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(2025·江苏南京第二十九中学调研改编)4月23日是世界读书日(World Reading Day),为进一步提升学生的阅读意识,培养良好的阅读习惯,我校英文俱乐部开展了以"Reading makes me better"为题的研讨活动,旨在鼓励更多学生爱上阅读。请根据提示写一篇英文短文,分享你对阅读的看法和建议。
【注意】1. 包含所有要点,可适当发挥,文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
2. 80 词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Reading makes me better
Reading ten thousand books is like travelling ten thousand miles.
【注意】1. 包含所有要点,可适当发挥,文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
2. 80 词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Reading makes me better
Reading ten thousand books is like travelling ten thousand miles.
I like books on history best. From these books, I can learn about the past and find that many problems we face now are similar to those in the past and that their solutions are also useful for the problems today. Reading more books can not only help us learn more knowledge and new skills to deal with the difficulties in life, but also broaden our horizons and let us know more about the world. Therefore, we should read more books every day and take notes while reading.
答案
One possible version:
Reading makes me better
Reading ten thousand books is like travelling ten thousand miles.
I like books on history best. From these books, I can learn about the past and find that many problems we face now are similar to those in the past and that their solutions are also useful for the problems today.
Reading more books can not only help us learn more knowledge and new skills to deal with the difficulties in life, but also broaden our horizons and let us know more about the world. Therefore, we should read more books every day and take notes while reading.
Reading makes me better
Reading ten thousand books is like travelling ten thousand miles.
I like books on history best. From these books, I can learn about the past and find that many problems we face now are similar to those in the past and that their solutions are also useful for the problems today.
Reading more books can not only help us learn more knowledge and new skills to deal with the difficulties in life, but also broaden our horizons and let us know more about the world. Therefore, we should read more books every day and take notes while reading.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇提示类英语话题作文，解题时首先要梳理清楚题干要求的三个必写要点：1. 说明自己最喜欢的书籍类型并阐述理由；2. 解释多读书的重要意义；3. 给同学们提出合理的阅读建议。首先承接题目已经给出的开篇谚语，先自然引出自己的阅读喜好，对应提示选择历史类书籍说明收获；接下来结合题干给出的提示内容，把读书能学习新技能应对困难、拓宽视野了解世界的好处用连贯的英文逻辑串联起来；最后给出贴合学生实际的阅读建议，全程注意控制总词数在80左右，不要出现真实个人信息，保证语句通顺无语法错误即可完成写作。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接给定开头，首先点明自己最喜爱的书籍类型是历史类，补充说明从历史书籍中可以了解过往，从过去的事件经验中获得解决当下问题的思路，完成第一个要点的表述。
2. 使用not only...but also...的并列句型，把提示中多读书的两个核心好处整合起来：一方面可以帮助我们学习新知识和新技能应对生活困难，另一方面能拓宽视野、增进对世界的了解，完成第二个要点的论述。
3. 顺承前文的论述，给出符合学生实际的阅读建议，比如坚持每日阅读、阅读时养成记笔记的好习惯，自然收尾，覆盖全部要点，整体行文流畅符合主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
Reading makes me better
Reading ten thousand books is like travelling ten thousand miles.
I like books on history best. From these books, I can learn about the past and find that many problems we face now are similar to those in the past and that their solutions are also useful for the problems today.
Reading more books can not only help us learn more knowledge and new skills to deal with the difficulties in life, but also broaden our horizons and let us know more about the world. Therefore, we should read more books every day and take notes while reading.
【知识点】
英语话题写作
并列句型运用
阅读话题词汇
【点评】
本题结合世界读书日的热点情境命题，所有核心要点都给出了中文提示，降低了写作门槛，主要考查学生将中文提示转化为通顺英文表达的能力，学生写作时注意不要遗漏要点，适当使用加分并列句型可以让作文质量更高，同时要注意控制词数符合题干要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇提示类英语话题作文，解题时首先要梳理清楚题干要求的三个必写要点：1. 说明自己最喜欢的书籍类型并阐述理由；2. 解释多读书的重要意义；3. 给同学们提出合理的阅读建议。首先承接题目已经给出的开篇谚语，先自然引出自己的阅读喜好，对应提示选择历史类书籍说明收获；接下来结合题干给出的提示内容，把读书能学习新技能应对困难、拓宽视野了解世界的好处用连贯的英文逻辑串联起来；最后给出贴合学生实际的阅读建议，全程注意控制总词数在80左右，不要出现真实个人信息，保证语句通顺无语法错误即可完成写作。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接给定开头，首先点明自己最喜爱的书籍类型是历史类，补充说明从历史书籍中可以了解过往，从过去的事件经验中获得解决当下问题的思路，完成第一个要点的表述。
2. 使用not only...but also...的并列句型，把提示中多读书的两个核心好处整合起来：一方面可以帮助我们学习新知识和新技能应对生活困难，另一方面能拓宽视野、增进对世界的了解，完成第二个要点的论述。
3. 顺承前文的论述，给出符合学生实际的阅读建议，比如坚持每日阅读、阅读时养成记笔记的好习惯，自然收尾，覆盖全部要点，整体行文流畅符合主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
Reading makes me better
Reading ten thousand books is like travelling ten thousand miles.
I like books on history best. From these books, I can learn about the past and find that many problems we face now are similar to those in the past and that their solutions are also useful for the problems today.
Reading more books can not only help us learn more knowledge and new skills to deal with the difficulties in life, but also broaden our horizons and let us know more about the world. Therefore, we should read more books every day and take notes while reading.
【知识点】
英语话题写作
并列句型运用
阅读话题词汇
【点评】
本题结合世界读书日的热点情境命题，所有核心要点都给出了中文提示，降低了写作门槛，主要考查学生将中文提示转化为通顺英文表达的能力，学生写作时注意不要遗漏要点，适当使用加分并列句型可以让作文质量更高，同时要注意控制词数符合题干要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
