2026年时代新课程七年级英语上册译林版第58页答案
五、书面表达
请你以“My dream school”为题,根据思维导图,用英语写一篇短文,描述一下你的梦想校园。

注意事项:1. 短文须包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 词数70左右,短文首句的部分和句尾已给出,不计入总词数。
My dream school
My dream school is






My dream school is really great.

答案

One possible version:
My dream school
My dream school is not big, but it’s very modern and clean.
There’re three classroom buildings in our school. There are only twenty students in each class. We have three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. At noon, we have one hour to have lunch. We can also listen to music at lunchtime. There are all kinds of clubs to join after school. We can also play games together.
My dream school is really great.
(70 words)

解析

【分析】
首先明确题目要求:以“My dream school”为题,结合思维导图的四个要点(buildings、classes、lunch、others)写短文,词数70左右,首句和尾句已给出。解题思路:1. 先衔接首句,描述学校整体特点;2. 对应思维导图的四个要点分别展开:buildings写现代干净的教学楼,classes写班级人数、课程安排,lunch写午餐时间和活动,others写课后俱乐部等;3. 确保语句通顺、覆盖所有要点、符合词数要求,最后衔接尾句。
【解析】
根据思维导图要点组织内容:先写学校整体特点(不大但现代干净),再依次说明教学楼数量、班级规模与课程安排,午餐时间及可进行的活动,课后的俱乐部与游戏活动,最后衔接给定尾句,控制词数在要求范围内,保证语句连贯自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
My dream school
My dream school is not big, but it’s very modern and clean.
There’re three classroom buildings in our school. There are only twenty students in each class. We have three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. At noon, we have one hour to have lunch. We can also listen to music at lunchtime. There are all kinds of clubs to join after school. We can also play games together.
My dream school is really great.
【知识点】
英语话题作文、词汇运用、语句连贯表达
【点评】
本题为初中英语常见的话题书面表达题,要求结合思维导图要点写作,需覆盖所有内容要点,考查学生的英语综合运用能力,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6