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(二) 书面表达
在我们的生活中，总有一些人给予我
们帮助与支持，让我们心怀感激。假如你
是李华，请你根据以下思维导图的提示，
用英语写一封感谢信，向你最想感谢的人
表达心意。
注意：(1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础
上适当拓展信息；
(2) 语句连贯，词数70左右。
写作指导
(1) 审题定调
文体：
人称：
(2) 思路构建
Dear
Sincerely,
Li Hua
在我们的生活中，总有一些人给予我
们帮助与支持，让我们心怀感激。假如你
是李华，请你根据以下思维导图的提示，
用英语写一封感谢信，向你最想感谢的人
表达心意。
注意：(1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础
上适当拓展信息；
(2) 语句连贯，词数70左右。
写作指导
(1) 审题定调
文体：
应用文
时态：一般过去时为主
人称：
第一人称和第二人称为主
(2) 思路构建
Dear
Dad
,I am so thankful to have you as my father. You not only care for me, but also teach me life's most important lessons.
Last winter, I lost a basketball match and was shocked by my poor performance. It was your words that cheered me up, "Winning isn't everything, but courage is." You then practised with me every evening, though it was really cold outside. It was your patience that helped me find my confidence back and later win a school game!
Dad, no one else could love me as you do. I promise to make you proud of me!
Last winter, I lost a basketball match and was shocked by my poor performance. It was your words that cheered me up, "Winning isn't everything, but courage is." You then practised with me every evening, though it was really cold outside. It was your patience that helped me find my confidence back and later win a school game!
Dad, no one else could love me as you do. I promise to make you proud of me!
Sincerely,
Li Hua
答案
（1）应用文；一般过去时为主；第一人称和第二人称为主
One possible version:
Dear Dad,
I am so thankful to have you as my father. You not only care for me, but also teach me life's most important lessons.
Last winter, I lost a basketball match and was shocked by my poor performance. It was your words that cheered me up, "Winning isn't everything, but courage is." You then practised with me every evening, though it was really cold outside. It was your patience that helped me find my confidence back and later win a school game!
Dad, no one else could love me as you do. I promise to make you proud of me!
Sincerely,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Dad,
I am so thankful to have you as my father. You not only care for me, but also teach me life's most important lessons.
Last winter, I lost a basketball match and was shocked by my poor performance. It was your words that cheered me up, "Winning isn't everything, but courage is." You then practised with me every evening, though it was really cold outside. It was your patience that helped me find my confidence back and later win a school game!
Dad, no one else could love me as you do. I promise to make you proud of me!
Sincerely,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
首先审题定调：明确文体为应用文（感谢信），时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。接着思路构建：先确定收信人（如父亲），开篇直接表达感谢；中间结合具体事例（如输篮球比赛后父亲的鼓励与陪伴）支撑感谢；结尾再次抒发感激与承诺。写作时需注意语句连贯，控制词数在70左右，适当拓展细节。
【解析】
1. 审题定调：文体为应用文（感谢信），时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。
2. 思路构建：开头写称呼，点明感谢对象；中间用具体事例说明感谢原因；结尾表达心意。
3. 组织语言：围绕事例展开，用词准确，符合书信格式，控制词数。
【答案】
Dear Dad,
I am so thankful to have you as my father. You not only care for me, but also teach me life's most important lessons.
Last winter, I lost a basketball match and was shocked by my poor performance. It was your words that cheered me up, "Winning isn't everything, but courage is." You then practised with me every evening, though it was really cold outside. It was your patience that helped me find my confidence back and later win a school game!
Dad, no one else could love me as you do. I promise to make you proud of me!
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
应用文写作（感谢信）、英语书信格式
【点评】
本题考查英语感谢信的写作能力，贴近学生生活实际，要求学生掌握书信格式，结合具体事例表达真情实感，语句连贯，符合词数要求，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先审题定调：明确文体为应用文（感谢信），时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。接着思路构建：先确定收信人（如父亲），开篇直接表达感谢；中间结合具体事例（如输篮球比赛后父亲的鼓励与陪伴）支撑感谢；结尾再次抒发感激与承诺。写作时需注意语句连贯，控制词数在70左右，适当拓展细节。
【解析】
1. 审题定调：文体为应用文（感谢信），时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。
2. 思路构建：开头写称呼，点明感谢对象；中间用具体事例说明感谢原因；结尾表达心意。
3. 组织语言：围绕事例展开，用词准确，符合书信格式，控制词数。
【答案】
Dear Dad,
I am so thankful to have you as my father. You not only care for me, but also teach me life's most important lessons.
Last winter, I lost a basketball match and was shocked by my poor performance. It was your words that cheered me up, "Winning isn't everything, but courage is." You then practised with me every evening, though it was really cold outside. It was your patience that helped me find my confidence back and later win a school game!
Dad, no one else could love me as you do. I promise to make you proud of me!
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
应用文写作（感谢信）、英语书信格式
【点评】
本题考查英语感谢信的写作能力，贴近学生生活实际，要求学生掌握书信格式，结合具体事例表达真情实感，语句连贯，符合词数要求，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
