2026年阳光学业评价九年级英语上册沪教版第73页答案
第三节 书面表达(共15分)
你校将举办一次以“温暖家庭,珍惜陪伴”为主题的英文演讲活动。请补全标题“A Meaningful
Tradition/Habit
in My Family”,写一篇80词左右的英文演讲稿,讲述你的家庭里发生的一件有意义的事或一个家庭习惯或传统。
A Meaningful
Tradition/Habit
in My Family
Good morning, dear teachers and classmates. Today I’d like to talk about something meaningful in my family.



答案

(范文1)
A Meaningful Tradition in My Family
Good morning, dear teachers and classmates. Today I’d like to talk about something meaningful in my family.
Nowadays, busy schedules and heavy work pressure stop most families from dining together regularly. Luckily, my parents and I have stuck to weekly family dinners for years. Every Sunday evening, we put aside all electronic devices, sit around the table and chat face to face. I share my troubles and progress at school, while my parents talk about their work and offer me useful advice.
Such precious time strengthens our parent-child bond and relieves my daily stress. Unlike cold online chats, these dinners foster emotional connections and fill our home with warmth. I have come to realize that having my family by my side is the greatest treasure. I will keep this tradition forever and always cherish every moment with my family.
Thank you for listening!
(范文2)
A Meaningful Habit in My Family
Good morning, dear teachers and classmates. Today I’d like to talk about something meaningful in my family.
My family goes hiking every other weekend. We walk around hills or lakes and get some fresh air. While walking, we talk about our busy lives and let go of stress and troubles together. We keep up this habit in hot summers and cold winters.
This habit greatly strengthens our family bond and keeps us together. I really enjoy this precious family time and believe we should cherish every moment spent together.

解析

【分析】
本题为半命题英文演讲稿写作,主题围绕“温暖家庭,珍惜陪伴”展开。解题思路:1. 补全标题,选择贴合主题的词汇(如Tradition、Habit等);2. 开头问候师生,引出演讲主题;3. 中间叙述家庭中具体的有意义的事、习惯或传统,需包含细节(如时间、具体行为);4. 阐述该内容对家庭的意义,紧扣“珍惜陪伴”的核心;5. 结尾总结并致谢,符合演讲稿格式,控制词数在80左右。
【解析】
1. 补全标题:选择“A Meaningful Tradition in My Family”,贴合家庭主题;
2. 开头:问候“Good morning, dear teachers and classmates.”,引出演讲主题;
3. 中间:描述家庭每周周日晚餐的传统,说明具体做法(放下电子设备,面对面交流,分享日常);
4. 阐述意义:该传统增进亲子感情,缓解压力,体现家庭温暖;
5. 结尾:总结要珍惜家庭陪伴,致谢“Thank you for listening!”,控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
A Meaningful Tradition in My Family
Good morning, dear teachers and classmates. Today I’d like to talk about something meaningful in my family.
Nowadays, busy schedules stop most families from dining together. Luckily, my parents and I stick to weekly Sunday dinners. We put aside phones, sit around the table and chat face to face. I share school troubles, while my parents talk about work and give advice.
This precious time strengthens our bond and relieves stress. I realize family by my side is the greatest treasure. I’ll keep this tradition forever.
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语半命题书面表达、家庭主题英文写作、英文演讲稿格式
【点评】
本文紧扣“温暖家庭,珍惜陪伴”主题,补全标题合理,内容具体有细节,情感真挚,符合演讲稿的文体要求,语言通顺,词数达标,很好地传递了珍惜家庭陪伴的主旨。
【难度系数】
0.5