on the way.
Let's make this day special before we say
goodbye to our primary school life. I can't wait to
see everyone there!
【知识点】
1. 一般将来时用法
2. 活动类英语表达
3. 应用文写作（活动介绍）
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，涵盖了聚会的时间、地点、活动安排及注意事项，语言简洁流畅，符合小学生的表达水平。同时加入了对毕业的不舍与聚会的期待，情感真挚，很好地完成了题目要求，可为同类写作提供参考。
【难度系数】
0.6
