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七、书面表达(满分 25 分)
越来越多的人选择云游。有的同学喜欢线上云游，有的同学则喜欢线下旅游。21 世纪英文报对在校学生进行了关于“Online Tour”的问卷调查。请你根据调查问卷和你的实际情况，写一篇英语短文投稿。
Questionnaire
1. Do you like online tour or not? Put a tick (√) or a cross (×) in the box. □ONLINE TOUR
2. What do you think of it?
3. Why do you like/dislike it? (at least three points)
4. What's your travel plan for this summer?
注意事项：1. 短文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数 100 左右，作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 短文中不得提及真实人名、校名等相关信息。
Online Tour
Recently, more and more people choose online tour.
越来越多的人选择云游。有的同学喜欢线上云游，有的同学则喜欢线下旅游。21 世纪英文报对在校学生进行了关于“Online Tour”的问卷调查。请你根据调查问卷和你的实际情况，写一篇英语短文投稿。
Questionnaire
1. Do you like online tour or not? Put a tick (√) or a cross (×) in the box. □ONLINE TOUR
2. What do you think of it?
3. Why do you like/dislike it? (at least three points)
4. What's your travel plan for this summer?
注意事项：1. 短文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数 100 左右，作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 短文中不得提及真实人名、校名等相关信息。
Online Tour
Recently, more and more people choose online tour.
答案
七、书面表达
Online Tour
Recently, more and more people choose online tour. I also prefer this new way of travelling. Taking an online tour is popular and easy now.
There are several advantages of travelling online. First, the internet is everywhere and people can be connected to it easily. Then, there are different kinds of materials online, like videos, documentaries, and live programmes. Moreover, taking an online tour is money - saving. In this way, travelling abroad costs us less.
In my opinion, online tour offers me a chance to see different places of interest and opens up a new world to me. This summer I plan to take an online tour of the whole world.
Online Tour
Recently, more and more people choose online tour. I also prefer this new way of travelling. Taking an online tour is popular and easy now.
There are several advantages of travelling online. First, the internet is everywhere and people can be connected to it easily. Then, there are different kinds of materials online, like videos, documentaries, and live programmes. Moreover, taking an online tour is money - saving. In this way, travelling abroad costs us less.
In my opinion, online tour offers me a chance to see different places of interest and opens up a new world to me. This summer I plan to take an online tour of the whole world.
解析
【分析】
首先明确这是一篇英语投稿类书面表达，需紧扣问卷的四个核心问题及题目要求创作。第一步，确定写作立场：选择支持线上云游，便于展开积极的论述角度；第二步，回应“对线上云游的看法”，用简洁表述点明其流行、便捷的特点；第三步，构思至少三个喜欢的原因：从网络普及带来的便捷性、线上多样的资源（视频、纪录片等）、成本低廉这三个维度切入，既满足题目“至少三点”的要求，又内容充实合理；第四步，制定贴合主题的暑期旅行计划，比如云游全球。写作时需用合适的连接词梳理逻辑，控制词数，结合给定开头完成连贯的短文。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，直接表明立场与初步看法：“I also prefer this new way of travelling. Taking an online tour is popular and easy now.” 回应问卷的前两个问题，清晰传递态度。
2. 主体部分用逻辑连接词分三点阐述原因：
以“First”引出便捷性：“the internet is everywhere and people can be connected to it easily.”
以“Then”说明资源丰富性：“there are different kinds of materials online, like videos, documentaries, and live programmes.”
以“Moreover”强调成本优势：“taking an online tour is money - saving. In this way, travelling abroad costs us less.”
3. 结尾补充对线上云游的整体感受，再点明暑期旅行计划：“In my opinion, online tour offers me a chance to see different places of interest and opens up a new world to me. This summer I plan to take an online tour of the whole world.” 完整回应第四个问卷问题，收束全文。
【答案】
Online Tour
Recently, more and more people choose online tour. I also prefer this new way of travelling. Taking an online tour is popular and easy now.
There are several advantages of travelling online. First, the internet is everywhere and people can be connected to it easily. Then, there are different kinds of materials online, like videos, documentaries, and live programmes. Moreover, taking an online tour is money - saving. In this way, travelling abroad costs us less.
In my opinion, online tour offers me a chance to see different places of interest and opens up a new world to me. This summer I plan to take an online tour of the whole world.
【知识点】
1. 英语应用文写作
2. 观点类表达句型
3. 旅行主题词汇
【点评】
本文完全覆盖题目要求的所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯。用First, Then, Moreover等连接词使原因阐述层次分明，衔接自然；用词准确地道，符合投稿类短文的正式流畅要求，词数也控制在规定范围内，是一篇贴合题目要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确这是一篇英语投稿类书面表达，需紧扣问卷的四个核心问题及题目要求创作。第一步，确定写作立场：选择支持线上云游，便于展开积极的论述角度；第二步，回应“对线上云游的看法”，用简洁表述点明其流行、便捷的特点；第三步，构思至少三个喜欢的原因：从网络普及带来的便捷性、线上多样的资源（视频、纪录片等）、成本低廉这三个维度切入，既满足题目“至少三点”的要求，又内容充实合理；第四步，制定贴合主题的暑期旅行计划，比如云游全球。写作时需用合适的连接词梳理逻辑，控制词数，结合给定开头完成连贯的短文。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，直接表明立场与初步看法：“I also prefer this new way of travelling. Taking an online tour is popular and easy now.” 回应问卷的前两个问题，清晰传递态度。
2. 主体部分用逻辑连接词分三点阐述原因：
以“First”引出便捷性：“the internet is everywhere and people can be connected to it easily.”
以“Then”说明资源丰富性：“there are different kinds of materials online, like videos, documentaries, and live programmes.”
以“Moreover”强调成本优势：“taking an online tour is money - saving. In this way, travelling abroad costs us less.”
3. 结尾补充对线上云游的整体感受，再点明暑期旅行计划：“In my opinion, online tour offers me a chance to see different places of interest and opens up a new world to me. This summer I plan to take an online tour of the whole world.” 完整回应第四个问卷问题，收束全文。
【答案】
Online Tour
Recently, more and more people choose online tour. I also prefer this new way of travelling. Taking an online tour is popular and easy now.
There are several advantages of travelling online. First, the internet is everywhere and people can be connected to it easily. Then, there are different kinds of materials online, like videos, documentaries, and live programmes. Moreover, taking an online tour is money - saving. In this way, travelling abroad costs us less.
In my opinion, online tour offers me a chance to see different places of interest and opens up a new world to me. This summer I plan to take an online tour of the whole world.
【知识点】
1. 英语应用文写作
2. 观点类表达句型
3. 旅行主题词汇
【点评】
本文完全覆盖题目要求的所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯。用First, Then, Moreover等连接词使原因阐述层次分明，衔接自然；用词准确地道，符合投稿类短文的正式流畅要求，词数也控制在规定范围内，是一篇贴合题目要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
