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某英文杂志正在征集保护动物方面的文章,你对此很感兴趣,上网了解到国家一级保护动物金丝猴被列为濒危物种。请根据以下提示写一篇介绍金丝猴的英语短文投稿,并呼吁大家保护金丝猴。
注意:1. 词数90左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[思路点拨]
①人称:以第三人称为主;②时态:一般现在时;③写作时要注意顺序,先介绍金丝猴的外貌、性格和分布,再介绍金丝猴的特点和爱好,最后介绍金丝猴的现状并提出你的建议。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
某英文杂志正在征集保护动物方面的文章,你对此很感兴趣,上网了解到国家一级保护动物金丝猴被列为濒危物种。请根据以下提示写一篇介绍金丝猴的英语短文投稿,并呼吁大家保护金丝猴。
注意:1. 词数90左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[思路点拨]
①人称:以第三人称为主;②时态:一般现在时;③写作时要注意顺序,先介绍金丝猴的外貌、性格和分布,再介绍金丝猴的特点和爱好,最后介绍金丝猴的现状并提出你的建议。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Golden monkeys are a kind of special animal. As you can see, they are golden and they have round mouths. They are not only cute and beautiful but also very clever and friendly. They mainly live in China.
They are very good at climbing trees.
As for food, they like eating leaves and fruits, and they live in the forests.
Now, the golden monkeys are in great danger, because people cut down trees and kill them for their fur.
Let's take action to help save the golden monkeys.
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案
One possible version:
Golden monkeys are a kind of special animal. As you can see, they are golden and they have round mouths. They are not only cute and beautiful but also very clever and friendly. They mainly live in China.
They are very good at climbing trees. As for food, they like eating leaves and fruits, and they live in the forests.
Now, the golden monkeys are in great danger, because people cut down trees and kill them for their fur. Let's take action to help save the golden monkeys.
Golden monkeys are a kind of special animal. As you can see, they are golden and they have round mouths. They are not only cute and beautiful but also very clever and friendly. They mainly live in China.
They are very good at climbing trees. As for food, they like eating leaves and fruits, and they live in the forests.
Now, the golden monkeys are in great danger, because people cut down trees and kill them for their fur. Let's take action to help save the golden monkeys.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以第三人称、一般现在时介绍金丝猴并呼吁保护。解题思路：1. 确定写作框架：先介绍金丝猴的外貌、性格与分布；再说明其特点与爱好；最后点明现状并发出保护呼吁。2. 紧扣给定要点，适当补充细节使行文连贯，控制词数在90左右。
【解析】
按照写作要求依次展开：首先介绍金丝猴的外观（金色、圆嘴巴）、性格（可爱美丽、聪明友好）及分布（中国）；接着说明其擅长爬树，食物为树叶和水果，栖息于森林；最后指出金丝猴因树木被砍伐、被猎杀取皮毛而濒危，呼吁大家行动起来保护它们，形成符合要求的短文。
【答案】
One possible version:
Golden monkeys are a kind of special animal. As you can see, they are golden and they have round mouths. They are not only cute and beautiful but also very clever and friendly. They mainly live in China.
They are very good at climbing trees. As for food, they like eating leaves and fruits, and they live in the forests.
Now, the golden monkeys are in great danger, because people cut down trees and kill them for their fur. Let's take action to help save the golden monkeys.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、动物保护主题表达
【点评】
该作文严格遵循写作要求，人称时态正确，要点覆盖全面，结构清晰，呼吁明确，符合杂志投稿规范，词数合适，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以第三人称、一般现在时介绍金丝猴并呼吁保护。解题思路：1. 确定写作框架：先介绍金丝猴的外貌、性格与分布；再说明其特点与爱好；最后点明现状并发出保护呼吁。2. 紧扣给定要点，适当补充细节使行文连贯，控制词数在90左右。
【解析】
按照写作要求依次展开：首先介绍金丝猴的外观（金色、圆嘴巴）、性格（可爱美丽、聪明友好）及分布（中国）；接着说明其擅长爬树，食物为树叶和水果，栖息于森林；最后指出金丝猴因树木被砍伐、被猎杀取皮毛而濒危，呼吁大家行动起来保护它们，形成符合要求的短文。
【答案】
One possible version:
Golden monkeys are a kind of special animal. As you can see, they are golden and they have round mouths. They are not only cute and beautiful but also very clever and friendly. They mainly live in China.
They are very good at climbing trees. As for food, they like eating leaves and fruits, and they live in the forests.
Now, the golden monkeys are in great danger, because people cut down trees and kill them for their fur. Let's take action to help save the golden monkeys.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、动物保护主题表达
【点评】
该作文严格遵循写作要求，人称时态正确，要点覆盖全面，结构清晰，呼吁明确，符合杂志投稿规范，词数合适，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
