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中国书法不仅是记录文字的方式，更是融合了哲学、美学与修养的高雅艺术，它被誉为“无言的诗，无形的舞”。请根据以下要点提示，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
要点提示：1. 书法是什么(用毛笔和墨书写汉字的艺术)；2. 学习书法的好处(如：使人平静、了解中国文化、提升专注力)；3. 你个人对书法的感受或体验(如果没有，可写你是否想尝试及原因)。
注意：1. 短文须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥；2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写清晰；3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
中国书法不仅是记录文字的方式，更是融合了哲学、美学与修养的高雅艺术，它被誉为“无言的诗，无形的舞”。请根据以下要点提示，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
要点提示：1. 书法是什么(用毛笔和墨书写汉字的艺术)；2. 学习书法的好处(如：使人平静、了解中国文化、提升专注力)；3. 你个人对书法的感受或体验(如果没有，可写你是否想尝试及原因)。
注意：1. 短文须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥；2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写清晰；3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
答案
思路点拨
1. 审体裁——用第一人称写一篇介绍类短文。
2. 审内容——书法是什么、学习书法的好处、对书法的感受或体验。
3. 审时态——以一般现在时为主，描述书法的特点与益处；个人经历部分用现在完成时和一般现在时。
4. 审篇幅——100词左右；首尾用“Chinese calligraphy is a special art form ...”和“It has become an important part of my life ...”套话，中间用“Firstly ... Secondly ... What's more ...”串联，既清晰又高级。
范文欣赏
The art of the brush, also known as Chinese calligraphy, is the skill of writing Chinese characters with a brush and ink. It is a beautiful and traditional art in China.
Learning calligraphy is very helpful. It can help people feel calm and peaceful. When you practise it, you need to focus carefully, which also improves your concentration. Besides, through calligraphy, you can learn more about Chinese culture and history. I have tried calligraphy a few times. It was not easy at first, but I enjoyed the quiet time it brought me. I think it is a wonderful way to relax and learn. I will keep practising it!
1. 审体裁——用第一人称写一篇介绍类短文。
2. 审内容——书法是什么、学习书法的好处、对书法的感受或体验。
3. 审时态——以一般现在时为主，描述书法的特点与益处；个人经历部分用现在完成时和一般现在时。
4. 审篇幅——100词左右；首尾用“Chinese calligraphy is a special art form ...”和“It has become an important part of my life ...”套话，中间用“Firstly ... Secondly ... What's more ...”串联，既清晰又高级。
范文欣赏
The art of the brush, also known as Chinese calligraphy, is the skill of writing Chinese characters with a brush and ink. It is a beautiful and traditional art in China.
Learning calligraphy is very helpful. It can help people feel calm and peaceful. When you practise it, you need to focus carefully, which also improves your concentration. Besides, through calligraphy, you can learn more about Chinese culture and history. I have tried calligraphy a few times. It was not easy at first, but I enjoyed the quiet time it brought me. I think it is a wonderful way to relax and learn. I will keep practising it!
解析
【解析】
1. 审题梳理：
- 体裁：第一人称介绍类说明文
- 内容：需覆盖三个核心要点：①书法的定义：用毛笔和墨书写汉字的传统艺术；②学习书法的益处：使人平静、了解中国文化、提升专注力；③个人对书法的体验/感受，可适当补充合理细节
- 时态：描述书法属性与益处使用一般现在时，描述个人体验可搭配现在完成时、一般过去时
- 篇幅：控制在100词左右，逻辑衔接词串联内容保证连贯
2. 参考范文：
The art of the brush, also known as Chinese calligraphy, is the skill of writing Chinese characters with a brush and ink. It is a beautiful and traditional art in China.
Learning calligraphy is very helpful. It can help people feel calm and peaceful. When you practise it, you need to focus carefully, which also improves your concentration. Besides, through calligraphy, you can learn more about Chinese culture and history. I have tried calligraphy a few times. It was not easy at first, but I enjoyed the quiet time it brought me. I think it is a wonderful way to relax and learn. I will keep practising it!
【答案】
参考范文如上，符合要点齐全、语言通顺、词数要求的同类合理表达均可得分
【知识点】
英语说明文写作
一般现在时应用
要点式作文谋篇
【点评】
本题属于传统文化主题的基础英语写作题，难度适中，核心考查学生的要点整合能力和基础时态的正确使用，引导学生用英语传播中国传统文化，逻辑衔接词的合理使用可以让文章层次更清晰，避免内容零散。
【难度系数】
0.7
1. 审题梳理：
- 体裁：第一人称介绍类说明文
- 内容：需覆盖三个核心要点：①书法的定义：用毛笔和墨书写汉字的传统艺术；②学习书法的益处：使人平静、了解中国文化、提升专注力；③个人对书法的体验/感受，可适当补充合理细节
- 时态：描述书法属性与益处使用一般现在时，描述个人体验可搭配现在完成时、一般过去时
- 篇幅：控制在100词左右，逻辑衔接词串联内容保证连贯
2. 参考范文：
The art of the brush, also known as Chinese calligraphy, is the skill of writing Chinese characters with a brush and ink. It is a beautiful and traditional art in China.
Learning calligraphy is very helpful. It can help people feel calm and peaceful. When you practise it, you need to focus carefully, which also improves your concentration. Besides, through calligraphy, you can learn more about Chinese culture and history. I have tried calligraphy a few times. It was not easy at first, but I enjoyed the quiet time it brought me. I think it is a wonderful way to relax and learn. I will keep practising it!
【答案】
参考范文如上，符合要点齐全、语言通顺、词数要求的同类合理表达均可得分
【知识点】
英语说明文写作
一般现在时应用
要点式作文谋篇
【点评】
本题属于传统文化主题的基础英语写作题，难度适中，核心考查学生的要点整合能力和基础时态的正确使用，引导学生用英语传播中国传统文化，逻辑衔接词的合理使用可以让文章层次更清晰，避免内容零散。
【难度系数】
0.7
巩固练习
齐白石是近现代中国绘画大师,他擅长画花鸟虫鱼,笔墨简练生动,风格独特,作品如《墨虾》等深受喜爱,艺术成就极高。请写一篇英语短文介绍画家齐白石先生。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右;2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;3. 语言通顺,意思连贯,书写工整。
齐白石是近现代中国绘画大师,他擅长画花鸟虫鱼,笔墨简练生动,风格独特,作品如《墨虾》等深受喜爱,艺术成就极高。请写一篇英语短文介绍画家齐白石先生。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右;2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;3. 语言通顺,意思连贯,书写工整。
Qi Baishi was one of the greatest Chinese painters in modern times. He came from a poor family but became a master through self-study.
He was especially good at painting small living things like flowers, birds, fish and insects. His works were lively and full of life. He believed that art should be "both like and unlike the real things". His most famous works include Shrimps and Frog Sounds Ten Miles from Mountain Spring. The shrimps in his paintings look especially real and lively.
From Qi Baishi, I learn that we should never give up on our dreams. We should also observe life carefully because beauty is everywhere around us.
答案
One possible version:
Qi Baishi was one of the greatest Chinese painters in modern times. He came from a poor family but became a master through self-study.
He was especially good at painting small living things like flowers, birds, fish and insects. His works were lively and full of life. He believed that art should be "both like and unlike the real things".
His most famous works include Shrimps and Frog Sounds Ten Miles from Mountain Spring. The shrimps in his paintings look especially real and lively.
From Qi Baishi, I learn that we should never give up on our dreams. We should also observe life carefully because beauty is everywhere around us.
Qi Baishi was one of the greatest Chinese painters in modern times. He came from a poor family but became a master through self-study.
He was especially good at painting small living things like flowers, birds, fish and insects. His works were lively and full of life. He believed that art should be "both like and unlike the real things".
His most famous works include Shrimps and Frog Sounds Ten Miles from Mountain Spring. The shrimps in his paintings look especially real and lively.
From Qi Baishi, I learn that we should never give up on our dreams. We should also observe life carefully because beauty is everywhere around us.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先要明确它属于人物介绍类的短文写作，第一步先梳理题干给出的所有核心要点：齐白石是近现代中国绘画大师、擅长画花鸟虫鱼、笔墨生动风格独特、代表作有《墨虾》等，不能遗漏这些信息。接下来搭建清晰的写作逻辑：开篇先总述齐白石的身份地位，中间部分介绍他的创作特点和艺术理念，最后补充他的代表作品，还可以适当加入正向的感悟收尾，全程注意使用合适的时态（介绍已故人物多用一般过去时），控制词数在100左右，避开真实姓名校名，保证语句通顺连贯即可。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：确定文体为人物介绍类说明文，核心要求是覆盖所有题干提示信息，词数约100，时态以一般过去时为主，人称采用第三人称叙述。
2. 搭建框架：
① 首段：开门见山点明齐白石是近现代中国最伟大的画家之一，补充他出身贫寒靠自学成为大师的背景，让人物形象更饱满。
② 主体段：对应题干要点，说明他擅长创作花鸟鱼虫这类小生灵，作品鲜活有生命力，点明他独有的艺术创作理念，突出他风格独特的特点。
③ 尾段：介绍他的知名代表作，重点提及《墨虾》的特色，最后补充从他身上得到的启发，升华内容。
3. 润色核查：串联所有语句，调整衔接让行文流畅，排查语法错误，确认没有出现真实个人信息，词数符合要求，最终得到完整短文。
【答案】
One possible version:
Qi Baishi was one of the greatest Chinese painters in modern times. He came from a poor family but became a master through self-study.
He was especially good at painting small living things like flowers, birds, fish and insects. His works were lively and full of life. He believed that art should be "both like and unlike the real things".
His most famous works include Shrimps and Frog Sounds Ten Miles from Mountain Spring. The shrimps in his paintings look especially real and lively.
From Qi Baishi, I learn that we should never give up on our dreams. We should also observe life carefully because beauty is everywhere around us.
【知识点】
人物类英语写作；一般过去时运用；写作要点整合
【点评】
本题属于基础应用类写作题，题干已经给出了大部分核心写作信息，学生只需要按照人物介绍的常规逻辑串联内容，补充少量合理的背景和感悟即可完成，既考察了学生的基础英语表达能力，也能引导学生了解中国传统艺术名家的相关知识，只要不遗漏核心要点、语句通顺就能拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先要明确它属于人物介绍类的短文写作，第一步先梳理题干给出的所有核心要点：齐白石是近现代中国绘画大师、擅长画花鸟虫鱼、笔墨生动风格独特、代表作有《墨虾》等，不能遗漏这些信息。接下来搭建清晰的写作逻辑：开篇先总述齐白石的身份地位，中间部分介绍他的创作特点和艺术理念，最后补充他的代表作品，还可以适当加入正向的感悟收尾，全程注意使用合适的时态（介绍已故人物多用一般过去时），控制词数在100左右，避开真实姓名校名，保证语句通顺连贯即可。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：确定文体为人物介绍类说明文，核心要求是覆盖所有题干提示信息，词数约100，时态以一般过去时为主，人称采用第三人称叙述。
2. 搭建框架：
① 首段：开门见山点明齐白石是近现代中国最伟大的画家之一，补充他出身贫寒靠自学成为大师的背景，让人物形象更饱满。
② 主体段：对应题干要点，说明他擅长创作花鸟鱼虫这类小生灵，作品鲜活有生命力，点明他独有的艺术创作理念，突出他风格独特的特点。
③ 尾段：介绍他的知名代表作，重点提及《墨虾》的特色，最后补充从他身上得到的启发，升华内容。
3. 润色核查：串联所有语句，调整衔接让行文流畅，排查语法错误，确认没有出现真实个人信息，词数符合要求，最终得到完整短文。
【答案】
One possible version:
Qi Baishi was one of the greatest Chinese painters in modern times. He came from a poor family but became a master through self-study.
He was especially good at painting small living things like flowers, birds, fish and insects. His works were lively and full of life. He believed that art should be "both like and unlike the real things".
His most famous works include Shrimps and Frog Sounds Ten Miles from Mountain Spring. The shrimps in his paintings look especially real and lively.
From Qi Baishi, I learn that we should never give up on our dreams. We should also observe life carefully because beauty is everywhere around us.
【知识点】
人物类英语写作；一般过去时运用；写作要点整合
【点评】
本题属于基础应用类写作题，题干已经给出了大部分核心写作信息，学生只需要按照人物介绍的常规逻辑串联内容，补充少量合理的背景和感悟即可完成，既考察了学生的基础英语表达能力，也能引导学生了解中国传统艺术名家的相关知识，只要不遗漏核心要点、语句通顺就能拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
