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人和动物共同生活在这个美丽的地球,互相影响,互相依存。某英文报正在举办以"Saving Wild Animals"为题的征文活动,请根据以下问题提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示:1. What danger do wild animals face? (at least 2 points)
2. Why do we have to protect wild animals? (at least 2 points)
3. As students, what action can we take to protect wild animals?(at least 3 points)
要求:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;2. 必须包括提示中所有信息,并适当发挥;3. 词数100左右(已给出的开头不计入总词数);4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名、地名等。
Saving Wild Animals
Humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of them are in danger.
人和动物共同生活在这个美丽的地球,互相影响,互相依存。某英文报正在举办以"Saving Wild Animals"为题的征文活动,请根据以下问题提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示:1. What danger do wild animals face? (at least 2 points)
2. Why do we have to protect wild animals? (at least 2 points)
3. As students, what action can we take to protect wild animals?(at least 3 points)
要求:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;2. 必须包括提示中所有信息,并适当发挥;3. 词数100左右(已给出的开头不计入总词数);4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名、地名等。
Saving Wild Animals
Humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of them are in danger.
Many wild animals don't have enough places to live in. People keep taking their living places to make more space for farms and buildings. This will lead to less and less food and space for wildlife. Moreover, wild animals face serious problems in the wild. People hunt wild animals for their fur, bones or other parts of their bodies.
We protect wild animals not only because wild animals are our friends but also because wild animals help keep a balance between humans and nature. If there are no wild animals, there will be no humans.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy fur coats any more. Second, we can write to the government and give some advice. Last but not least, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife.
We protect wild animals not only because wild animals are our friends but also because wild animals help keep a balance between humans and nature. If there are no wild animals, there will be no humans.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy fur coats any more. Second, we can write to the government and give some advice. Last but not least, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife.
答案
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇议论文。②时态:以一般现在时为主。③提示:写作要点已给出,应根据提示要点进行表达,不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍野生动物面临的危险;第二步,具体阐述为什么要保护野生动物;第三步,介绍保护野生动物的措施。
[词句积累]
①keep doing 坚持做 ②lead to 导致 ③not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且…… ④call on 号召
⑤We protect wild animals not only because wild animals are our friends but also because wild animals help keep a balance between humans and nature. (not only ... but also ... 连接并列的原因状语从句)
⑥If there are no wild animals, there will be no humans. (if 引导条件状语从句)
One possible version:
Saving Wild Animals
Humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of them are in danger. Many wild animals don't have enough places to live in. People keep taking their living places to make more space for farms and buildings. This will lead to less and less food and space for wildlife. Moreover, wild animals face serious problems in the wild. People hunt wild animals for their fur, bones or other parts of their bodies.
We protect wild animals not only because wild animals are our friends but also because wild animals help keep a balance between humans and nature. If there are no wild animals, there will be no humans.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy fur coats any more. Second, we can write to the government and give some advice. Last but not least, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife.
[审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇议论文。②时态:以一般现在时为主。③提示:写作要点已给出,应根据提示要点进行表达,不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍野生动物面临的危险;第二步,具体阐述为什么要保护野生动物;第三步,介绍保护野生动物的措施。
[词句积累]
①keep doing 坚持做 ②lead to 导致 ③not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且…… ④call on 号召
⑤We protect wild animals not only because wild animals are our friends but also because wild animals help keep a balance between humans and nature. (not only ... but also ... 连接并列的原因状语从句)
⑥If there are no wild animals, there will be no humans. (if 引导条件状语从句)
One possible version:
Saving Wild Animals
Humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of them are in danger. Many wild animals don't have enough places to live in. People keep taking their living places to make more space for farms and buildings. This will lead to less and less food and space for wildlife. Moreover, wild animals face serious problems in the wild. People hunt wild animals for their fur, bones or other parts of their bodies.
We protect wild animals not only because wild animals are our friends but also because wild animals help keep a balance between humans and nature. If there are no wild animals, there will be no humans.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy fur coats any more. Second, we can write to the government and give some advice. Last but not least, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先先完成审题：第一确定体裁是生态保护主题的议论文，整体以一般现在时作为主时态，所有给定提示点必须全部覆盖，不能遗漏。接下来梳理写作逻辑：第一步先承接题目给出的开头，先写野生动物面临的危险，凑够至少2点，优先选栖息地被人类占用、人类非法捕猎这两个常见好写的角度，补充简单的后果让内容更饱满；第二步过渡到保护野生动物的原因，写至少2点，比如野生动物是人类的伙伴、野生动物能维持生态平衡，还可以用简单的条件句强化保护的必要性；第三步落脚到学生身份可执行的行动，列够至少3点贴合学生日常的做法，最后整体调整语句衔接，控制总词数在100左右，避开真实个人信息即可完成写作。
【解析】
写作可按照三步完成：
1. 描述现状：承接给定开头，点明野生动物的两大生存危机：一是人类持续扩张农田、建筑占用野生动物栖息地，导致它们的生存空间和食物不断减少；二是部分人类为获取皮毛、骨骼等非法猎杀野生动物。
2. 阐述意义：用not only...but also...结构衔接两个保护原因：一方面野生动物是人类的好朋友，另一方面野生动物能维持人与自然的生态平衡，补充if引导的条件状语从句点明“没有野生动物就没有人类”，强化保护的紧迫性。
3. 列举行动：分三点说明学生可采取的措施：第一拒绝购买野生动物皮毛制品，第二可以给政府写信提出保护建议，第三向身边人宣传科普野生动物保护的重要性，最后调整语句让上下文连贯，核对所有提示点都覆盖，词数符合要求即可。
【答案】
Saving Wild Animals
Humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of them are in danger. Many wild animals don't have enough places to live in. People keep taking their living places to make more space for farms and buildings. This will lead to less and less food and space for wildlife. Moreover, wild animals face serious problems in the wild. People hunt wild animals for their fur, bones or other parts of their bodies.
We protect wild animals not only because wild animals are our friends but also because wild animals help keep a balance between humans and nature. If there are no wild animals, there will be no humans.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy fur coats any more. Second, we can write to the government and give some advice. Last but not least, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife.
【知识点】
生态类英语写作，议论文谋篇布局，状语从句运用
【点评】
本题属于要点提示类的话题作文，写作框架指向清晰，按照“现存问题-保护意义-落地行动”的逻辑展开即可，考生只需要覆盖全部给定要点，适当运用所学的并列结构、状语从句提升表达丰富度，控制词数符合要求就能拿到不错的分数，同时题目也能引导学生建立保护野生动物、维护生态平衡的意识。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题首先先完成审题：第一确定体裁是生态保护主题的议论文，整体以一般现在时作为主时态，所有给定提示点必须全部覆盖，不能遗漏。接下来梳理写作逻辑：第一步先承接题目给出的开头，先写野生动物面临的危险，凑够至少2点，优先选栖息地被人类占用、人类非法捕猎这两个常见好写的角度，补充简单的后果让内容更饱满；第二步过渡到保护野生动物的原因，写至少2点，比如野生动物是人类的伙伴、野生动物能维持生态平衡，还可以用简单的条件句强化保护的必要性；第三步落脚到学生身份可执行的行动，列够至少3点贴合学生日常的做法，最后整体调整语句衔接，控制总词数在100左右，避开真实个人信息即可完成写作。
【解析】
写作可按照三步完成：
1. 描述现状：承接给定开头，点明野生动物的两大生存危机：一是人类持续扩张农田、建筑占用野生动物栖息地，导致它们的生存空间和食物不断减少；二是部分人类为获取皮毛、骨骼等非法猎杀野生动物。
2. 阐述意义：用not only...but also...结构衔接两个保护原因：一方面野生动物是人类的好朋友，另一方面野生动物能维持人与自然的生态平衡，补充if引导的条件状语从句点明“没有野生动物就没有人类”，强化保护的紧迫性。
3. 列举行动：分三点说明学生可采取的措施：第一拒绝购买野生动物皮毛制品，第二可以给政府写信提出保护建议，第三向身边人宣传科普野生动物保护的重要性，最后调整语句让上下文连贯，核对所有提示点都覆盖，词数符合要求即可。
【答案】
Saving Wild Animals
Humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of them are in danger. Many wild animals don't have enough places to live in. People keep taking their living places to make more space for farms and buildings. This will lead to less and less food and space for wildlife. Moreover, wild animals face serious problems in the wild. People hunt wild animals for their fur, bones or other parts of their bodies.
We protect wild animals not only because wild animals are our friends but also because wild animals help keep a balance between humans and nature. If there are no wild animals, there will be no humans.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy fur coats any more. Second, we can write to the government and give some advice. Last but not least, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife.
【知识点】
生态类英语写作，议论文谋篇布局，状语从句运用
【点评】
本题属于要点提示类的话题作文，写作框架指向清晰，按照“现存问题-保护意义-落地行动”的逻辑展开即可，考生只需要覆盖全部给定要点，适当运用所学的并列结构、状语从句提升表达丰富度，控制词数符合要求就能拿到不错的分数，同时题目也能引导学生建立保护野生动物、维护生态平衡的意识。
【难度系数】
0.6
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盐城湿地的四季各有风情:春有候鸟归来,夏有芦苇依依,秋有湿地鎏金,冬有鹤鹿相伴。这片生态宝地滋养着生灵,也馈赠着美景。我们既要欣赏它的四季之韵,更要守护它的生态之安。如何让这份美好长久延续?请以"Protect Yancheng Wetland, Enjoy Its Beauty"为题,写一篇英语短文。
Q1. Which season of Yancheng Wetland do you like best, and why?
Q2. Why are wetlands so important to Yancheng? (be home to red-crowned cranes and elks ... /store water ... /prevent floods ... /...)
Q3. What can we do to keep Yancheng Wetland healthy?
注意:1. 内容须涵盖所有问题要点,可作适当发挥,使行文连贯、通顺;2. 词数90左右(已给出的开头部分不计入总词数);3. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Protect Yancheng Wetland, Enjoy Its Beauty
Yancheng Wetland is a great treasure in Jiangsu with unique beauty in each season.
盐城湿地的四季各有风情:春有候鸟归来,夏有芦苇依依,秋有湿地鎏金,冬有鹤鹿相伴。这片生态宝地滋养着生灵,也馈赠着美景。我们既要欣赏它的四季之韵,更要守护它的生态之安。如何让这份美好长久延续?请以"Protect Yancheng Wetland, Enjoy Its Beauty"为题,写一篇英语短文。
Q1. Which season of Yancheng Wetland do you like best, and why?
Q2. Why are wetlands so important to Yancheng? (be home to red-crowned cranes and elks ... /store water ... /prevent floods ... /...)
Q3. What can we do to keep Yancheng Wetland healthy?
注意:1. 内容须涵盖所有问题要点,可作适当发挥,使行文连贯、通顺;2. 词数90左右(已给出的开头部分不计入总词数);3. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Protect Yancheng Wetland, Enjoy Its Beauty
Yancheng Wetland is a great treasure in Jiangsu with unique beauty in each season.
I like winter best because I can watch red-crowned cranes dance gracefully in the snow and spot elks wandering through the reeds. It feels like a magical winter wonderland!
Wetlands are super important to Yancheng. They're home to rare animals like red-crowned cranes and elks.
Also, they store water and prevent floods, keeping our city safe.
To keep the wetland healthy, we can do small things: never litter when visiting, tell friends to protect it, and plant more native plants.
Let's work together to make Yancheng Wetland beautiful forever!
答案
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①题材:湿地保护。②时态:一般现在时。③提示:写作要点已给出,应注意不要遗漏提示的信息,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,介绍盐城湿地的四季之美,重点表达对冬季特色景观的喜爱;第二步,分析湿地的重要性,从“珍稀动物栖息地”和“调节生态、防洪护城”两个方面进行详细介绍;第三步,提出具体保护措施,发出共同行动的倡议。
[词句积累]
①unique beauty 独特的美 ②dance gracefully 优雅起舞
③wander through 漫步穿过 ④be home to ... 是……的栖息地 ⑤rare animals 珍稀动物 ⑥prevent floods 预防洪水 ⑦native plants 本土植物
⑧I like winter best because I can watch red-crowned cranes dance gracefully in the snow and spot elks wandering through the reeds. (because 引导原因状语从句)
⑨To keep the wetland healthy, we can do small things: never litter when visiting, tell friends to protect it, and plant more native plants. (动词不定式"To keep the wetland healthy"作目的状语)
One possible version:
Protect Yancheng Wetland, Enjoy Its Beauty
Yancheng Wetland is a great treasure in Jiangsu with unique beauty in each season. I like winter best because I can watch red-crowned cranes dance gracefully in the snow and spot elks wandering through the reeds. It feels like a magical winter wonderland!
Wetlands are super important to Yancheng. They're home to rare animals like red-crowned cranes and elks. Also, they store water and prevent floods, keeping our city safe.
To keep the wetland healthy, we can do small things: never litter when visiting, tell friends to protect it, and plant more native plants. Let's work together to make Yancheng Wetland beautiful forever!
[审题步骤]
①题材:湿地保护。②时态:一般现在时。③提示:写作要点已给出,应注意不要遗漏提示的信息,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,介绍盐城湿地的四季之美,重点表达对冬季特色景观的喜爱;第二步,分析湿地的重要性,从“珍稀动物栖息地”和“调节生态、防洪护城”两个方面进行详细介绍;第三步,提出具体保护措施,发出共同行动的倡议。
[词句积累]
①unique beauty 独特的美 ②dance gracefully 优雅起舞
③wander through 漫步穿过 ④be home to ... 是……的栖息地 ⑤rare animals 珍稀动物 ⑥prevent floods 预防洪水 ⑦native plants 本土植物
⑧I like winter best because I can watch red-crowned cranes dance gracefully in the snow and spot elks wandering through the reeds. (because 引导原因状语从句)
⑨To keep the wetland healthy, we can do small things: never litter when visiting, tell friends to protect it, and plant more native plants. (动词不定式"To keep the wetland healthy"作目的状语)
One possible version:
Protect Yancheng Wetland, Enjoy Its Beauty
Yancheng Wetland is a great treasure in Jiangsu with unique beauty in each season. I like winter best because I can watch red-crowned cranes dance gracefully in the snow and spot elks wandering through the reeds. It feels like a magical winter wonderland!
Wetlands are super important to Yancheng. They're home to rare animals like red-crowned cranes and elks. Also, they store water and prevent floods, keeping our city safe.
To keep the wetland healthy, we can do small things: never litter when visiting, tell friends to protect it, and plant more native plants. Let's work together to make Yancheng Wetland beautiful forever!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先要明确核心要求：必须覆盖题干给出的三个问题要点，时态以一般现在时为主，词数控制在90左右，不能出现个人身份相关信息。首先第一步先回应第一个问题，选择一个湿地的季节说明喜爱的理由，优先选有特色景观的冬季，结合鹤鹿的元素书写，贴合题干给出的湿地四季设定；第二步回应第二个问题，按照提示给出的参考方向，依次说明湿地是珍稀动物栖息地、储水防洪的重要作用，讲清湿地对盐城的价值；第三步回应第三个问题，列举普通人可落地的具体保护行动，最后发出倡议，调整语句让内容衔接自然，符合写作逻辑。
【解析】
写作按照三步完成：
1. 承接已给出的开头句，首先回答Q1：明确表达自己最喜爱冬季，说明原因是可以观赏丹顶鹤在雪中优雅起舞，还能看到麋鹿在芦苇间漫步，点出冬季湿地的独特氛围感。
2. 接着回答Q2：点明湿地对盐城至关重要，依次说明两点核心价值：一是它是丹顶鹤、麋鹿等珍稀动物的家园，二是它可以储水、预防洪水，守护城市的安全。
3. 最后回答Q3：用不定式作目的状语引出保护湿地的具体举措，比如游览时不随手丢弃垃圾、向身边的朋友宣传湿地保护理念、多种植本土植物，最后发出共同行动守护湿地长久美好的倡议，通读全文调整语句流畅度，核对所有要点都覆盖，词数符合要求，没有出现个人身份相关信息。
【答案】
Protect Yancheng Wetland, Enjoy Its Beauty
Yancheng Wetland is a great treasure in Jiangsu with unique beauty in each season. I like winter best because I can watch red-crowned cranes dance gracefully in the snow and spot elks wandering through the reeds. It feels like a magical winter wonderland!
Wetlands are super important to Yancheng. They're home to rare animals like red-crowned cranes and elks. Also, they store water and prevent floods, keeping our city safe.
To keep the wetland healthy, we can do small things: never litter when visiting, tell friends to protect it, and plant more native plants. Let's work together to make Yancheng Wetland beautiful forever!
【知识点】
英语提示类写作，生态主题词汇，状语从句运用
【点评】
本题属于半开放式提示作文，题干明确给出三个问题作为写作框架，既避免学生写作跑题，也给学生留出了合理的细节发挥空间，既考查学生的英语语句组织、要点整合能力，也能引导学生建立生态环境保护的意识，写作时注意不要遗漏给定要点，控制词数，保证行文连贯即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题首先要明确核心要求：必须覆盖题干给出的三个问题要点，时态以一般现在时为主，词数控制在90左右，不能出现个人身份相关信息。首先第一步先回应第一个问题，选择一个湿地的季节说明喜爱的理由，优先选有特色景观的冬季，结合鹤鹿的元素书写，贴合题干给出的湿地四季设定；第二步回应第二个问题，按照提示给出的参考方向，依次说明湿地是珍稀动物栖息地、储水防洪的重要作用，讲清湿地对盐城的价值；第三步回应第三个问题，列举普通人可落地的具体保护行动，最后发出倡议，调整语句让内容衔接自然，符合写作逻辑。
【解析】
写作按照三步完成：
1. 承接已给出的开头句，首先回答Q1：明确表达自己最喜爱冬季，说明原因是可以观赏丹顶鹤在雪中优雅起舞，还能看到麋鹿在芦苇间漫步，点出冬季湿地的独特氛围感。
2. 接着回答Q2：点明湿地对盐城至关重要，依次说明两点核心价值：一是它是丹顶鹤、麋鹿等珍稀动物的家园，二是它可以储水、预防洪水，守护城市的安全。
3. 最后回答Q3：用不定式作目的状语引出保护湿地的具体举措，比如游览时不随手丢弃垃圾、向身边的朋友宣传湿地保护理念、多种植本土植物，最后发出共同行动守护湿地长久美好的倡议，通读全文调整语句流畅度，核对所有要点都覆盖，词数符合要求，没有出现个人身份相关信息。
【答案】
Protect Yancheng Wetland, Enjoy Its Beauty
Yancheng Wetland is a great treasure in Jiangsu with unique beauty in each season. I like winter best because I can watch red-crowned cranes dance gracefully in the snow and spot elks wandering through the reeds. It feels like a magical winter wonderland!
Wetlands are super important to Yancheng. They're home to rare animals like red-crowned cranes and elks. Also, they store water and prevent floods, keeping our city safe.
To keep the wetland healthy, we can do small things: never litter when visiting, tell friends to protect it, and plant more native plants. Let's work together to make Yancheng Wetland beautiful forever!
【知识点】
英语提示类写作，生态主题词汇，状语从句运用
【点评】
本题属于半开放式提示作文，题干明确给出三个问题作为写作框架，既避免学生写作跑题，也给学生留出了合理的细节发挥空间，既考查学生的英语语句组织、要点整合能力，也能引导学生建立生态环境保护的意识，写作时注意不要遗漏给定要点，控制词数，保证行文连贯即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
