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Ⅶ. 书面表达。
随着5月20日“全国学生营养日”的到来，《21世纪英文报》正在开展对中学生早餐情况的调查。请你根据以下的调查结果，以“Breakfast Is Important”为题写一篇英语短文进行投稿，倡导营养早餐。
要求:1. 必须包含表格内所有信息；
2. 文中不得出现与你相关的信息；
3. 词数不少于80词。
Breakfast Is Important
随着5月20日“全国学生营养日”的到来，《21世纪英文报》正在开展对中学生早餐情况的调查。请你根据以下的调查结果，以“Breakfast Is Important”为题写一篇英语短文进行投稿，倡导营养早餐。
要求:1. 必须包含表格内所有信息；
2. 文中不得出现与你相关的信息；
3. 词数不少于80词。
Breakfast Is Important
答案
One possible version:
Breakfast Is Important
There is no doubt that breakfast is important. Recently we did a survey about breakfast in our school. Here are the results.
To our surprise, only about 55 percent of the students have wonderful meals for breakfast every day. They always keep healthy and are full of energy. 25 percent of them just have junk food. They don't have a balanced diet. Their eating habits are so bad that they sometimes fall ill. 20 percent of the students go to school without eating breakfast. As a result, these students often feel hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully. What's worse, they get ill easily.
In my view, it's necessary for us to have breakfast and eat right kinds of food. With healthy breakfast, we can save enough energy for the whole morning study.
Breakfast Is Important
There is no doubt that breakfast is important. Recently we did a survey about breakfast in our school. Here are the results.
To our surprise, only about 55 percent of the students have wonderful meals for breakfast every day. They always keep healthy and are full of energy. 25 percent of them just have junk food. They don't have a balanced diet. Their eating habits are so bad that they sometimes fall ill. 20 percent of the students go to school without eating breakfast. As a result, these students often feel hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully. What's worse, they get ill easily.
In my view, it's necessary for us to have breakfast and eat right kinds of food. With healthy breakfast, we can save enough energy for the whole morning study.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“Breakfast Is Important”为题，结合给定的早餐情况调查表格写短文投稿，倡导营养早餐。解题思路：1. 明确写作核心：围绕早餐的重要性，用表格中的调查数据支撑观点；2. 必须涵盖表格全部信息：三种学生比例（55%、25%、20%）、对应早餐情况（丰富早餐、垃圾食品、不吃早餐）、对应健康状况（健康精力充沛、偶尔生病、饥饿且听课不认真、经常生病）；3. 遵守要求：不得出现个人相关信息，词数不少于80词，结尾需倡导营养早餐；4. 结构安排：开头引出调查主题，中间分述三种早餐情况及对应结果，结尾总结并倡导健康早餐。
【解析】按照英语应用文写作规范，先开头引出调查：说明早餐的重要性及学校开展的早餐调查；接着分述表格信息：55%的学生每天吃丰富早餐，身体健康精力充沛；25%的学生吃垃圾食品，偶尔生病；20%的学生不吃早餐，导致饥饿、上课无法认真听讲、经常生病；最后总结观点，倡导学生吃早餐且选择健康食物，确保所有信息完整，语言准确，符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Breakfast Is Important
There is no doubt that breakfast is important. Recently we did a survey about breakfast in our school. Here are the results.
To our surprise, only about 55 percent of the students have wonderful meals for breakfast every day. They always keep healthy and are full of energy. 25 percent of them just have junk food. They don't have a balanced diet. Their eating habits are so bad that they sometimes fall ill. 20 percent of the students go to school without eating breakfast. As a result, these students often feel hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully. What's worse, they get ill easily.
In my view, it's necessary for us to have breakfast and eat right kinds of food. With healthy breakfast, we can save enough energy for the whole morning study.
【知识点】英语书面表达、图表信息转换、应用文写作
【点评】本题结合“全国学生营养日”热点，考查学生将图表数据转化为英语短文的能力，既锻炼英语语言运用能力，又传递健康饮食理念，是贴近学生生活的实用写作题，要求学生准确提取并组织信息。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】按照英语应用文写作规范，先开头引出调查：说明早餐的重要性及学校开展的早餐调查；接着分述表格信息：55%的学生每天吃丰富早餐，身体健康精力充沛；25%的学生吃垃圾食品，偶尔生病；20%的学生不吃早餐，导致饥饿、上课无法认真听讲、经常生病；最后总结观点，倡导学生吃早餐且选择健康食物，确保所有信息完整，语言准确，符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Breakfast Is Important
There is no doubt that breakfast is important. Recently we did a survey about breakfast in our school. Here are the results.
To our surprise, only about 55 percent of the students have wonderful meals for breakfast every day. They always keep healthy and are full of energy. 25 percent of them just have junk food. They don't have a balanced diet. Their eating habits are so bad that they sometimes fall ill. 20 percent of the students go to school without eating breakfast. As a result, these students often feel hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully. What's worse, they get ill easily.
In my view, it's necessary for us to have breakfast and eat right kinds of food. With healthy breakfast, we can save enough energy for the whole morning study.
【知识点】英语书面表达、图表信息转换、应用文写作
【点评】本题结合“全国学生营养日”热点，考查学生将图表数据转化为英语短文的能力，既锻炼英语语言运用能力，又传递健康饮食理念，是贴近学生生活的实用写作题，要求学生准确提取并组织信息。
【难度系数】0.5
