② 典例赏析
劳动是人生的必修课，通过劳动我们才能更好地成长。而家务劳动是一种爱的表现，是对家的呵护和热爱。请你以“Doing Housework Makes Me ”为题，写一篇80~100词的英语短文。

写作要求：1.结合实际，用适当的词补全标题；2.短文必须包含表格中的要点，可适当发挥；3.逻辑清晰，内容完整。
Doing Housework Makes Me



审题指导：
1.体裁:议论文 2.时态:一般现在时 3.人称:第一人称
写作框架：

优秀范文：

Doing Housework Makes Me Independent
Now many students don't do housework at home. They always say that they are too busy with their study. But in my opinion, we students should do housework.
I usually do housework every day. After dinner, I do the dishes and take out the rubbish. When I see the tidy rooms, I feel proud of myself. I can show my love for my family by doing these, so I think doing housework is meaningful.
It can not only develop my independence, but also teach me how to take care of myself.

【分析】本题为英语半命题写作题，解题思路如下：1.补全标题：结合劳动主题与学生成长实际，选择贴合的主题词（如范文中的Independent）；2.搭建写作框架：开头引入现状（多数学生因学业不做家务）并提出观点，中间列举自身做家务的具体事例，结尾点明做家务的意义；3.遵循要求：使用第一人称、一般现在时，控制词数80-100，保证逻辑清晰、内容完整。
【解析】首先补全标题为Independent，写作时：开头点明当下很多学生以学业忙为由不做家务，提出学生应做家务的观点；中间叙述自己日常做家务的具体行为（饭后洗碗、倒垃圾），表达看到整洁环境的自豪感，体现对家人的爱；结尾说明做家务能培养独立能力、学会照顾自己，符合所有写作要求。
【答案】Doing Housework Makes Me Independent
Now many students don't do housework at home. They always say that they are too busy with their study. But in my opinion, we students should do housework.
I usually do housework every day. After dinner, I do the dishes and take out the rubbish. When I see the tidy rooms, I feel proud of myself. I can show my love for my family by doing these, so I think doing housework is meaningful.
It can not only develop my independence, but also teach me how to take care of myself.
【知识点】英语半命题作文写作、一般现在时运用、短文写作
【点评】本题结合劳动教育主题，考查学生英语写作的综合能力，要求学生结合实际生活表达观点，既贴合学生生活实际，又能引导学生理解劳动价值，是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】0.6