六、写话练习。
请以"Our dreams"为题写一段话,要求语句通顺、书写规范,不少于8句话。
请以"Our dreams"为题写一段话,要求语句通顺、书写规范,不少于8句话。
答案
Our dreams
Everyone has their own dreams. My classmate Tom wants to be a football player. He is good at playing football and he practices it every afternoon after school. Lily loves painting very much. She wants to be an artist and she is going to take more painting lessons. My friend Jack wants to be a policeman. He wants to help people keep safe. As for me, I want to be a teacher. I like children and I hope I can teach them lots of useful knowledge. To make my dream come true, I'm going to study hard every day. Dreams are important to us. They can make us work harder and live a meaningful life.
Everyone has their own dreams. My classmate Tom wants to be a football player. He is good at playing football and he practices it every afternoon after school. Lily loves painting very much. She wants to be an artist and she is going to take more painting lessons. My friend Jack wants to be a policeman. He wants to help people keep safe. As for me, I want to be a teacher. I like children and I hope I can teach them lots of useful knowledge. To make my dream come true, I'm going to study hard every day. Dreams are important to us. They can make us work harder and live a meaningful life.
解析
本次写话围绕“Our dreams”展开,可先点明每个人都有梦想,接着介绍自己和身边同学的不同梦想,说明产生梦想的原因以及为实现梦想的计划,最后点明梦想的意义,注意使用本单元所学的“I want to be...”“I'm going to...”等句型,保证语句通顺,不少于8句话。
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