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俗话说“家和万事兴”。和睦的家庭能给每一位家庭成员带来温暖、快乐和前进的力量。英语课上，你们开展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place?”为主题的讨论，同学们交流了自己的想法。请结合以下要点，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊English Learning投稿。要点：
写作要求：1. 短文须包括所给要点，可适当发挥；2. 词数80~100（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
In our English class, we had a discussion about what we could do to make home a happier place.
俗话说“家和万事兴”。和睦的家庭能给每一位家庭成员带来温暖、快乐和前进的力量。英语课上，你们开展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place?”为主题的讨论，同学们交流了自己的想法。请结合以下要点，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊English Learning投稿。要点：
写作要求：1. 短文须包括所给要点，可适当发挥；2. 词数80~100（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
In our English class, we had a discussion about what we could do to make home a happier place.
答案
In our English class, we had a discussion about what we could do to make home a happier place.
First, we should spend more time staying with our family instead of playing mobile phones alone. Second, it's great to share our happiness and worries with them, so we can understand each other much better. Third, we need to remember all our family members' birthdays, and prepare small surprises for them. Also, I think we can help our parents do some easy housework in our free time. Small warm acts will surely make our home a much happier place.
First, we should spend more time staying with our family instead of playing mobile phones alone. Second, it's great to share our happiness and worries with them, so we can understand each other much better. Third, we need to remember all our family members' birthdays, and prepare small surprises for them. Also, I think we can help our parents do some easy housework in our free time. Small warm acts will surely make our home a much happier place.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“What can we do to make home a happier place?”为主题写英语短文，需结合给定的三个要点（多花时间陪伴家人、与家人分享喜怒哀乐、记住家人生日），并适当发挥，词数控制在80-100，开头已给出。解题思路：先承接开头引出讨论内容，再依次阐述给定的三个要点，补充合理的个人想法（如帮做家务），最后总结温暖的小事能让家更幸福，确保内容完整、语言通顺。
【解析】
首先承接开头，点明讨论的核心；接着分三点说明具体做法：一是多花时间陪家人而非独自玩手机，二是与家人分享快乐和烦恼以增进理解，三是记住家人生日并准备小惊喜；最后补充帮父母做简单家务的想法，总结温暖的小事能让家更幸福，符合词数要求。
【答案】
In our English class, we had a discussion about what we could do to make home a happier place.
First, we should spend more time staying with our family instead of playing mobile phones alone. Second, it's great to share our happiness and worries with them, so we can understand each other much better. Third, we need to remember all our family members' birthdays, and prepare small surprises for them. Also, I think we can help our parents do some easy housework in our free time. Small warm acts will surely make our home a much happier place.
【知识点】
英语写作、话题表达
【点评】
作文紧扣主题，涵盖所有给定要点，适当补充了帮做家务的内容，语言通顺自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的话题作文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以“What can we do to make home a happier place?”为主题写英语短文，需结合给定的三个要点（多花时间陪伴家人、与家人分享喜怒哀乐、记住家人生日），并适当发挥，词数控制在80-100，开头已给出。解题思路：先承接开头引出讨论内容，再依次阐述给定的三个要点，补充合理的个人想法（如帮做家务），最后总结温暖的小事能让家更幸福，确保内容完整、语言通顺。
【解析】
首先承接开头，点明讨论的核心；接着分三点说明具体做法：一是多花时间陪家人而非独自玩手机，二是与家人分享快乐和烦恼以增进理解，三是记住家人生日并准备小惊喜；最后补充帮父母做简单家务的想法，总结温暖的小事能让家更幸福，符合词数要求。
【答案】
In our English class, we had a discussion about what we could do to make home a happier place.
First, we should spend more time staying with our family instead of playing mobile phones alone. Second, it's great to share our happiness and worries with them, so we can understand each other much better. Third, we need to remember all our family members' birthdays, and prepare small surprises for them. Also, I think we can help our parents do some easy housework in our free time. Small warm acts will surely make our home a much happier place.
【知识点】
英语写作、话题表达
【点评】
作文紧扣主题，涵盖所有给定要点，适当补充了帮做家务的内容，语言通顺自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的话题作文。
【难度系数】
0.5
