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假设你将参加校报举办的 Alice in Wonderland 故事续写比赛,请根据下表中的信息,适当发挥想象,用英语写一篇 70 词左右的记叙文。

注意:
1. 短文必须包含所有要点,可以适当发挥,不要逐条翻译;
2. 开头已经给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
After eating the cake, Alice finally got the key and got out of the garden.

One possible version:
After eating the cake, Alice finally got the key and got out of the garden. Alice went through the forest and swam across a river. Finally,she arrived at a castle on fire. She saw some heavy smoke from the windows and heard someone shouting for help. Suddenly she heard a sound behind the bushes. To her surprise,it was the rabbit she met before. He hurt his leg badly and couldn't move. Alice helped him out and decided to take care of him.

【分析】本题要求续写《爱丽丝梦游仙境》的故事，需结合表格中的所有信息（前往着火的城堡、看到浓烟与呼救声、听到树丛后的低语、再次遇到受伤的兔子），以给定开头为基础，用英语写70词左右的记叙文。解题思路：先承接开头，依次描述爱丽丝的行程，再呈现所见所闻，接着引出再次遇到的受伤兔子，最后加入合理的后续动作，确保语言连贯、要点齐全，符合故事语境。
【解析】首先承接给定开头，用“Alice went through the forest and swam across a river”对应表格中“穿过森林，游过小河”；接着写“Finally, she arrived at a castle on fire”对应“抵达着火的城堡”；然后描述看到的“saw some heavy smoke from the windows”和听到的“heard someone shouting for help”对应“看到浓烟、有人呼救”；再写“Suddenly she heard a sound behind the bushes”对应“听到树丛后的低语”；之后引出“it was the rabbit she met before. He hurt his leg badly”对应“再次遇到受伤的兔子”；最后加入合理发挥“Alice helped him out and decided to take care of him”，确保总词数符合要求，语言准确连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
After eating the cake, Alice finally got the key and got out of the garden. Alice went through the forest and swam across a river. Finally,she arrived at a castle on fire. She saw some heavy smoke from the windows and heard someone shouting for help. Suddenly she heard a sound behind the bushes. To her surprise,it was the rabbit she met before. He hurt his leg badly and couldn't move. Alice helped him out and decided to take care of him.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、故事续写
【点评】本题紧扣经典故事背景，要求整合给定信息进行合理续写，既考查学生对故事语境的把握能力，又考查英语书面表达的连贯性和要点覆盖能力，是典型的故事类书面表达题。
【难度系数】0.5