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六、书面表达。(20 分)
在你的记忆中，一定会有那么特别的一天，给你带来特殊的感受与回忆。请根据以下要点提示和要求，以“My Most Special Day”为题，写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1. Which day is the most special for you?
2. What did you do anything special?
3. How did you feel?
要求：
1. 参考以上要点提示，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名和地名等；
4. 70 词左右。
My Most Special Day
在你的记忆中，一定会有那么特别的一天，给你带来特殊的感受与回忆。请根据以下要点提示和要求，以“My Most Special Day”为题，写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1. Which day is the most special for you?
2. What did you do anything special?
3. How did you feel?
要求：
1. 参考以上要点提示，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名和地名等；
4. 70 词左右。
My Most Special Day
答案
One possible version：
My Most Special Day
In our lives, everyone experiences a lot and has some special days. In my memory, my most special day was a day in May last year.
That morning, my father asked me to buy some food in a supermarket. However, I realized that I had lost the money when I got there. I stood at the gate of the supermarket worriedly. Luckily, a woman who is my neighbour went there and knew what had happened. She gave me some money. By the time I wanted to thank her, she had left quietly. Later, I found a little boy crying on the road while I was walking home. I guessed he might not find his family, so I took him to the police station for help.
That day, I was so happy because I was moved by others' help. And I passed kindness to others.
My Most Special Day
In our lives, everyone experiences a lot and has some special days. In my memory, my most special day was a day in May last year.
That morning, my father asked me to buy some food in a supermarket. However, I realized that I had lost the money when I got there. I stood at the gate of the supermarket worriedly. Luckily, a woman who is my neighbour went there and knew what had happened. She gave me some money. By the time I wanted to thank her, she had left quietly. Later, I found a little boy crying on the road while I was walking home. I guessed he might not find his family, so I took him to the police station for help.
That day, I was so happy because I was moved by others' help. And I passed kindness to others.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My Most Special Day”为题写70词左右的短文，需覆盖三个核心要点：①明确哪一天是最特别的；②叙述当天做的特别的事；③表达当天的感受。解题思路：第一步，确定具体的特殊日期（如去年五月的一天）；第二步，构思“受助+助人”的小事，让内容充实且紧扣“特别”；第三步，组织语言，确保语句通顺、无真实信息、符合词数要求；第四步，检查是否覆盖所有要点，情感表达自然。
【解析】
写作时，开头直接点出最特别的一天；中间分述当天经历：先写买东西丢钱被邻居帮助，再写帮助迷路小孩找警察，体现“传递善意”的主题；结尾表达感受，即因被帮助又帮助他人而开心，紧扣“特别”的意义。注意控制词数，使用简单易懂的词汇和句式，确保语句连贯。
【答案】
My Most Special Day
In our lives, everyone experiences a lot and has some special days. In my memory, my most special day was a day in May last year.
That morning, my father asked me to buy some food in a supermarket. However, I realized that I had lost the money when I got there. I stood at the gate of the supermarket worriedly. Luckily, a woman who is my neighbour went there and knew what had happened. She gave me some money. By the time I wanted to thank her, she had left quietly. Later, I found a little boy crying on the road while I was walking home. I guessed he might not find his family, so I took him to the police station for help.
That day, I was so happy because I was moved by others' help. And I passed kindness to others.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作；要点式书面表达；情感表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，内容具体生动，情感真挚自然，语句通顺连贯，符合词数要求，传递了积极向上的正能量，是一篇符合标准的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“My Most Special Day”为题写70词左右的短文，需覆盖三个核心要点：①明确哪一天是最特别的；②叙述当天做的特别的事；③表达当天的感受。解题思路：第一步，确定具体的特殊日期（如去年五月的一天）；第二步，构思“受助+助人”的小事，让内容充实且紧扣“特别”；第三步，组织语言，确保语句通顺、无真实信息、符合词数要求；第四步，检查是否覆盖所有要点，情感表达自然。
【解析】
写作时，开头直接点出最特别的一天；中间分述当天经历：先写买东西丢钱被邻居帮助，再写帮助迷路小孩找警察，体现“传递善意”的主题；结尾表达感受，即因被帮助又帮助他人而开心，紧扣“特别”的意义。注意控制词数，使用简单易懂的词汇和句式，确保语句连贯。
【答案】
My Most Special Day
In our lives, everyone experiences a lot and has some special days. In my memory, my most special day was a day in May last year.
That morning, my father asked me to buy some food in a supermarket. However, I realized that I had lost the money when I got there. I stood at the gate of the supermarket worriedly. Luckily, a woman who is my neighbour went there and knew what had happened. She gave me some money. By the time I wanted to thank her, she had left quietly. Later, I found a little boy crying on the road while I was walking home. I guessed he might not find his family, so I took him to the police station for help.
That day, I was so happy because I was moved by others' help. And I passed kindness to others.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作；要点式书面表达；情感表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，内容具体生动，情感真挚自然，语句通顺连贯，符合词数要求，传递了积极向上的正能量，是一篇符合标准的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
