【典例研析】
请你以 “我和朋友们的空闲时间活动”为主题写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 介绍你和两位同学（或朋友）在空闲时间喜欢做的活动；
2. 写出每个人喜欢这种活动的原因；
3. 适当表达你对空闲时间活动的看法或希望。
写作要求：
1. 包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意思连贯；
3. 词数 80 左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Recently, my friends and I shared our favorite free-time activities.


【思路点拨】
第一步 审题
人称：第一人称；第三人称
时态：一般现在时；一般过去时
中心：讲述每个人空闲时间的活动，并表明原因
第二步 谋篇

【范文欣赏】

Recently, my friends and I shared our favorite free-time activities.
Jack enjoys playing basketball. He thinks it keeps him healthy and brings him happiness. He often plays to make friends and stay strong.
Lily loves reading storybooks. She reads to learn more knowledge and relax herself. She also reads to improve her writing and open her mind.
In my opinion, we should use our free time wisely to make life more wonderful.

【分析】这是一道英语写作题，解题思路为：第一步审题，明确人称用第一、第三人称，时态用一般现在时，写作中心是介绍两位朋友的空闲活动、原因及个人对空闲活动的看法；第二步谋篇，先承接开头介绍第一位朋友的活动及原因，再介绍第二位朋友的活动及原因，最后表达个人观点，确保涵盖所有要求的内容，语句通顺、词数符合要求。
【解析】首先使用已给开头，接着介绍Jack的空闲活动（打篮球）及原因（保持健康、带来快乐、结交朋友、保持强壮）；再介绍Lily的空闲活动（读故事书）及原因（学习知识、放松自己、提高写作、开阔思维）；最后表达个人看法（应明智利用空闲时间让生活更精彩），全程使用一般现在时，人称正确，内容完整连贯。
【答案】Recently, my friends and I shared our favorite free-time activities.
Jack enjoys playing basketball. He thinks it keeps him healthy and brings him happiness. He often plays to make friends and stay strong.
Lily loves reading storybooks. She reads to learn more knowledge and relax herself. She also reads to improve her writing and open her mind.
In my opinion, we should use our free time wisely to make life more wonderful.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时的运用
【点评】本题考查英语写作的综合运用能力，要求学生围绕指定主题完成内容，涵盖人物活动、原因及个人看法，符合初中英语写作的常见考查形式，注重语言表达的准确性和内容的完整性。
【难度系数】0.5