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第三节 书面表达(共15分)
假如你是李华,你收到外国朋友Elaine的一封邮件。她希望你能介绍一下广
州当地常见的树木——木棉树(kapok tree)。请根据以下要点提示写一封邮件回
复她。
1. 木棉树的基本情况(树干、叶子、花朵……);
2. 木棉树的作用;
3. 你对木棉树的看法。
Dear Elaine,
I am glad that you are interested in kapok tree. It is a common type of tree in
Guangzhou.
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你收到外国朋友Elaine的一封邮件。她希望你能介绍一下广
州当地常见的树木——木棉树(kapok tree)。请根据以下要点提示写一封邮件回
复她。
1. 木棉树的基本情况(树干、叶子、花朵……);
2. 木棉树的作用;
3. 你对木棉树的看法。
Dear Elaine,
I am glad that you are interested in kapok tree. It is a common type of tree in
Guangzhou.
An adult kapok tree is very tall with a straight trunk. It can reach 25 metres in height. Its branches spread and its green leaves provide a good shade for people. In spring, the big red flowers of kapok trees always catch my eye when I walk along the streets.
People in Guangzhou have long been growing kapok trees, using their cotton to make clothes and their flowers to make herbal tea. Their tree bark and roots are also used as traditional Chinese medicines.
I love kapok trees. I think they are not only beautiful but also useful. When you come to Guangzhou next time, you can have a good look at these amazing trees!
Best wishes,
People in Guangzhou have long been growing kapok trees, using their cotton to make clothes and their flowers to make herbal tea. Their tree bark and roots are also used as traditional Chinese medicines.
I love kapok trees. I think they are not only beautiful but also useful. When you come to Guangzhou next time, you can have a good look at these amazing trees!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Elaine,
I am glad that you are interested in kapok tree. It is a common type of tree in Guangzhou. An
adult kapok tree is very tall with a straight trunk. It can reach 25 metres in height. Its branches
spread and its green leaves provide a good shade for people. In spring, the big red flowers of
kapok trees always catch my eye when I walk along the streets.
People in Guangzhou have long been growing kapok trees, using their cotton to make clothes
and their flowers to make herbal tea. Their tree bark and roots are also used as traditional Chinese
medicines.
I love kapok trees. I think they are not only beautiful but also useful. When you come to
Guangzhou next time, you can have a good look at these amazing trees!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
I am glad that you are interested in kapok tree. It is a common type of tree in Guangzhou. An
adult kapok tree is very tall with a straight trunk. It can reach 25 metres in height. Its branches
spread and its green leaves provide a good shade for people. In spring, the big red flowers of
kapok trees always catch my eye when I walk along the streets.
People in Guangzhou have long been growing kapok trees, using their cotton to make clothes
and their flowers to make herbal tea. Their tree bark and roots are also used as traditional Chinese
medicines.
I love kapok trees. I think they are not only beautiful but also useful. When you come to
Guangzhou next time, you can have a good look at these amazing trees!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
这道题是英语应用文类书面表达，要求以李华的身份给外国朋友Elaine写回信介绍广州的木棉树。解题时首先要明确题干给出的三个必须覆盖的写作要点，避免漏点丢分：第一步先完成第一个要点，结合插图里直树干、舒展树冠的特征，依次介绍木棉树的树干形态、树高、枝叶特点、花期花朵的外观，把基本情况描述清楚；第二步完成第二个要点，梳理木棉树的实用价值，从棉絮、花朵、树皮和根系的不同用途展开表述；第三步完成第三个要点，输出自己对木棉树的评价，表达喜爱，还可以顺势向朋友发出来广州观赏的邀请，最后补充邮件必备的祝福语，整体语言要自然得体，符合给好友写信的语气，保证语法正确、逻辑连贯。
【解析】
1. 承接题干给出的开篇内容，先介绍木棉树的基础外观：说明成年木棉树高大挺拔、树干笔直，高度可达25米，枝条舒展，绿叶能为路人提供阴凉，春天会开出醒目的大朵红色花朵，完整覆盖第一个写作要点。
2. 接着介绍木棉树的作用：说明广州种植木棉的历史悠久，木棉的棉絮可以用来制作衣物，花朵可以制作凉茶，树皮和根还可以作为传统中药材，完整覆盖第二个写作要点。
3. 最后阐述个人看法：点明木棉树既美观又实用的特质，表达自己对木棉树的喜爱，同时邀请对方下次来广州可以亲眼观赏木棉树，补充邮件标准祝福语Best wishes，完成全文，行文逻辑连贯，符合书信格式要求。
【答案】
Dear Elaine,
I am glad that you are interested in kapok tree. It is a common type of tree in Guangzhou. An adult kapok tree is very tall with a straight trunk. It can reach 25 metres in height. Its branches spread and its green leaves provide a good shade for people. In spring, the big red flowers of kapok trees always catch my eye when I walk along the streets.
People in Guangzhou have long been growing kapok trees, using their cotton to make clothes and their flowers to make herbal tea. Their tree bark and roots are also used as traditional Chinese medicines.
I love kapok trees. I think they are not only beautiful but also useful. When you come to Guangzhou next time, you can have a good look at these amazing trees!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作，事物介绍表达
【点评】
本题结合广州本土特色植物设置写作场景，贴近学生日常生活，要点提示清晰明确，既考查学生对介绍类应用文格式、常用描述性表达的掌握程度，也能引导学生关注身边的本土特色事物，写作时注意按顺序覆盖全部三个给定要点，保证行文通顺无明显语法错误，就能拿到较高的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
这道题是英语应用文类书面表达，要求以李华的身份给外国朋友Elaine写回信介绍广州的木棉树。解题时首先要明确题干给出的三个必须覆盖的写作要点，避免漏点丢分：第一步先完成第一个要点，结合插图里直树干、舒展树冠的特征，依次介绍木棉树的树干形态、树高、枝叶特点、花期花朵的外观，把基本情况描述清楚；第二步完成第二个要点，梳理木棉树的实用价值，从棉絮、花朵、树皮和根系的不同用途展开表述；第三步完成第三个要点，输出自己对木棉树的评价，表达喜爱，还可以顺势向朋友发出来广州观赏的邀请，最后补充邮件必备的祝福语，整体语言要自然得体，符合给好友写信的语气，保证语法正确、逻辑连贯。
【解析】
1. 承接题干给出的开篇内容，先介绍木棉树的基础外观：说明成年木棉树高大挺拔、树干笔直，高度可达25米，枝条舒展，绿叶能为路人提供阴凉，春天会开出醒目的大朵红色花朵，完整覆盖第一个写作要点。
2. 接着介绍木棉树的作用：说明广州种植木棉的历史悠久，木棉的棉絮可以用来制作衣物，花朵可以制作凉茶，树皮和根还可以作为传统中药材，完整覆盖第二个写作要点。
3. 最后阐述个人看法：点明木棉树既美观又实用的特质，表达自己对木棉树的喜爱，同时邀请对方下次来广州可以亲眼观赏木棉树，补充邮件标准祝福语Best wishes，完成全文，行文逻辑连贯，符合书信格式要求。
【答案】
Dear Elaine,
I am glad that you are interested in kapok tree. It is a common type of tree in Guangzhou. An adult kapok tree is very tall with a straight trunk. It can reach 25 metres in height. Its branches spread and its green leaves provide a good shade for people. In spring, the big red flowers of kapok trees always catch my eye when I walk along the streets.
People in Guangzhou have long been growing kapok trees, using their cotton to make clothes and their flowers to make herbal tea. Their tree bark and roots are also used as traditional Chinese medicines.
I love kapok trees. I think they are not only beautiful but also useful. When you come to Guangzhou next time, you can have a good look at these amazing trees!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作，事物介绍表达
【点评】
本题结合广州本土特色植物设置写作场景，贴近学生日常生活，要点提示清晰明确，既考查学生对介绍类应用文格式、常用描述性表达的掌握程度，也能引导学生关注身边的本土特色事物，写作时注意按顺序覆盖全部三个给定要点，保证行文通顺无明显语法错误，就能拿到较高的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
