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你校准备开展英语周征文比赛。比赛的宗旨在于鼓励学生用英语讲好身边的
故事。假如你是学生李华，请以 "My Story with " 为题，写一篇80词
左右的文章参加征文比赛。
My Story with
你校准备开展英语周征文比赛。比赛的宗旨在于鼓励学生用英语讲好身边的
故事。假如你是学生李华，请以 "My Story with " 为题，写一篇80词
左右的文章参加征文比赛。
My Story with
答案
My Story with High-Speed Trains
I still remember my first trip by high-speed train. It was during the winter vacation when my
parents and I went to Shanghai. I was very excited because the train was modern and fast.
When the train started, I was surprised by how quiet and smooth it was. Outside the window,
the scenery flew by like a movie. The trip took only a few hours instead of almost a whole day like
before. I read books, listened to music, and enjoyed snacks along the way.
High-speed trains make travelling much easier and faster. They have changed people's lives in
China, and I'm proud that our country has such great technology.
My Story with English Reading
When I first began to read in English, I often felt it was too difficult. I didn't know many
words and always needed a dictionary. But one day, my teacher gave me a book called The Little
Prince. Its simple language and deep ideas touched me.
Since then, I have been used to reading a few pages of English every night. I like reading
English magazines and fairy tales because they open a new world to me. I've learnt not only new
words but also new ways of thinking.
Reading in English has become part of my life. It helps me relax, imagine, and grow to be a
good learner. I hope I can keep reading forever.
I still remember my first trip by high-speed train. It was during the winter vacation when my
parents and I went to Shanghai. I was very excited because the train was modern and fast.
When the train started, I was surprised by how quiet and smooth it was. Outside the window,
the scenery flew by like a movie. The trip took only a few hours instead of almost a whole day like
before. I read books, listened to music, and enjoyed snacks along the way.
High-speed trains make travelling much easier and faster. They have changed people's lives in
China, and I'm proud that our country has such great technology.
My Story with English Reading
When I first began to read in English, I often felt it was too difficult. I didn't know many
words and always needed a dictionary. But one day, my teacher gave me a book called The Little
Prince. Its simple language and deep ideas touched me.
Since then, I have been used to reading a few pages of English every night. I like reading
English magazines and fairy tales because they open a new world to me. I've learnt not only new
words but also new ways of thinking.
Reading in English has become part of my life. It helps me relax, imagine, and grow to be a
good learner. I hope I can keep reading forever.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语半命题征文写作题，要求以“My Story with ______”为题，围绕“用英语讲好身边故事”的宗旨，写一篇80词左右的文章。解题思路：1. 补全题目，选择自己熟悉且有真实经历的话题（如高铁、英语阅读等）；2. 围绕所选话题，选取1-2个具体的个人经历片段，体现故事性；3. 结尾点明该话题对自己的影响或意义，升华主题；4. 注意语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，结构完整（开头点题、中间叙事、结尾总结）。
【解析】
以补全题目“My Story with High-Speed Trains”为例，写作步骤如下：1. 开头点明核心经历：第一次乘坐高铁去上海的经历；2. 中间描述细节：高铁的特点（现代、快速、安静平稳），对比之前的出行耗时，途中的活动（读书、听音乐）；3. 结尾升华：高铁改变出行方式，表达对国家科技的自豪。注意用词准确，句子连贯，控制在80词左右。
【答案】
My Story with High-Speed Trains
I still remember my first trip by high-speed train during the winter vacation with my parents to Shanghai. The modern and fast train surprised me—it was quiet and smooth, with scenery flying by like a movie. The trip took only a few hours instead of a whole day before. I read and listened to music happily. High-speed trains make travel easier and faster, and I’m proud of our country’s great technology.
【知识点】
英语半命题作文写作、英语记叙文写作、话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，选取个人真实出行经历，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，既生动讲述了故事，又升华了对国家科技发展的自豪感，符合征文要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语半命题征文写作题，要求以“My Story with ______”为题，围绕“用英语讲好身边故事”的宗旨，写一篇80词左右的文章。解题思路：1. 补全题目，选择自己熟悉且有真实经历的话题（如高铁、英语阅读等）；2. 围绕所选话题，选取1-2个具体的个人经历片段，体现故事性；3. 结尾点明该话题对自己的影响或意义，升华主题；4. 注意语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，结构完整（开头点题、中间叙事、结尾总结）。
【解析】
以补全题目“My Story with High-Speed Trains”为例，写作步骤如下：1. 开头点明核心经历：第一次乘坐高铁去上海的经历；2. 中间描述细节：高铁的特点（现代、快速、安静平稳），对比之前的出行耗时，途中的活动（读书、听音乐）；3. 结尾升华：高铁改变出行方式，表达对国家科技的自豪。注意用词准确，句子连贯，控制在80词左右。
【答案】
My Story with High-Speed Trains
I still remember my first trip by high-speed train during the winter vacation with my parents to Shanghai. The modern and fast train surprised me—it was quiet and smooth, with scenery flying by like a movie. The trip took only a few hours instead of a whole day before. I read and listened to music happily. High-speed trains make travel easier and faster, and I’m proud of our country’s great technology.
【知识点】
英语半命题作文写作、英语记叙文写作、话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，选取个人真实出行经历，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，既生动讲述了故事，又升华了对国家科技发展的自豪感，符合征文要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
