写作实训
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任务一:Mike正在将自己过去的旅行经历整理成文。根据提示,用合适的词汇补全短文。

Hi! I'm Mike! I had a wonderful trip to 1. last China's National Day holiday. It is the capital of China, and it is not only old but also very beautiful and famous. I went there 2. with my parents. We visited some places. One famous place was 3. . We climbed it happily and 4. there. We also went to Wangfujing Street. We 5. delicious Beijing roast duck. It tasted great. We felt so excited and had a great time together.
任务二:请参考下面的提示或结合自己的真实经历,独立完成一篇完整的“旅行故事”投稿。
要求:不少于5句话。

参考句型:I went to ... and ... The trip made me feel ...
It was ... and I hope to go there again.
学校公众号正在举办“旅行故事”主题征稿。请根据提示,完成下列任务。
任务一:Mike正在将自己过去的旅行经历整理成文。根据提示,用合适的词汇补全短文。
Hi! I'm Mike! I had a wonderful trip to 1. last China's National Day holiday. It is the capital of China, and it is not only old but also very beautiful and famous. I went there 2. with my parents. We visited some places. One famous place was 3. . We climbed it happily and 4. there. We also went to Wangfujing Street. We 5. delicious Beijing roast duck. It tasted great. We felt so excited and had a great time together.
任务二:请参考下面的提示或结合自己的真实经历,独立完成一篇完整的“旅行故事”投稿。
要求:不少于5句话。
参考句型:I went to ... and ... The trip made me feel ...
It was ... and I hope to go there again.
答案
写作实训
任务一:1. Beijing
2. by plane
3. the Great Wall
4. took photos
5. ate
任务二:
示例:
Hi! I'm Allen! I had a wonderful trip to Xiamen last Labour Day holiday. I went there by train with my family. We walked on Gulangyu Islet and enjoyed the fresh air and beautiful sea views. We also visited Xiamen University and ate delicious seafood there. The trip made me feel happy. Xiamen was a great place and I hope to go there again!
解析
任务一:
1. 句意:去年中国国庆假期,我度过了一次很棒的__________之旅。
分析:Mike的旅行目的地是北京,故填Beijing。
2. 句意:我和我的父母__________去那里。
分析:Mike他们一家是乘坐飞机去的北京,故填by plane。
3. 句意:我们参观了一些地方。一个著名的地方是__________。
分析:Mike他们去了长城和王府井大街,结合下文他们要爬某个地方可知,此空是指长城,故填the Great Wall。
4. 句意:我们开心地爬了它,并在那里__________。
分析:他们在长城上拍了照片,and连接的并列动词用法一致,结合climbed,应填took photos。
5. 句意:我们__________美味的北京烤鸭。
分析:北京烤鸭是一种用来吃的食物,故填ate。
任务二:
写作思路
1. 确定维度:明确旅行故事的写作维度,包含旅行的目的地、时间、交通方式、景点、活动和个人感受。
2. 提取信息:若参考提示,则提取关键信息:目的地、时间、交通方式、景点、活动和个人感受。
3. 选择句型:针对不同维度,使用参考句型造句。
写作注意事项
1. 信息完整:若参考提示,则严格按照题目给出的旅行信息进行描述,不遗漏关键要素。
2. 时态正确:主要使用一般过去时。
3. 篇幅达标:不少于5句话。
任务一:1. Beijing
2. by plane
3. the Great Wall
4. took photos
5. ate
任务二:
示例:
Hi! I'm Allen! I had a wonderful trip to Xiamen last Labour Day holiday. I went there by train with my family. We walked on Gulangyu Islet and enjoyed the fresh air and beautiful sea views. We also visited Xiamen University and ate delicious seafood there. The trip made me feel happy. Xiamen was a great place and I hope to go there again!
解析
任务一:
1. 句意:去年中国国庆假期,我度过了一次很棒的__________之旅。
分析:Mike的旅行目的地是北京,故填Beijing。
2. 句意:我和我的父母__________去那里。
分析:Mike他们一家是乘坐飞机去的北京,故填by plane。
3. 句意:我们参观了一些地方。一个著名的地方是__________。
分析:Mike他们去了长城和王府井大街,结合下文他们要爬某个地方可知,此空是指长城,故填the Great Wall。
4. 句意:我们开心地爬了它,并在那里__________。
分析:他们在长城上拍了照片,and连接的并列动词用法一致,结合climbed,应填took photos。
5. 句意:我们__________美味的北京烤鸭。
分析:北京烤鸭是一种用来吃的食物,故填ate。
任务二:
写作思路
1. 确定维度:明确旅行故事的写作维度,包含旅行的目的地、时间、交通方式、景点、活动和个人感受。
2. 提取信息:若参考提示,则提取关键信息:目的地、时间、交通方式、景点、活动和个人感受。
3. 选择句型:针对不同维度,使用参考句型造句。
写作注意事项
1. 信息完整:若参考提示,则严格按照题目给出的旅行信息进行描述,不遗漏关键要素。
2. 时态正确:主要使用一般过去时。
3. 篇幅达标:不少于5句话。
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